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Nobody by Maze54

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Malissa
I think that your poem is beautiful. I have felt that way for a while. I just now got the courage to erase my ex's phone number from my phone. And I was loking for something that might make me understand what I was feeling. All Ihave to say is thank you! Malissa
lost
your poem speaks out what i feel now. lets just hope like the saying goes. "what goes around comes around. " its sad but true.
nobody
Hey. How ya doin? well just wanted to tell you I love your poem. I know i can't say I know how you feel because I'm not you but i can say that I feel the exact same emotions and feeling you wrote down with a special person. Thanks!
Someone
one of the greatest poems I've ever read. it made me cry
Kara
It kept a positive attitude on the look of things. you want it to end. but knowing the nextday might change. something better will come a long. you didnt die in writting. if that makes since. i really liked it.
drea
my love of two years has just left me,i ache and pine for her every single living hour,the lights she lit up inside me have gone out,i feel alone and lifeless,this poem touched me and i sent it to her.
liza
this poem really touches my heart. coz at this very moment im in that situation. i love him but he left me. just because of the fact that he wants to explore. GOD damn it! he uses me. he made me a "sex slave"!
Katherine
I really fill you. thats how i fill right now. it was a really good poem.
Diana
This peoem really touched me. I felt every word and it almost made me cry. I'm waiting for my wounds to heal,and for that "nobody" to become somebody.
paul
absolulty exelentt its time 4 a change thats a big push 2 wards it thank u out with old in with new
Dot
that poem was soo good it has touched my heart and the hearts of my friend plz keep writing
Brea
Well. where do I start? I nominated this poem because it really speaks from the truth of the heart. Once we are loved by someone, and that someone leaves us, we quickly become a nobody to ourselves. And when, in this poem, it is mentioned that the nobody is the writer, it really made me think. The author is right. The only one that sees the broken-hearted as a nobody is that person, themself. I know that, because I am that nobody. And this poem was almost like I was writing to myself. I love poems that I can relate to, so it makes perfect sense as to why I liked this one so much. You did an EXCELENT job writing this poem, and I encourage you to keep up the good work. I hope to read many more pieces from you. Awesome poetry. -Brea
brittany
this poem is so much like what i feel. one of the best poems i've read. very good work.
Diana
beautiful poem keep up the good work. very smart.
Raven
So sweet!. Believe me I know how that feels. ^-^ I really liked it! *hugs* I'm here for ya!
joyce
i loved it,i somewhat relate to how you're feeling,have faith in yourself! i think you are somebody,u're a great poet but you're afraid to get out of your shell :) start loving yorself because you owe it to yourself. \(^_^)/
chris
bro. this poem was OFF THE HOOK! u know not many guys will go on and show off with his work,and you know what,im glad you where one of tham. this poem was amazing great job keep up the good work peace
michelle
This poem is very touching because this is how i feel at times.
MAnilyn
hey nice poem. it touched me. this poem sounds a lot like me right now. thank you.
Megan
I loved your poem, it made me start to cry. It touched me because I feel the exact same way, feeling like no one cares, and the only reason you get up everyday is because a little part of you thinks and/or hopes that the next day will be different.
Angelique
i really like this poem cause this has been me ever since i could remember. keep up the good work and i hope to hear more of your poems.
Michael
This poem was really good. It spoke to me in certain ways that other poems don't. Props man. Thank you. I loved man!
silv
this was a great poem! exactly how i feeel atm. great work! keeep it up
Lisa
I liked this poem a lot it showed many things about myself and the way I felt when a 8 month relationship ended for me :(
Annie
This poem i rate it a five bcuz it describes me right now!
Kristi
Your poem was really touching. It realates to me, because my boyfriend treats me like crap and I have no one, but reading this really makes me feel better. :)
Jose
awsome in a sad way true and very very good.
Ann
This is how I felt after my husband's affair. and still do at times. Deep inside, something is still missing. However, I believe that God will create a new love between us once again. Thank you for the beautiful poem.
Rachel
That poem was very touching. it spoke to me in ways many peoms can't. I loved it. and it fits me. thank you!
ashley
this poem touches me deaply as i have lost my love ov my life n it is true u do lose ure self love!
Lisa
This poem is very touching and I feel your pain.
Cheryle
Thank you Your poem summed up just how I am feeling tonight. I don't feel alone
Autumn
I LOVED this poem. I really could relate to it. Tonite sucked bcuz my bf and I were getting in an argument and I went online and saw his profile ~ Expressing his feelings 4 my so~called friend. *(
wiam
omg,i love this poem. maze ur great
Tricia
I love this poem. it's sad but true! I feel like this right now since i've been dumped a while ago. It hurts too! anyways i love the poem!
laura
This poem touched me so much because for the first time in my life, I don't love myself either. I've dealt with plenty of breakups in my life, but this is the first time I can't look in the mirror and still love myself -- it's a scary thing.
super
Very touchy poem. I can relate to it and can feel the pain. Nicely said.
ima
a lot of people can relate to this poem, it's beauty lies in its simplicity
angel
I like your poem the only thing is is i relate to that totally. just never been able to write it in one of my poems i always seem to just make my poems about love and lost. maybe it;s because that is all that it really is you love someone and then it;s some how lost
Anna
I love this one. I saw myself in it when I read it.
chery
So sad but so real.
kendr
The poems was great! Thats exaclly how i feel. love hurts so much. Some times i feel no one loves me too . But i know they do. I just want to love someone that will love me back . GREAT JOB ON THE POEM!
Jessi
this is a very good poem because i know just how he feels cause i am going threw the same thing right now. All I can say is just try to keep your head up.
Brand
This is a really good poem if only it was a girl this way!
cindy
when i read your poem i cry and cry and cry cause thats how i feel right now. u knew how to put my feelings into words
Parul
The poem deserves accolades for it's touching simplicity of expression.so true, so blue! Yes, it's difficult when the panorama of dreams U've cherished for ages takes on a dark shadow of empty craving.the sweet words u've been addicted to, are lost in the ramblings of your complaining heart.and the worst part is when it's yr own self you don't trust!
Char
I love this poem so much. When I read it, it was like you were talking about me.
Pat
I see myself Excellent
faaeda
this poem speak from my mind and my empty heart, that is how i feel, lonley, empty inside,
Tracy
i really liked this poem because i can realated to it and i know how it feels for no one to not love you and for no one to be there for you when you are alone and scared and i know how it feels to lose a love.
volleyb811
if u ever need to talk email me cause i know excatly how u feel when i read your poem i cried and cried and cried cause thats how i feel right now
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