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Over For Now by Lesley W.

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courtney
this is exactly what situation i am in right now this poem means alot 2 me
Gabriel
I Love this poem
Monique
i really liked this poem. it touched me so much because these are the words i have been wanting to speak to my boyfriend for so long but i never could.
Lissa
This poem was very touching. I really liked it. Its real feelings that almost everyone feels.
melissa
i love this poem its my favorite poem with all the other poems that i read.
Nello
This is EXACTLY how i feel. [[sigh]].
Kari
I loved this poem. It reminded me of my ex boy-friend that I had and he has totally thrown me away from him and for some reason does not want me to even come near him. Thankx
nalani
i love this poem it describes what my ex and i are going through right now!
Brittany
I love this poem! It relates to alot of what i would feel if me and my boyfriend ever broke up.
sabrina
it was like this poem was about me. i can truly relate and this is what i look for in a poem. it was truly a great poem.
Jeannette
I really liked your poem. It relates to sumthing i went through not to long ago!
shahirah
oh gosh! i love this poem so much!
Stephanie
This poem to me has a lot of meaning of what love means. I really enjoyed this poem! Great Job.
malinda
Wow i just wanted to write and say thats a very good poem. i have been with this guy for 7 years off and on and every time he is the one to call it quits for something stupid so it is very hard. and that poem just made it all. very good!
tissa
a good poemand i can relate
Michelle
I really loved your poem!When I was reading it I was drawn in and could feel how you felt. It was so awesome! You are a good writer and I hope that you will continue writing and become even better. **Michelle**
Dennise
I loved your poem i totally undersyand and feel for this poem. i wish you the best in your luv life! =Miss Precious=
c
OMG I love this poem. I cried when i read it cuz it is so true. It is like u wrote about me any my boyfirend! I love it keep writing!
sampurna
this poem really touched a chord in my heart. after reading it i felt as if i had written every word of it, it says exactly what i feel right now. great work. I appreciate how u can really express yourself succinctly without having to become too articulate
Brenda Lizeth
I love this poem Well the day that me and my boyfriend almost broke up I wrote this poem to him. I knew he loved me and he cared for me when he cried, and told me he didn't want to leave me. Well keep writing poems lesly cuz dis wuz a good 1!
kathy
I love this. It- reminds me of something that happened to me. It made me cry. It is such a very beautiful peace you've given me.
shayla
this poem is so ture i can totaly relate to this i think who ever wrote it is very talented and im glad you wrote this to show how i personally feel written out. thanks good job
Kerri-ann
this a great poem. I liked it because it descreibed on how my feelings are at the moment. Carry on with the fantastic poems i will look out for them. Well done
Krissy
wow i feel everything ur feelin cause im goin though that rite now. what u said was so true. i wish u luck with that special person. take care. great poem
Ashlee
I loved this poem, it felt so good to read this. everything it say is exactly how i feel about a special friend i have in my life. it is so hard to be friends- lovers - and then friends again, the pain is so strong. your an awsome writer, keep it up !
TreAnn
I really like this poem cause i was in the same place where we was first friends and we went out then i had 2 let him go but we were still friends until one day we was back 2gether again. Today we r still standing strong. GREAT poem I love it
ashleigh
that poem was rele gud. im still wif my bf at them minute but i want to end it becuz it aint working although we do love eachother i guess we just not ment to be so i mite print off this poem to give to him. keep writin them ya have got a true talent
Rebecca
THAT IS THE BESTEST POEM IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ I MEAN DAT I SWEAR YOU ARE GD THAT WAS LIKE WOW I HAD A TEAR IN MY EYE
danielle
really good poem!(:
Amy
Oh how I love this poem!Its like story of my life with my ex. I still Love him but i had to let him go for many reasons but no matter what he'll always have a place in my heart. We don't talk no more and thats what hurts the most. We are not mad at each other as much its just that I ended it because I think I am too young right now too be thinking about marriage. Though i know he's lied so much in the past and has also lied to me about the future but i know thats only because I ended it. Its just beautiful. Iam too a writer of poetry and most of them are about love. I have a book full of it and everyone loves them but ever since I ended it with my ex I just stoped writing all of a sudden.
Beaonca
I really like that poem i used it for a message to my boyfriend hopen he will still love me but i think its best that we become friends once again
Rebecca
That is a really good poem who ever wrote dat needs a medal lol i think this poem should of gone to my ex damien but i dnt think i could ever love him again in da way i did cause of what he did to me. sorry dnt mean to say my life story but well done to ever wrote dis its really good it made me have a tear in my eye lol
kimy
i fink da poem dat u did is rly sweet n i woz cryin wen i first red it n i sent it all 2 me peeps x
morgan
that is passion i luv it
Amy
this poem make me missed my ex-boyfriend but i know things anit always the way you wanted.
Rachel
This is a beautiful poem. Sometimes it's meant to be but it isn't the right timing. I really want to be with my girlfriend right now but it isn't the right timing.
Claresa
I like your poem because, I have this boyfriend I just broke up with. I was in love with him but I had to break up with him for cheating on me. This poem really touched me.
suzona
I think this is the most loving poem ive ever read and is so touching and smpaletic and could get eny ones vote.
Alisha
You did a graet jod on writig this poem! Keep up the good work !
Lili
this poem was a very nice poem i really like it but for me it is the other way around they left me.
luisdaniel
its true all that the poem says i just feel like im going to die i had a gf for 1 year and 5 months i broke up wt her i was so jelous that she went party wt friends. i was scared to lose her. and i feel in my own trap . this was 5 days ago and im dying wtout her i miss her so much , but the problem is that i live in honduras she lives in usa. she used to live here and then she moved. thats why im so jelous cuz i cant lose her , but know i lost her and its my faul , im sorry rachel u will be the only one on my heart forever and ever i swear to god. you are not perfect nobody is but u have the half that makes me complete. im sorry. im really sorry i love u so much i hope u someday talk to me again. i love ill keep calling u . and i dont know why im saying this here. i just need it to let it out. maybe she reads it. i love her wt all my heart.
yesenia
this is the best poem i have ever read
rebecca
your poem has just almost described whatis happenin in my life rite now its really good!
Kailee
that's awesome it makes me want to cry and I know just how you feel. I feel the same way.
Kayla
I know exactually how u feel or are trying to protray. I have a love just like that. or well i did. I have felt that way for 3 yrs. just praying that he still loved me. because he was my first love and my first kiss. Hand i still believe he is my only love. but as the dasy go by i belive that he doesn't love me at all and never did, he just wanted someone to jupmo. but it still eavees me to wonder why did he come knocking on the bathroom door. even know the while slchool was in the building. he had to have felt something
Kay
Dat poem was so sad n so sweet
Tiara
this is areally good poem im a poem reaader andthis is the beat yet keep on writin you got the skills good job did you actually give this poem to the guy or girl you were talking to?
detesia
this was a really good poem and sometimes i feel like this because my ex and i still flirt with each other here and there but he ha s agirl friend that go to our skool n he still says he miss me and all and that he love me oh so much i really do think that he still want me back well iknow he do but i want him if i can't have him nobody can. i give this poem an 8
Raven
Wow. That poem was a bullzeye to how I am feeling, its funny cause I can totally relate. I loved your poem, it was moving and inspirational. Wow.
Renae
Hey, I love your poem it really reminded me of my first love Gene but after we broke he didn,t want nothing to do with me even though I told him I still wanted to be friends, that I will always love him, and that maybe in the furture we could be together. He hates my gutes til this day!But we have both moved on I am in love with my bf now,Tyler he treats me really we have been dating for about 7 months now and we love being arond each other. I hope that you either already have or will eventully find a guy like Tyler for you. Love, Renae Vines
XoXo Rachie
omg, this poem is awesome, and i cried, like ALOT, because i broke up with mai boifrend, and we used to b BEST FRENDZ and now, it just cant b that way anymore. anywayz, great poem!
Bin
Wow, your poem really moved me. After reading your poem, I guess I'm not the only person who supports the idea of "not finding someone to replace the previous one". I guess there is nothing wrong with loving someone from a distance like what you've wrote. Yeah, for awhile I've offer her a shoulder and a symphathetic ear too. even offered her my heart. After what happened back then to us, it made me the only guy for her to open up to whenever they both have a bit of issues. Nice poem!
nicole
I THINK THAT THIS WAS A VERY GOOD POEM ONE OF THE BEST ANDF THERE SHOULD BE MORE LIKE THEM
stacy
this poem really touched me bcuz i'm going through these same things right abt now but it gave a little ease the pt when u said that we'll be together sometime again one of the most best & true poem good job!
yanira
i loved your poem alot. it touched my heart, u are a naturall poet
Wendy
i love it
Jasmine
This is a very relatable poem. I love it, the details are so real and who cant relate at one point or another
Samantha
This same thing happen to me so i feel the pain.
kara
this poem is soooo great i am in the same position i had to let go of two people in my life. i lost one to death and the other i lost because i only saw him at my football club and my dad stopped me from going and now his mate has told me that he still loves me. what should i do?
jennifer
i really like your poem i went threw that but it was meant to be cause he came back i hope the same good thing happens to you keep writting cause it really sounds good
jessica
i loved that poem!. i can relate to it so much!
blondiesmj92
i liked this poem it reminded me of my x
Crystal
ok! first of all i think that this is a WONDERFUL poem. and i am seriously going to use this as my inspiration to keep holding on to my first true love! this poem really touched me i mean it from the bottom of my heart love, CH
Lisa
This is a beautiful poem I could relate to it
lyz
your poem really touched me. i just had about the same experience with my boyfriend. your poem made me cry and thats a good thing. that means that there are alot of feeling. Brave. lyz
anitra
THat was sio beutiful Good luck i hope u get him gurl!
Dancer101
This poem is exactly what i am feeling when i found out that my boyfriend of 3 years was eyeing another girl. i didn't know how to act or how to handle anything that i was earing. when i asked him about and he told me everything was true i did the only thing i knew how to do. i told him that we could not be together anymore. it has only been a few days and i haven't been very hungry and i haven't sleeped. thank you show much because you said what i am feeling when i didn't know how to say it in words.
Grace
AWW THiS WAS THE SWEETEST THiNG EVER! I GiVE iT A 10! 0H YEAH ITS SO ADORABLE H0W S0ME1 CAN ACTUALLY FiND STRONG MEANiNGS T0 L0VE! I L0VE IT
troublez
wow,you did good girl!i can relate to how u were feelin. i felt the same way,we actually broke up tho. well yea,good job girl
whitney
this is a great poem ti touched me so much this is exacly how i feel its like this poem is apart of me and it has also made me think about me and my boyfriend now i know what to do thanks bunches! Whitney
tynisha
what a WONDERFUl GREAT SUPEER POEM
Tiffany
I really think that this is the most touching poem i have read. This is becuase i'm a teen myself and i've gone through this not to long ago. I've been trying to find a valentine poem for my first love, but it seems as if there all too happy. I wanted to find something that was meaningful and explained the way that i felt. And this poet has explained her feelings beautifully.
raven
hey well i luv ur poem because it relates 2 wat i feel abouut my x-boyfriend!i understand how u feel
victoria
this is so rue for my life me and my ex boifriend are going through right now
man
oh man. that poem reflects the relationship i just had with a best freind
Sarah
This is a really good poem and the words meant an awful lot to me, had troubles with a girl I am still in love with but we cant be together because her parents dont approve. For anyone out there, never let go of your friends no matter how hard it gets. At the end of the day your only going to make things worse if you let the people you love walk out of your life.
Tatyana
I swear this poem was about me and my ex boyfriend. Its off the hook.
jessica
this poem also relate to me and my very first true love. i love it. thaks to the person who wrote it, it really touch me.
Jamie
i could totally relate to this poem, im going through something like that right now
Monique
This Poem is the same way Im feeling about my Ex_Boyfriend!I always wanted to write who I felt about every thing but this says is all!
kelsey
I really liked this poem it really touched me ! this poem reminds me of my ex boyfirned who i am still in love with . but doesnt love me ! we are firneds now after a very nasty break up !
Sylinda
I love your poem i kinda having boy problem too and it sound a whole alot like yours.
Meghan
I absolutely loved your poem. I understand where you're coming from. I had the same problem with my boyfriend. We went out for almost half a year. Good luck! The poem rocked.
Holly
I loved this poem because, I just recently decided to not date my friend although I was the one who asked him and he never told me how he felt so I told him I thought that we should just be friends and he never said otherwise. That hurt my feelings so now we aren't really talking all that much anymore. I guess the saying is true if you love 'em you gotta let go and if they come back then it was meant to be, and I don't think he is coming back and that is okay with me.
courtney
This was one of the best poems I have ever read! GREAT JOB!
kiara
i'm sending you this because i can really relate to this poem and everything that was writtin in your poem i felt. so you did a GREAT job on coming up with this:) 100/10
Cristi
Hey i really like this poem and i hope to read more of your poems later. this one was really good and it explans all the problems i am goin through right now. ~~Cristi~~
Hayley
i can sort of relate to what ur talin bout and i love meaningful stuff and this poem is beautifully written and is so meaningful. keep it up
josie
i loved the poem!thats the exact same thing with my friend and me we love the poem and it really helped
myranda
well when i was reading this poem I felt like it was sooo true i just got over a relationship but i think we just need a break so im waiting for the day to come. but this poem was great! i touched me alot. thank you
laporsha
loved the poem makes me think of my ex how loving him waz right but being with him waz wrong he hurt me sooo much
olga
i vote this as the perfect poem cause this is wat happen to me as in i need to let my bf go for certain reasons. but i like this guy wit all my heart that i want him to know that i will always love him but for now we got to be friends and hopefully in the future we can get back together!
HANNAH
this poem just hits everything about how me an my ex are. i still love him and its heartbraking not knowing if he feels the same way anymore. i now know it was for right reasons that we split but i just keep thinking 'what if'? heart bbreak is the worst thing ever! x
Sarah
i voted for this one because it tells so much about me & my ex-boyfriend. i really like this one poem though its really good. your friend sarah
sarah
this is a really good poem. Me and my sister really liked it a lot.
vanequa
Hello my name is Vanequa and i just wanted to say that if a GREAT poem. i raelly didn't mean to click on that poem but im glad that i did. Now i am not breaking up with my boyfriend but i would love to use it.
Sara
i liked tha poem because me and the love of my life just broke up, we are still friends and we still love eachother. this poem made me realize that even if we dont get back together, i still have a part of him with me in my heart.
cala
my bf and i recently broke up and this really helped me get through the pain i was feeling. thank you so muc for your wonderful poem:)
Isha
hi i voted for this poem because it reminds me so much of me and the boy i just broke up with. luv isha xxx
Courtney
I really liked this poem but it really made me sad cuz I know who that is I still love this guy that I know but we've no 2-gether anymore and Im so crazy about him but I miss him so much. But all I have now of him is my memories and I'll never 4-get him and I do wish and hope we see each other once more. But yea I really liked this poem.
Amanda
I LOVE THIS POEM SOOOOO MUCH! it's exactly how i feel and what i went threw with my bf. keep writing poems. UR GREAT
Mylee
that really touched me. it was so beautiful. it sounds like a situation i could relate to.
natalie
that poem was excellent and really touched my heart
gredy
This poem is so sweet!
amelia
WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFUL POEM ITS GREAT THAT YOU ARE STILL GOOD FRIENDS I HOPE THAT YOUR LOVE IS STRONG FOR SOMEONE ELSE AND THAT YOU CAN LET GO I KNOW THAT SOMEONE ELSE IS OUT THERE FOR YOU GO FIND THEM GIRL
crystal
hey grl i rely like this poem its was a rely good way to expres your self and i went throught he same thing so good luck with the rest of your poems
Jenny
I love this poem. I was looking for a poem to describe what I was feeling for him, and this is totally it. It brought back so many memories to me, and made my heart skip a beat. You're awesome. Mad Props!
Trish
Hi,my name is Trish, My Boyfriend and i haven't being together that long, but thing are not going really well. I just want you to know that your poem so really good, I FEEL YOUR PAIN
karina
i absolutaly LOVED this poem i think it is the best poem ever . it says a lot about my realatioship with my boyfriend.
Dibri
Oh. Wow. This one really touched me. I cried. See the guy i love finally told me he loved me after two years of me loving him. Well he's not allowed to date. He's 16 and i'm 17. This past summer we went through it in love. Well he went on a missions trip and came back adn told me that his parents and a friend talked to him about this. They obviously don't think it would last. Well he's kinda a oush-over,and he listened. He told me he'd "rather" not be in love right now and that he doesn't think he loves me anymore. But he still like likes me alot. It's so hard and this poem made me wonder if he feels like that. I hope.
Oriona
i really liked this poem ill use it for ma x boyfriend thats constinly trying to get back with me once again om out peace love always youyr #1 fan Oriona Breeding aka mrs. kelly wife 4 life
Susan
Hey I really love this poem because I broke up with my boyfriend on September 22, 2005 and he was my love, but we are friends and he doesn't understand. In my heart I will always remember him and hopefully remain friends.
janine
this was a great poem! and it was touching because my first love was hard to walk away from and im still there for him when he needs a favor or needs something. This was one of the best poems i've ever read!
janet
i love this poem very much! it is so true!
Jon
i just wanted to let you know that this poem was very good and can be viewed from the perspective of both sexes Good Job!
Maggie
This was a great poem and all but one part touched my heart. Because we never kissed but he was my first love and I miss him a lot. I could dedicate this to my ex~boyfriend Louis. I miss him a lot and feel bad for braking up with him for such a stupid reason. If only he could read this then he's know how I feel but I'm sure he's not going to so I feel bad because I can't speak these words to him now. Maggie
jessica
OH MY GOD THIS POEM IS SO TRUE TO ME I WAS WITH MY BOYFRIEND FOR A YEAR AND SEVEN MONTHS AND HE BROKE IT OFF SO I AM TRYING TO STAY STRONG
Rae
I'm having so much trouble with love myself right now, that your poem practically moved me to tears. There are parts of it that I could have written myself. Its a truly top, touching poem and your a true poet!
Dante3000
Everything you said here reminds me so much of what im going through right now, a great poem.
candace
omg this is like me and mi ex! this is a great peom and u should keep writing k
Sammy
nice poem. I have just split up with my boyfriend n it made me think. i still love him Very good poem
Cuddly
Hey. That poem is so gorgeous.
MARIO
THIS IS POEM ITS REALLY NICE ITS EXACTLY WHAT HAPPEN WITH ME AND MY GIRLFRIEND
Brittny
Through my time of need, about going through it with my ex, that poem I read over and over and over again til I was all cried out because it's crazy how another person could understand something so strong that a lot of people fine not understandable. Thanks. and great poem. keep it up and holla at me with anything new, because I write some stuff too
Haley
wow that has alot of feeling behind it and just wow!
rahel
i reckon your poem relates to me so much its exacly whats happened to me i broke up with my bf and i hope in the future that i will be with him again if its true love and all but your poem really reflects what happened to me and i really think its a excellent poem. gud job mate
Leah
I really like ur poem alot. it touched me b cuz i can relate to it. u see i have a boyfrend, accept it seems like we're just frends i mean he says he loves me and all but i really dont know anymore. and i just wanted tolet u know ur not the only person going through these troubles.
Kristi
wow!my borfriend and i just broke up last thursday and i miss him so much! when i read this poem i started to cry b/c i mean thats exactly how i feel! no matter what im always going to love him with all my heart! and i hope that one day maybe he'll take me back!
Jonathan
I love this poem. I can relate to it. It reminds me of my ex and I. I loved the person. But some girl was going to try to break us up beacause my lover didn't like her, so she was going to break us up. And to this day. I don't like her.
Mystery
I think your poem is fantastic because it realy touched me. It reminds me of my current situation. this "guy" is really confusing me. You should definetly write more poems!
ann
your poem is really good, i can relate to it! im sure many ppl can! thanks for sharing it me, and with everyone else.
sarah
omg . this poem is amazin u ave a really good talent plzzzzzzzzzz ryt more of these poems ur really really good
Niki
I truely love this poem it reminds me of my best guy friend I love him so much but it had to take me leaving for him to realize just how much I loved him now he is in Illinois and im in Mississippi. But i really enjoy poetry and I lov this site.
Kalvene
out of 10? id give it an 11:) i really like this poem because it relates to me. every line happened to me. its really depressing but yet has a way to make readers happy. great job!
Marisa
This peom has touched me, becuz I can really relate to it. I just broke up with my boyfriend of 6 months. And we are still friends but I cant help but think we could still be something more. I know now though we maynot be together but we still need eachother and being friends right now it what is best for us.
Rachel
this reminds me o my first love and kiss matt
Rachel
This remindes me of my ex from a year ago. We both still love each other but not like that. plus he was my first and almost gretest kiss.
marie
this poem reminds me of what i went threw ur an awesome writter
ashley
ur poem blew me away good job peace
margarita
this poem reminds me of me when my ex broke up w/ me and i did fell in love w/ me and then he brakes my heart so badly but it was hard to get over him but i now one day we go out again.
NOYB
It has a lot of meaning to it and it has a lot of truth to it to some people of the world
Brittani
i loved this poem! im going through that right now i have to say goodbbye to love and go back to just being friends an dit hurts sooooo bad. I cry every night i cant eat i cant sleep i cant even think straight. And this poem brought a tear to my eye. I really enjoyed it and now i feel better knoeing that they are people out there going through the same stuff as me. And it bring gladness to me!
Megan
This is such a wonderful poem! I feel all of theese feelings but could never put them so well worded. This lady who wrote it has an amazing talent and I admire her.
peggy
me and my boyfriend of 7 years are in t he middle of break-up. this poem says it all,it made me cry because i feel the same way. i can only love him from a far.
mandie
i loved ur poem this to happened to me i had a friend that became a boyfriend then we tried to be friends again but it didn't work out
Latisha
I really enjoyed this poem i used it on the one that i love but now were friends it really does work
marie
this poem is so awesome but so sad i loved it
chawanda
I loved your poem i'm going through some of the same things right now
Sammie
this poem is amazing and describes how i felt and still feel for my first love and it hurts to see him woth his girlfriend i am learning to move on i have finaly found something to look at that will remind me! song lyrics arent always true and completely relevant! thank you xxx
Kara
I love this poem I feel the same way about somebody.
Lil' Miss
This poem is one that i liked because i have been in a situtation just like that. And it was hard for me to leave but i did. slowly
christen
this reminds me of what happened with a friend of mine thanks for the words of relief that i am not the only one in the world with this going in their lives
Charlee
I loved your poem! I am sooo in the same situation me n my ex were forced to break up because he has personal issues and he abused me mentally( u dont love me if you dont do. _____) but i loved him. Neway im with this new guy n now half a year later my ex is back n better a changed man. but old feelings are popping up for my ex but i'm inlove with my newest b/f. sooo. your poem really explains how i feel for my ex. even though i have a new boyfriend. i will never stop lovein my ex no matter who omes along! great poem!
angelica
that how me and my ex r now we still want 2 be 2 gether but it hard
Jatoria
your poem is a poem im sure every girl can relate to. im going through something really similar to this right now. i just want you to write a poem about how to get rid of these deep feelings.
katie
this was a awesome poem i enjoyed it and hope things work out b/t/w u and your guy
bilz
this is a great poem, im a boy but i felt the same way when i split with my girlfriend a few months ago, her name is tiff and i love her so much, well thats all bilz
Kara
i loved this poem! it really makes you stop and think. it reminds me of my ex~boyfriend. i still love him and want to be with him but we split apart for now and we are just friends now! but i'm hoping that one day we will become more than friends again! this was an excellent poem!
Shakita
Loved it LOVED IT! This poem was great. I can't say how much i can relate to this poem. I liked it because i was able to make a connection with it. Ms. Lesley you go girl!
Jessica
That was the best poem i have every read. it sounds exactally like my situation, im not even kidding and i really love that poem. I almost started crying when i read it. Good job! You should write another poem.
Chantel
I on a scale from one to ten, with 10 being the best, i give this a 10. this is a beautiful poem.
Maria
Lesley, i have great respect for your poem it took a person who was true to someone special to write this. You must of been going through a tough time just thinking of how it would of been if you never broke up with him. but just keep looking up to the sky and follow your dream. And this special guy that you fell-in-love with is the one then keep on being his best friend! You seem like a great person and you can pull it through. Luv, MARIA
Faith
Oh my gosh!when i read this poem its like its what happened to meeh!exactly wat happend 2 meeh!i love this poem its so passionate and touching!
Brina
this poem has touched me in way that i can not explain. i feel as if it was me exactly where u was standing with the same point of veiws. its like a neverending true love that left you, you await the day that she/he will come back, your always there for anything they need, and still feel left in the dark. thanks for sharing!
Jasmin
I REALLY LIKE YOUR POEM IT ALMOST MADE ME CRY BECAUSE I HAVE A LOVE IN MY LIFE IN WHICH I WILL NEVER FORGET AND I HAD TO LET GO OF HIM. I MISS HIM AND I JUST HOPE ONE DAY WE'LL BE TOGETHER AGAIN UNTIL THAT I WILL BE WAITING. BUT I YOU POEM IS VERY GOOD I JUST WANTED TO TELL YOU THAT.
olga
This is a very cute one and that is how i feel all in love with my first love and now we are going to get together again and see how it works even after all the things we went through in our love life before
kassie
OMG! i love it thats how i fill right now cause my and my bf is over i love him with all my hrt and i always will it made my cry to read this u r so good keep going
Ima
This poem really touched my heart cuz i know how it feels to almost lose someone you've love from like for site. Great poem I love it!
beatriz
i loved this poem it really touched me it reminded me of when me and my ex-boyfriend broke up
Jailene
I think this poem is awsome! my ex boyfriend recntly dumped me because of baseball and school and i have been so hurt its almost pathetic! though he says he still feels for me and that he wants to get back w/ me later on, i still feel orible because i feel for him 2 much! this poem is the exact same thing i'm feeling and im glad some2 else feels (or felt) the same way!
Damaris Solis
This is a very nice poem that touch me heart and explains the way I feel about my ex boyfriend. Very Good Job!
meghan
your poem really toughed me and that the way i feel about my ex also!
David
You poem is very touching.
MARINA
wOW THAT WAS REALLY TOUCHING IT MADE ME CRY BECAUSE THAT IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL
julia
this poem tottaly rocks keep doin what ur doin
Anita
Hey I have to admit I liked your poem alot because I just got out of a seriuos relationship and yor poem explained all and made me cry but they were tears of joy cause now I know Im not the only person going through that.
Elizabeth
i especially appreciated this poem because this happens to alot of teens and she opened up in the poem and told it how it really was. I can relate so much to her in this poem and i look forward to seending it to the person who it reminds me of! thanks so much
kay
i like this alot
skye
This is so my boyfriend and me i love this poem
melgie
i realll liked it cause i am going through the same thing right now too. and i think that it was a really realistic poem and u should keep writin poems.
stephanie
This poem was so great. You took the words right form my hreat.
Toby
i think it is very good cos i gave it to my girl franid and she frot the same i would just like to say it is very good
Aadrian
THIS POEM IS AWESOME GOOD JOB!
Krystal
I really liked the poem. It touched me in a special way b/c that is how I feel about my first love but I don't know how to tell him so I think I will read this poem to him. Thanks!
keveta
I LOVE THIS POEM IT REMINDS ME OF ME AND MY EX BOYFRIEND IT DESCRIBES ME AND HIM SO PERFECTLY
kyle
this poem really touched me. my g/f broke up with me and this sums up most of what id say to her. i give this poem a 12 out of 10.
Rachel
i can relate to this poem and it really touches me when i read it(i started crying when i read it)lol
Elyse e
Beatiful poem, it made me cry because i'm going through the exact same thing! its hard and i thank you for getting my feeling out on paper! 11/10 elevan out of ten!
rosita
This is exactly how i feel.
Kyle
oh wow. this poem is amazing. its perfect for how i am feeling right now. absolutly perfect.
Laura
I really like this poem because it tells the truth about some peoples love for one another. This poems reminds me of me and my boyfriend, and how i would be if we broke up.
ruby
this poem was really cute
Courtney
I was really touched by this poem i lost my true love recently and its the hardest thing to cope with even at a young age i'm going through alot i love the poem you did a awesome job!
ashley
i like the poem it was really cute.
Sasha
This poem touched me so much and made me have memories of when me and my boyfriend broke up. The poet is very creative and thanks to her, people can react to this poem
Marissa
This is a wonderful poem. It really describes what im going through with my boyfriend right now.
cabinus
it was touching, trully so. i just broke up with my girlfriend and that is exactly how i feel.
Sandy
This reminds me of my life now. The guy I like likes me and it makes me happy. But I know it will end. Even if I don't want it to.
Jena
oh my i love this poem so much i just broke up with my bf so yea! i give it a 10 out of 10
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tie
i think u have done a great job at writing this poem. i no exactly what u feel and i hope that time has healed what might have been broken. keep writing! i think ur an excellent writer
Renyka
I stumbles upon your poem and it hit home with me and the situation I am going through wit this guy I was with. KEEP WRITING :)
viola
i know why this poem was wrote. i feel the same right now. WOW!
Jennifer
I read your poem and it sounded just like me and my ex who just broke up after 3 years and now he's telling me we should be best friends but everything you said compares to me and him and how much u still love him i'm going threw the same thing so dont think your the only one it's so hard but one day we will get over it but untill then good luck with your poem and remember that somebody is going threw the same pain anf guilt and hurt! Your poem explainds that great poem
Jessica
This poem really touched me because is the samething that happend to me with my ex boyfriend. When I tought that we were in love i found out that his feelings were not the same as mine he said that he only wanted to be friends that he was confused and that he was not over his ex.
Kalie
This Poem helped me think about everything thats going on with me and my boyfriend right now, things start to get tough as we try to hold them strong. Some times we just need to let go, your poem shows that. But in the end, he'll always be your first love its hard to let go and have to see all your memories everyday.
jada
i loved this poem it really touched me
cherokee
I LOVED IT! i can totally relate! keep strong!
gina
This poem is such a true reflection on break ups in relationships, and what makes it special to me is that it concentrates on the positive aspects and almost gives feelings of encouragement and support. very much appreciated, thanks
Kayla
I went through this with my ex-boyfriend. I still love him. He was my first love, my first real boyfriend, my first everything. Friends is where we need to be and this poem explains it perfectly.
Martha
This poem has really touched my heart and it was exactly how me and my friend were
Ryan
Amazing, serious 100 percent what I needed to read
Jemina
this poem reminds me of the situation i am goin through right now. It really touched my heart and made me realizewhat i had to do. Thanks
mary
This is a very nice poem its just what is happening to me right now i like this poem
Alexis
i love this poem because it relates to me!
mike
wow that is exactly how i feel with my g/f right now
Destonie
I think this is a great poem it says just the right thing.
sytuana
this is the first time i read it and already i'm in love with it. i've been in the same situation and still am. it's very relevant to me. keep doing what u do and stay strong. smile;)
Diana
I really love your poem! I red this and its so close to what I am feeling because my first love broke up with me not long ago. Although I love someone else now, I think of him and miss him and when I see him I dont know what to do because I still love him in my heart! And I always want to be there for him even if not as his girlfriend! I think maybe we'll come back together some day! Oh well, i actually just wanted to say: This poem is LOVELY!
Jamie
I just liked that poem because i could really relate to it and that i had felt the same way.
jessica
I think that this poem was really awesome! The writer is very talented and I give her props for this poem!
Heather
that is a beautiful poem and describes, everything that I am going through exactly.
carollina
That was the best poem I've ever read. you were awesom I loved it. it described my feelings for the boy I love.
Angel_11
I love this poem 'cause it reminds me of someone really special in my life even though I am not with him he will always be my frined.
Heather
Hi,I just want to say I really liked this poem. You're a talented poet.
danielle
this poem is wounderful. It explanes me and my x-boyfiend. We are going thought the samething .
chelsea
it IS a good poem.
MADELYN
NICE POEM, I REALLY LIKE IT -NICE JOB
Tiffany
i think it was really good and meaning full, it touched me a lot.
Gabee
This really touched me cause am going through it right now
heidi
hey i shared this with my boyfriend and we are just friends right now but we still love each other!
ABIGAIL
THIS POEM WAS A VERY GOOD ONE. IT REALLY TOUCH ME AND MADE ME THINK OF THE SITUATION I'M IN RIGHT NOW . i FELT LIKE YOU WROTE IT SPECIALLY FOR ME IT WAS GREAT! LOVED IT.
chasity
freaky great. exactally how i feel about my girl.
Joey
This just happened to me. MY girlfriend broke up with me but were not even friends anymore and i still love her.
Dialete
i think this is a really good poem. i am going through this same thing with my boyfriend right now. i'm glad i read your poem. it really helped me see things that wasn't there at first. Thank You
Janina
I loved this poem. I have a boyfriend and we use to be friends and i dont know how to tell him we need to be apart. I cried when i read this poem. Thankyou :)
Amber
This truly inspired me because it describes me and my boyfriend.
Samara
This was a really good poem! I related to it so much. We must think alike for you to know exactly the same feelings that I feel. Keep up the good work!
becki
this poem is really cute and totally reminds me of how i feel about my ex boyfriend
Bryan
This poem touched me a lot, becuase i am in the same boat in the same ocean. The girl that i love is lost right now, but hopefully she will be found, but first she must find herself. To all of you who are patient and wait for their loves to return congrats. Just don't forget to tell those ppl that you care about them everyday
stephanie
i abslotly loved it ive been in the same possion and reading yur poem made me realize jus to let go like dat but i still love him more than my boy friend
Emily
This poem was SOO good. it really touched me. It was like someone was reading my mind. and its good to know that things like this happen to other people too.
Sunshine
I like this poem so much. it is so cool. its got patential. feep writin.
Andrew
this poem is simply amazing its exaxly how i feel right now!
red
This is a great poem. It reminds me of my ex and i wish this poem was true four me. Great poem i liked it alot
jhogerliz
this poem is so beautiful. the first time i read this poem it made me cry. it touched me so much because it relates to my life in many ways. i really liked it i wish that there would be some more poms like this. this writer has talent anmd should continue writing poems like this. words cant describe how beautiful this poem is to me and my friends.
Damaris
Your poem is very touchy. It sympathizes with everyone.
Na´ka
that is such a beautifull poem, it's exacly the words i should have used when i broke up with my first boyfriend, what happend to be two weeks ago.
Andrew
I enjoyed it very much. I just had an experience exactly like this. It pulled on my heart to read this. Very well done.
Alaina
This poem speaks to me. only because it's exactly how I feel right now. it took the words right out of my mouth.
mari
This poem really touched me its the exact situation I am in right now and it really hurts. I think this is the best poem I have ever heard
Amy
I had a deep convorsation with a good friend of mine today. we were talking about love and what it means to us. After thinking about it for a long time i decided to go and find some poems that would describe my views. and that is how i came accross this wonderful poem. it talks about a love that is so deep and real, a love that will nevr die. in my mind, this is a true love. the only kind of love i wish to experience. thank you. your passionate words have touched me deeply, and i will remember them always.
Matt
i can not describe the words to wat your poem means,its amazing,, just got back from ibiza and met my 1st love. im only 16 and feel love for her. we were friends to more then friends and bck to friends again. now im bck in england south. shes up north newcastle. and all i hav is memories. we ring regulary but i feel we can really b something. time will tell. this poem will help me and i may b consider writing it to her and see how she reacts. thanks again - Matt
Chloe
This poem really helped me last night, I've just broken up with my guy after a long-term relationship. I read this to him last night as it helped me explain how I felt about him. Thank-you so much
Mandy
I just want to say that I think this poem is extremely well written and I could really put myself in your shoes. Right now I'm having a hard time letting go of my ex-boyfriend but this poem really helped and I know how it feels. I love your poem, it's amazing.
donna
I LOVED YOUR POEM. THAT SOUND LIKE ME AND MY FRIEND CRAIG THAT JUST BROKE UP. IT ALMOST BROUGHT TEARS IN MY EYES
Audra-Jo
wow! I love this poem. It has't to be the best one i have ever read!
Kayley
dat poem really touches ur heart, itz fab ! i love it !
Audra-Jo
AMAZING POEM!
becky
This is a wonderful poem. Me and my boyfriend, best friend, just broke up after 8 months and are now back to just friends. he was my first love and first kiss and i will always love him but it wasnt working right now. and i guess time will tell if we are suppose to be together. keep up the good work on your poems
shannon
This poem brought me onto tears because me and my ex-boyfriend went out for a really long time and we broke up and he was my firdt love i kno just how you fell!I want him ack sooo bad but iwont ever have him back!
claire
This poem touched my heart. I have been going through a rough time with my boyfriend right now, and this is exactly what I wanted 2 say. You are a great poet! Thank you for your inspiration.
Joana
I REALY LIKED YOUR POEM, IT ALMOST MAKED ME CRY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK YOU MAY BECOME GREAT POET SOMEDAY.
Hayden
This poem really got to me. I just had a relationship that ended, and then i read this poem. I really do miss the love of my life and know that somehow, someway we will be together again and will always be in love. This poem made me think about how much much i really do miss him, and i even thought of giving it to him. But, i figured love works in mysterious ways and takes time, but eventully it will work.
Nicole
I honestly think that this poem was witten for me. i like th way you write. very insirational. i hope to see more of your poems here.
Angel
this is a really good poem it touched me cause it reminds me of me and my ex boyfriend .
lisa
i really enjoyed your poem i wish i could have read it earlyer then i would have known what to say to my ex boyfriend but now i know thank you for putting it in writing great job
Nicole
I loved this poem. It shows how she must of really cared for the guy. I just loved it, thats all there is to it.
chelsey
i really like ur poem like its amazing i went though thing with my ex im still goin though it it really relates to my sitution like i write poems to and this i really like it its really good \
Elizabeth
hey, This poem brought me to tears it reminded of my ex and I. you did a really good job~
jade
it think this is such a true poem for so many teens. it shows how complicated being a teen is.
Ashley
I LOVED IT!
gemma
when i read this poem i started to cry because it reminded me exactly of mi boyfriend which whom i have just broken up with. it really touched my heart.
shanice
this poem is so,so,so,so good i love it it is exactly what I'm am going through i want you to read some of my poems. as i read your poem It's like I could feel inside what you were feeling this poem is really good I would love to read more
shaun
this is a great poem. i know how it feels to go from friend to more then back again. i can't stop thinking about her. and everyday it gets harder to be with out her
shane
Lesley your a great poet. I hope i can read more of your work.
bec
that poem made me cry my eyes out! seriously! it did. it reminded me of my ex-boyfriend. we were together, then he broke up with me a few times, then we were together again. then he left my school, and we broke up again 3 days later, and that was the hardest time of all. but, i can honestly say, that this poem touched me very deeply, and its nice to see that there are people out there who fall in love with people who they think that are really right for them. and i can also say, that i never knew what love was, untill i met my ex-boyfriend! i miss him, i wish i could see him, i want him back sooo bad, because i cant see his face anymore, ive forgotten what he looks like. im scarred im going to forget him forever.
Amber
i really liked this poem. My and my first are going threw this but he doesnt understand. I mad him read the poem but he showed noi emotion like I did or even close.
Chrystal
I love this poem. It is exactly how i feel right now with the love of my life leaving to go to college. It gives me faith and helps me through this rough time.
amanda
this poem gave me goos bumps i really liked it
GINA
Great poem i could re-read it over and over again its exactly wut i would say if me and my boyfriend of a year and half were to have some problems it really touched me to hear someone have the same thoughts as me! GINA!
fenelia
i relly like dis poem because i was goin out with this guy who was my first kiss and i considered him to be my first love but other things in my life were getting in da way of our realtionship so i had to brake up with him. For now we are best of friends and hopefully we are meant ot be and well get back together. Thankyou for writing this poem its so true im glad to know im not the only onein this situation.
Brittany
WOW!IS the word that was stuck through my head when i read this!This is EXACTLY what i feel about my ex and you said it all in one poem. That poem really touched me,not just because it was good but because i was what i felt to a T. Thanx for writing that poem
candace
i just wanted to say this is one of the best poems that i have ever read . it really toched me becasue i am going through exactly what this poem talks about and it really helped me to hears it in words. thank you . candace
randie
this poem i thought was good. it has a lot of feelings and emotions in it and you can tell that you really dont want to say good bye but its for the best. i liked it alot.
Massiel
Wow i your poem was beautiful! i could really relate to it and i loved the rhyming pattern. You did a great job!
Gemma
What a lovely, touching poem. I am in this situation myself at the moment, trying to come to terms with reality. I thought that the whole poem was really sweet, and relevant to my current feelings. Well done Lesley, a great poem you have written.
Aishree
This poem is great. its closely related to my life. Exactly what happened in my life and i'm finding it hard to over come. After reading this poem. definitely feel much better. There is still hope. thank you
Nikole
i really liked your poem cuz it reminded me of my first love. even though he broke up wit me for not answering my phone when he called ne ways um. i really did love him and i miss him alot so i really connected wit it. it was awesome
Courtney
I really really love this poem. It touched deep down in me. Cause me and my bf are having problems and I'm afriad it might come to this. loving from a distance.
Allie
I thought this poem was very good. It made think of my ex boyfriend and exactly how things went between us.
Lacey
This poem has really touched me. My boyfriend and I just recently broke up but are planning on getting back together, I automatically thought it was perfect when I read it.
Jenn
I love this poem, and I read it every time I have a problem with my boyfriend. After 2 years we just recently broke up, and I come on this site and just cryed and read this poem. Hopefully fate is on my side, and we'll someday be together again.
Crystal
Very good poem.
Lisa
I loved this poem. Its what i am goin through right now also.
B
I loved this poem. Its exactly what I felt when me and my ex broke up.
Amber
i read this poem and couldnt believe someone else wrote it. its exactly how i feel right now. what you talk about happened just a week ago and teh last week ahs been so hard!
Ione
This poem touched me becuz a break up is so hard when you really loved that person and for a reasonable reason you are still in love with this person that you honestly don't want to give up and i can say that for the rest of your life you will be in love with this person till the day you die. This has really touched becuz i have experienced it too many times you fall in love and then POOF its gone in midair. I loved the poem!
Amy
This is poem reminds me of myself because everything in it has happened to me and makes me cry. It is a great poem and i can't believe i can relate to it this much.
Marcella
I think this poem is the truth. The poem really touched me because I went through that with an ex boyfriend and I myself can write poems but it was hard for me to express what I felt about letting that person go.
monique
WOW! THIS POEM REMINDS ME OF MYSELF AND A BOY I REALLY LOVED BUT WE GAVE IT A BRAKE. BUT I STILL LOVE HIM ALOT THE WHOLE POEM WAS HOW I FELT WITH HIM AND HOW I FLET WHEN WE SPLIT APART BUT I HOPE WE GET BACK TOGETHER. BUT NEWAYS GOOD JOB ON THE POEM I LOVED IT
Tierra
This poem really touched me on a situation that I'm dealing with right now at this moment. I am so very happy to have read this poem it brings comfort to know that some one else has experienced the same thing and had the same feelings. I seemed like this poem came straight from my head.
Allison
This poem remindes me so much of me and my b/f when we break up this poem was very touching.
nikki
it really did touch me. i like everything about it. it even made a tear come down my cheeks. i am going to print this and give it to this boy that i like. see here's why i like this story. theirs this boy that i like and we stared talking right, but he has a girl friend and i still want to be with him so i going to tell him how much i miss him and how much i want to be wit him
charise
this was really deep i feel like i should have wrote it LOVE IT
Tamara
I LOVED that poem its was as if it was writing for me me and my (ex)just now with throw this so I would have to say this is one of my favs!
Brittany
This Poem is my fav. I think it is alot like what did when I lost the man of my dreams and now we are good friends
monique
wow you have no clue how much that reminds me of my best friend and her now ex-boyfriend. that was very well writtin. i like how you left it open to any one in the same position. bravo i admire that
Jsyme
THAT IS A GREAT POEM! I HAVE FELT THE SAME WAY WHEN I BROKE UP WITH A REALLY CLOSE FRIEND OF MINE. KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND WRITING GREAT POEMS LIKE THAT ONE!
Ruth
I Really liked this poem, becuase im going through this with my baby boy even though we broke up there's still love there and hopefully we are meant to be!
Sarah
This poem embodies everything that I am going through. It touches on things I wish I could say in my poems. It reminds me of the saying "love can come from friendship but friendship cannot come from love. " I myself am trying to prove this wrong.
Paloma
I liked this poem b/c it is like what I feel about my ex-boyfriend. Kep up the good work.
ne ne
ooohhhh! I give this a standing ovation! This poem is so deep. Ive had so many relationships when I didn't want to let go but had to. Girl keep doing your thing you'll make it far.
Jessica
this is exactly what i am going through i love this poem
Lauren
You Win! You were the first to make me cry. I love this poem. It reminds me so much of my first love and first kiss. He recently went into the army, and I thought I would be okay, but it is so much harder than I ever could have imagined. I miss him so much, and I dream of the day he comes home, and hope he doesn't forget me, because I will never forget him.
tabatha
I love this poem. bc it touched me in so many ways it makes me think of a boy that i liked so much and we was so close to each other but now we are only just friends and sometimes i dont even think friends.
Latasha
It really falls through with what im going through. It made me cry
Joy
That was so good i really liked the end
nikki
i liked it
stephanie
I really got touched by this poem because the same exact thing happened to me. Keep up the good work on your poems cuz this poem really touched me.
Dayna
This is a great poem it makes me think of me and my ex-boyfriend.
Tammy
I loved it. It was a PERFECT description of the love problem I face right now. I dated a guy in 6th grade, and then I switched schools in a different city. We lost touch. I finally saw him again in 9th grade. Still as irresistable as always. I went up and said hey to him. We talked for the entire night. Well, a few months later, we started dating. It was wonderful. Then in 10th grade, I moved to a different state. Only 2 hours away, but still. Well we sorta dated through that . it was hard. The things went sour. I met a guy up here and it was just easier to date him. He was alot closer for sure. So we ended it right then and there. Well we didn't talk at all up until a couple nights ago. I'm a senior now. We are finally getting back in touch with eachother. It's awesome. This poem is a very good one and I love it! Keep it up!
Ariana
me and my boyfriend just broke up. and we started out as just friends and we made a promise that even if we broke up we would still be friends. i still love him and always will and i just couldn't put it into words to tell him so i e-mailed him this poem. this poem really helped me cry because i have been holding it in way to long thanx
Samntha
I like your poem alot but I do not like the fact that you say the last time you will see him is when you will die because it is kindove like you are jink-sing yourself and thats not cool!But I really like your poem,it really touches me because I just had my first kiss about a month ago!I also wrote you an E-mail or sumthin aboout this poem too!
L
i like thi poem because i can realate to it.
Kimberly
When I read this poem I cried. My boyfriend and I just broke up and this is exactly how I feel, I just didn't know how to put it in words. I can't thank you enough for posting that poem, it really touched me. Good Luck with all future poems!
Charlene
I love your poem very much and I was very touched by it
Kari
This poem explanes the exact way that i feel about a 'good friend' of mine. Only, i told him of how ifelt and now we no longer talk. It upsets me that he had to be that way but hey thats how things worked out for us. Anyways i loved this poem.
Jessica
This poem really makes me think of my first love, I loved him with all my heart and I still do but were over for now and i'm hoping that we can have another chance. All I can do is wait to see if we were meant to be but untill that day comes i want him to know that i will always love him and i will always be here for him! Thank you so much for writting this poem It really makes you stop and think!
Alexis
I really like this poem
DREAMY
this poem is really good im goin through some drama with my gurl n readin this kindda gave me an idea of what to do
mikeshia
I loved your poem it reminds me of somthing I wrote for my girl last year thank you soo much it touched my heart in all the right places
Rosalie
I like this poem because it reminds me of my old boyfriend that broke up with me.
traci
i loved this poem. it reminds me so much of what i going through now. OMG i loved ths. i wish i could wrie like this.
Dawn
I love this poem. My best friend/boyfriend broke up with me three days before our year anniversery; That was five weeks ago. I still love him with everything that I have. It touched me being able to relate to this poem. So many things happen between two people, even though they are teenage, it still means as much, and probably more. This poem was wonderful. Please keep writing.
Sherry
I really loved this poem. It touched me deeply cause u see my ex is in jail for 50 yrs and i still can't accept the fact that it is over between us. I love him with every beat of my heart and i never will love anyone like i love him. Your poem reminds me of that. You have a wonderful gift please write more.
Brandi
i love this poem. Me and my boyfriend were dating for 3 years and a few months ago we broke up but i still love him. This poem is really good i love it!
vanessa
I oved thsi poem it really got to me it said exactly how i feel
catrina
I just want to say thanks for writing that poem I thought for a second I was the only person hurting because I love someone who doesnt feel the same keep up the good work cant whait to read your newest
shaw tee
very deep very deep
john
I believe that this is the greatest poem on this site. I gave this poem to my girlfriend when we broke up. And at the time it was so hard for me to do it. The poem represented all i felt, and now we are still able to be friends. I believe this poem is great.
selina
lesley,i can't say 2 4get him bcuz you never will but you learn to deal with it. it's hard i'm sure you know of that. me and my ex boyfriend broke up a couple of months ago and he's on been on my mind ever since. i still love him,always will. this poem reminded me so much of how i feel. it's beautiful. i hope you have the strength to love again and have faith. love will come again.
Stephanie
This poem is so good, I am going through this exact thing right now. I just broke up with my boyfriend but in my situation he likes my friend, So good job and keep writing
Tina
I loved the way I could connect with your poem and the flow made it very nice to read. It's always hard to let the one's you love go.
Duffy
omg this is such a good poem! its exactly what i'm going through with my best friend/ex girlfriend! keep up the good work!
Kelly
This poem is great. It really dows describe me and my ex-boyfriend because we are going through the same thing. GOOD LUCK with your other poems.
Ranika
This poem sent chills down my spine cuz it was the extact thing I was going through. Thanks for your creativiy, cuz this more than a poem it is a story that most poeple go thru.
KAYLA
THIS PEOM IS THE BEST PEOM I EVER READ BECAUSE I FEEL YOU I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU ARE SAYING I HAVE FELT THAT WAY BEFORE
melissa
this poem is so true because sometimes couples need some time apart and they dont want their partner to think they dont love them any moreand they dont know how to tell them
FELICIA
HEY I KNOW HOW YOU FEEL THIS POEM IS GREAT THANLS FOR WRITING IT NOW I KNOW WHAT I WANT TO DO WITH MY RELATIONSHIP WITH MY BOYFRIEND
Zach
This really touched me. Me and my girlfriend broke up but we want to get back together. I told her that i was sorry, but she listened to her friend not me. So now it's all over and I'm so touched i'm really ccrying right now. Thank you for writing this poem.
Zach
This is very good.
April
This poem was absolutley touching. I want my ex to read this cuz this is how i feel about him. I no what your going through girl. Im going through it too. Especially since he is going with my bestfriend now.
danny
i love this poem because it remind me of y ex-boyfriend the way i felt when we broke up
cassie
This is a sweet poem I really like it alot it reminds me of the past relationships that I have had before
Jamie
This poem relates to my relationship right now with someone very special to me. I commend you for being able to put in words what I never could.
angel
well, i love this poem coz its so heart touching. well i remember the stroy of my friend. coz it has same situation. i hope that someday i can read more like this.
Keturah
This poem was really touchin. My cousin had sent it to me. I mean it was just so deep,but yet you still could understand everything. I mean every line meant something,and it was real tight. Gurl you can go somewhere with this poem. Gurl kept doin wat you doin cuz ya goin somewhere. You have my vote
tracy
grl i love this poem it really hit me it made me think of tha one i love and its the same thing i am goin through.
Muffin
This was a really great poem it reminded me of boyfriend that it was so hard to walk away from but it was something I haad to do. Keep Writing.
jajaira
I like this poem because it relates to my life. And it made me cry. I love poems that make me cry.
CeCilia
this is a great poem. i remember when me and my boyfriend broke up i had the EXACT feelings, it reminds me so much of what happened and now we are back together. this poem has really touced me keep up the good work!
hanna
i think that this poem applys to those who have a very deep personality and have loved and lost someone in there life at one point
poOke3
it's so beautiful~
babygurl
this is a very good poem, it kinda relates to what i am going though now, but we were torn apart by my parents!
kelli
this is such a nice poem it reminds me of me and my male best friend. when i read it, it was like someone else telling my story.
alisha
omg! i loved the poem it is exactly like me and my ex keep writing!
nicole
I LOVE IT. I am in the middle of letting the one i love go. I just hope the part about returning happens
Lala
I love this poem! I just broke up wit my b-friend and that is exactly how I feel!
Courtney
I like your poem, it explains alot that happens in everybody's life, just like mine. Your poem helped me to understand just what is going on. I would give you the best score on it. You can tell it is from your heart.
Courtney
Lesley, I really LOVED your poem. It really relates to me and my ex b/f. Just keep up the good work. You really write GREAT poems that poem you wrote was really GREAT.
VaNeSsa
Hey this poem is great. ! i can so relate to this.
Michelle
I want to thank you alot this poem helped me alot with my boyfriend it has been a big help i hope alot of people are touched by your poems
laura
lesley that was probabley the best poem i have ever read on this site! i wanted to cry when i started reading it because i can relate to it so easily. I feel that exact way about my ex-fiance brad but have never been able to write down how i feel. thank you for doing it for me.
Rain
Poems like this don't just come out because you felt like writing. you have to of experienced it. Me and my girlfriend are going through the same thing right now. many different problems and it's really hard. this poem Is awesome though. it helps
Jackie
this is one of the best poems i have ever read. it relates to what's going on in my mind and what's going on in my life now. i knew there were other people that felt the same and were in situations like this. but i did not know there were that MANY by all the other comments i seen and read.
Ashley
Your Poem was awsome and its exsactly the way I feel!
megan
that poems was the best t is so true really really true i wrote one so simaler to that today becuase every thing in that poem is wat im going through,, i love that poem you have got tallent and it was so wonderfull
Sheree
This poem is SO true. Right now I am with my boyfriend who I have known for 9 years. We Are happy together, but sometimes I think that we would be happier apart. I love him with ALL my heart, but I don't think that he is at that level in our relationship where he is ready to settle down with just one person. He assures me that I am his ONLY girlfriend, but then I hear different from his friends. It would hurt a lot to let him go, but sometimes the best things for you are the hardest! : )
Coleigh
I really love this poem and it makes me wont to break down and cry
Nicole
I love your poem so much. It feels like I'm apart of it because me and my boyfriens just broke up!
kim
I loved this poem, I knew i loved it because i cried! It reminded me of my ex b. f, he wasn't just a b. f he was my first love, who i still love and i miss every minute with him it was my fault thought i let him go now i regret it! Keep writing xxx
Ronni
I can definetly relate to this poem it is greatly written!
Megan
This poem is so much like a situation i was in its scary. I read this to my ex and he don't even like poetry and he was touched by it were back together now and we still talk about this poem so i wanted to tell you great writing and keep it up.
Michelle
I really liked your poem, and it reminds me so much of what is going on with me right now. I recently started dating my best friend, but it was much better when were friends so now i think i have to break both our hearts.
krystle
i loved the poem it really touched me u did a great job on this poem
chelsea
i love this poem it remeinds meeh ov mai realationship wid mai X boif frend that i still love.
Lindsay
You know a poem has touched you when it makes you cry, it relates to me so much!
alySsa
i LOVE this poem!write more llike it plz!
kim
i love this poem i can realy relate
Emma
thats my life!
jessica
hey i think this peom is really good it makes me think of my ex boyfriend
Matt
THIS POEM IS SOMETHING THAT REALLY HAPPENED TO ME AND IT IS THE BEST!
1LOVE
great poem! it reminds me of my ex! unfortunately, as much as we both would like to remain friends, our significant other has a different say. i still think of him, and at times i think i still love him.
Jenace
Personally I beleive that this is no ordinary peom, I think that many people can relate to it and it explains everything, I really loved it and it really got to me.
Alyse
I really like your poem and I can really relate to your poem. Your poem was one of the best I have read do far. It really made me think about things and I know I have to pass this pn to my ex-boyfriend!
Chelsea
OMG! your poem totally relates to me. I love it.
Ashley
OMG! THis poem really actually all happened to me. and ya it sux when it ends. and u cry evry night. but continue being their friend becuz they realize how tru u r eventually! TRUST ME its worth the w8!
Erica
This is a great poem. I just went through the same thing. It is great
keolanie
dis is a great poem. it reminds me about my first true love. keep up da good work
Becca
I love this poem. It means so much of what I'm feeling. Me and ex broke up recently n i cant seem 2 get all the memories out of my head and i feel i'm in love with him. Reading this poem made me cry its so soulful and i can realate
private
This is an awsome poem!GREAT! FANTASTIC! EXCELENT
The one and only
I LOVE ur poem! everything in ur poem is relating to me at this moment and this was something that really helped me know that i wasn't the only one thinking like this exactly.
Matt
This poem is awesome. When I read it, I felt me inside. It touched me in so many ways. God gave you an AWESOME gift, so dont ever let it go.
Latina
I can really relate to this poem becaus I am going through this smaething now, My ex-boyfriend and i just broke up about five months ago, but I am still in love. but I can't be back with him.
kris
I love your poem. a few months ago i went through a breakup that tore me apart. even though me and him arent very good friends any more. i still care. This totally explains my feelings that i had a few months ago! thanx!
Lisa
I can't describe how this has really and truly touched me. I just broke up with my boyfriend which I've been with for three years. It was and still is hard for me to look at him and see that he has basically forgot everything that we have ever did together. This poem has really inspired me to just accept the fact that if it was mean to be then it would. Thanx!
Lyndsay
I like this poem a lot because it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend and I a lot.
Liz
you poem is pretty wild its amazing how it holds so much truth congratz
yesenia
That was the best poem i ever read! i liked it very much. keep on writing
Sierra
I'm feelin your poem. It reminds me of my ex and our relationship. Nice poem.
La chaparra
ok i want to say i really love this poem but what i dont get is why u guys breakin up?r u leavin somewhere?well i really like it alot.
Jenny
i loved your poem. Im sure you have heard this a million times now but it relates to my relationship right now. Your a great poet.
hepua
I really love your poem it is the same way I feel for my ex but sadly we dont talk we decided it would be the best way to get over eachother but I still love very much!
Logan
Awesome poem. very well writtin and it shows the emotions and fealings that you are having.
Stephanie
I love this poem! It was really great!
Daniell
the poem relates to me perfecly exept my boy friend broke up with me!
Angela
I loved this poem. I'm going through a time where I feel exactly the same but I find it hard to say and explain certain things to my boyfriend but now I can hand him this poem and hope he understands. Thanks for being in the same situation in the right time.
Teresa
I love this poem I can relate to it, cause my boyfriend dump me
duane
this poems really hits the heart and i reccomend make sure you know what you are doing before you put a friendship on the line. i learned the hard way, thanks for this poem!
alma
i really liked your poem. that is exactly what i feel ever sinse me and my boyfriend broke up.
Shanna
THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM! YOU MUST HAVE PUT A LOT OF HEART AND ENERGY INTO THIS ONE! I REALLY AND TRULY RELATE TO THIS POEM. I GOTTA LET MY FRIEND READ THIS ONE! IT'S REALLY GOOD. YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF THIS POEM. A LOT OF GIRLS PROBABLY CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM, I KNOW I CAN! GOOD JOB!
KRISTY
AFTER 2 MONTHS OF MY FIRST TRUE LOVE WERE GOING OUT HE TOLD ME WE HAD TO JUST BE FRIENDS. THIS POEM REFLECTS EVERYTHING I WAS FEELING THAT NIGHT HE MADE THAT CALL. AND THAT'S WHAT I STILL THINK TODAY AS I SEE HIM IN THE SCHOOL HALLS. THIS POEM IS THE BEST POEM I'VE EVER READ!
lost
ohhh ur poem was tha best , it fully made sense to me , i broke up with mi b/f 3 yrs ago and i want to b there for him but i dont think he wants to know
Zoe
hey. that has just put things into words that i really need to say to my ex. i write myself but when it came to trying to explain that to my ex i just couldnt. with your help i now can. i have a new bf but the last one, well how could i ever forget him? all i am saying is. thankyou. x
Mya
your poem got me looking at the way I feel about my ex differently. thanks alot
angel
i really loved your poem.
Becky
OH MY GOSH! This poem relates to me so much! I recently started dating a friend and this makes perfect sense!
jas
this is the best poem
steph
i really like your poem. im going through the same thing right now with my ex. i really love him a lot, but i guess he cant see it. your poem has helped me. thanks
mary
few weeks ago i went through this, and no1 seemed 2 understand. and that only made it worse but this is exactly how it felt to me, so thanx 4 riting this, stopped me feeling so alone.
Teddy
This poems effects me so much. I love it. I sent it to my ex girlfriend just after we broke up. She asked me if I wrote the second half of it. It is in the same sort of style of poetry that I write. It is exactly what I have gone through recently. AWESOME!
MARCI
I JUST LOVED UR POEM! I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THAT FEELING!
Jenna
OMG! I love your poem. Its the same thing I'm going through right now. And your poem helped me alot.
K_k
Your poem was very nice and it relates to me and it gives me advice what to do thanks.
Jamie
Hey I loved that poem it really touched my heart. Right now I can relate to this poem and it made me have a few tears. So keep writing and I will be here to support. Thank you so much for writing a poem I can relate to.
Mark
I can clearly see I'm probably one of the only boys giving a comment to this poem. But hey, some guys like poems too ya know? And by reading yours, it has inspired me to write and possibly publish some of my own I have now, and will later have as I continue writing. Your poem has proven to me what I am most scared of at this point and time in my life: The fear of me and my girlfriend breaking up. I love her so much and your poem has inspired me to keep loving her just so that either of us won't have to go through what you have explained so vividly in your poem. Thanks alot and keep writing!
Joanna
WOW! I REALLY THOUGHT YOUR POEM WAS REALLY GOOD. I HONESTLY JUST GOT OUT OF A RELATIONSHIP, AND THAT WAS EXACTLY HOW I FELT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Mary
This poem helped me more then some people did when my boyfriend broke up with me.
Jacki
I think this is a great poem that expressed wonderfully the feeling that lots of people have when they need to break up but know there's still love between them.
kenni
I thought that was a good poem. It reminded me of my ex, I related to the poem. We broke up and are back to friends and it kills me everytime I see him, and I wish we didn't have to be just friends. It really was a good poem.
Rosa
Mija, your poem was the best one I've seen so far! I Feel exactly the same way about my boyfriend right now. he's in a whole different state and were still together but lately it seems as though were growing apart and he doesnt even call me anymore. So I definately understand the way you feel! Keep doing your thing!
T-Bab
I love your poem it touched me so much i kinda know what you feel cause i'm havin' the same feelin's about my boyfried(?) Thanks I thought i was the only one goin' through this de-li-ma
Lindz
This relates to my relationship perfectly. I am in love with my boyfriend and we have been together for a year and a half. He is probably moving away for hockey, and this poem is exactly how I feel.
maria
OH MY GOD! This is exactly how I feel about my boyfriend (ex). It's incredible! This is definitely how Iwould have wanted to write it if Iwould have had to. Thank you soooo much for expressing yourself like this because it really affected me deeply.
Cryst
You speak from ypure heart wich means you know youre heart wich is one thing I dont know. so continue to listen and love and remember you always wake up in a new day.
Mandy
I have read about 100 love poems and yours was the only one I related to. So keep writing girl and good luck w/ him!
Denis
Oh my god that poem is soo pretty. It described what i felt towards my ex b/f of 2 years everything that is in this poem is true its one of the nicest poems ever!
Elena
I just went thru this with my boyfriend. Your poem touched me deeply and I just want you to know that I think you have real tallent and you should pursue writing.
Mike
I can relate to this poem in so many ways. I had to walk away from a 2 year relationship four months ago. and I am still in love with her. This poem has helped me to start to get over her.
Kayce
This poem means alot to me. My current boyfriend and I have dated 4 different times. I know hes the love of my life and Im glad he came back to me. Thanks alot for this poem I totally understand where your coming from!
mal
Your poem is great. I about started crying. Keep up the good work!
gabby
beautiful, I love this poem! If I had da guts to send this to my ex-boyfriend instead of telli' him to his face that i wanted to break up it would have been so much better because this is totally how i feel.
nelle
I just got done suffering from my boyfriend breaking up with me and going out with my best freind, this poem has helped me realize that I am not the only one that goes threw this promblem. Thank you
moo
Oh my goodness. your poem seriously made me want to cry. I'm having problems gettin over my ex. but we're still great friends. It really hurts.
maria
i can relate to what you are saying and i am happy that at least someone else knows how i feel love is pain
Ashley
i really love this poem! it is great. it describes me yo a T. i was in a relationship and this poem descibes everything. great work
Ashley
I like poems that ryme!
Mia
Girl that was like everything i'm feeling
Marie
OMG! thank you for having the wisdom and courage to write this poem. it is beatiful. keep up the good skill. excellent. it reminded me of a person extremely special in my life. i'm pretty much living your poem
angie
i loved your poem. it is helping me with the relationship that i am in now. before i read the poem, i didn't know how to handle on telling my boyfriend lets be friends, but now i know that i can tell him without feeling much pain.
cris
Ur poems is great. I could feel of the love you feel for your ex-boyfrined. Keep it up , ur gift of writing the way u write. I would love to hear or see more poems from you.
Britt
i loved this poem, i could have used it 2 weeks ago when i broke up with my boyfriend of 1 year and 3 months. This showed me alot THANKS
LilMe
Hey, You know when I read this poem it was as if someone were telling a part of my life. The guy I liked for a very long time finally asked me out and said that he feels the same way about me. Sometime later we broke up because we both had problems in our life that we had to fix. We were constantly arguing and yet we loved each other very much. Not that long ago he called me up and asked me how everything was. i told him i have everything strait and he later said that he finally fixed his porblems and we can go back out. Ever since we've straitened our lives out we've have become very close. I think you and you're ex will get back soon. Becasue it seems like you are very in love.
Julie
Your poem was wonderful! I went through the exact same feelings. As I was reading it, it felt like I was the one writing. That poem was beautiful and I will forever rememeber that I am not alone in some siuations. That explained my last boyfriend perfectly!
mel
OMG YOUR POEM TOUCHED ME DEEP INSIDE I COULDENT FIND A WAY TO TELL MY BOY FREIND HOW I FEEL AND YOUR POEM EXPLAINS MY EVREY FEELING THANK YOU 4 WRITING IT
Em
i love this poem. this is exactly how i feel about my ex. We broke up 9 moths ago and i still love him with all my heart and he told me that we were meant to be so if it's tru i know eventually it will be again.
AnGel
LW. I really like your Poem. It is very well written. I can see were your comeing from. Just hang in there you will meet sum one that is better. trust me i've been there. i have now met the Love of my life
mel
This poem reminds me of my past love, and now im going to move on and knwoning that its hard and also knowing im not the only one. for now i thank the author who had wrote this poem to thank you and show how i felt to many others. what the author had express was teh same feelings that i had undressed.
Angel
this poem is really great and i liked it
ananymous95
I will never understand the opposite sex. The poem is good and I can make some sense of it but that just proves girls never know what they want.
Gaby
I loved this poem because it relates through what I am going through right now. It explains my exact feelings.
Nancy
i reaaly like this poem because i can relate to it now that my boyfrind broke up with me because he neede some time. Hopefuly is just "OVER FOR NOW"
Lala
This poem really touched me sometimes i feel like that just be friends and make the most of it but right now my man is all i want and got so i don't think i would be able to leave him.
nicol
this a perfect match to my life. i dated someone for 2yrs and HAD to let him go. and hope and pray everyday that we will soon be toghther again. i just hope it is sooner than later. i wish you the best of luck and completely understand
Kori
I reaallly can relate to this poem. my best guy friend for over 2 years just the other day told me how much he liked me and that he wanted a relationship between us and im trying to balance whats more important right now but this poem is all im feeling in words.
Kris
i LOVE your poem! itz exactly what happened between me and my bf. he has another gf right now and i hope that itz only over for right now. good job!
Harm
Hey, thats a really good poem and oh so true. When me and my boyfriend broke up we became bestfriends. and we got along great just like that, because we knew each other alot already, but then again i learned different things that i would have never if we remaind going out. It was a really great poem, keep em' coming!
val
wow i have never related to what someone else said so much! i put it in my info i hope u dont care, but thnx 4 putting my feelings into words!
britt
i have to recite a poem every week at school and this poem was exactly what i needed for the situation i am in. thanks
Tanika
this relates alot to me its a great poem and i love it!
pretty
this poem is great..it explains all ny feelings toward my ex, it hit it right on the head..
Alicia
I just wanted to tell you that I really loved this poem. My boyfriend just told me how he cheated on me and everything while we were together..he was my first love..i was with him for a year..this is the only thing helping me to get over him. Thank you!
betty
your poem is really good i didnt know how to break up with my boyfriend because we are having the same problems so thankyou so much
Joshua
This is a very good poem! I had to go through the same thing that you went though. I felt the same way.
Jessica
I love your poem. It reminds me of how I feel about my b/f right now. I told him we need a break right now. I hope he holds on untell i am ready. THanks for writing.
Kiwi
This was a great poem! I had the same feelings for my boyfriend of ten months then he broke up with me.
sweetie
wow, that was such an awesome poem. its EXACTLY what my bf and I are going through right now. Weve decided to take a break for a while but we arent seeing anyone else, and this poem is just how our relationship is right now. good work
Jessica
i really like this poem it was so real to what i felt before.
Michelle
LW I really enjoyed your poem because it explains how i feel right now since my boyfriend broke up with me and has a new girlfriend but he still cares abot me so i hope it is just over for Now!
kyle
This is such a great poem that really speaks for a lot people who have been through the exact feelings before. Copmletely amazing writing.
yoshi
sad poem =*( i can relate to the situation. I like your poem grl! =]
WEBB
I LOVED THE POEM IT REMINDED ME OS MUCH OF ME AND MY EX-GIRLFRIEND AND I JUST THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT.
Chelsey
I Love this Poem! It explains everything about the way I am feeling!
Shy
I Love Your Poem! It made me cry reading it because I just recently went through the same thing. OMG you understand ME!
Laura
That was really beautiful. I feel as if i experienced the same thing with my last boyfriend
JENNIFER
I REALLY ENJOYED THESE POEMS. I FELT LIKE I COULD RELATE TO THEM.
Toya
this poem is gr8. it made me cry and reminded me eactly how i feel about m ex. thanx
Jessica
AWESOME! I am a very sensitive person..I cry a lot..but I have seen soe really dumb poems that I think are ust stupid..but when I saw this..I actully cried! You did a fabulous job
Anna
well that poem reminded me on m and my ex I love him andt hurts me to know wear just friends we was together for aout 2 years and i miss hims much
maribel
it was a very nice poem.
Danielle
I thought this poem was really great. It was almost like you wrote down what i was going through. It was a really great poem. I reallt enjoyed reading it. You have alot of talent!
Megan
OMG this poem is exactly what i am goin through right now with my boyfriend.. and i hope that we dont brake up like u did but i know excactly how u feel! good luck with everything~
bianca
i thought the poem was great it really relates to me and the way i feel about a special someone. it's really good i enjoyed reading it.
barker
wow loved it all i just pray it works.
Michelle
this is an awesome poem. I just sent this to my ex boyfriend because you described our relationship perfectly. It was like you were reading my mind when you wrote it. It greatly inspires me.
Rochelle
I love this poem, it explains exactly what I'm going through with this boy I love and really care about.
BoRiCuA
This poem really touched me because this is EXACTLY how i feel and i'm glad that i'm not the only one going through this.
Ashlee
I love this poem it describes a situation I'm in right now. I am going to give this to my ex. It will make things so much better Thankyou
nicole
This poem is a great example of what I'm going through right now. To let everyone know, I still and will always love Andrew!
Sam
this poem is sad, i mean, its a good sad poem. it makes me break up cause i luved a grl like that b4, we were 2gether, then we broke up. i realli luv this poem, it has the ryte words and everything. out of all the poems i read, this 1 is the best 1, cause it relates 2 me the most. thnx 4 telling me thsi and reminding me about it.
angel
OH MY GOSH WO LOVE IT PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE U ARE SO GOOD AT IT- TELL U THE TRUTH MY FRIEND STEPHANIE WAS CRIYING WELL GOOD JOB!
Misty
this poem is the BEST!.And o so true!
yuyuka
This poem is BEAUTIFULLY structured. It expresses emotions and feelings that are undescribable! I LOVE IT!
Nikki
this was a great poem i loved it!
baby
I love your poem it is exactly how I feel about my very recent ex. We are now best friends and I still love him more than anything. Your poem made me cry, no poem has done that 2 me before
Crystal
I really love your poem, I am going through the exact same problem right now with my boyfriend. We just had a major arguement and I wasn't sure if I wanted to call it quits or not until I read your poem!
Abby
Over For Now was an awsome poem it reminded me of someone I did love so dear but it had to end and I could only call him friend.
Dee
I can that the authuor is writing from experience. I can relate!
Lee
this poem was so sweet..it reminded me of me and my ex..
nathan
That's exactly what my girlfriend and I thought was going to happen, i thought she wrote it, they have the same initials (LW) Thank god it didn't cos i love her so much
Neal
This poem almost made me cry when I read it. I like it a lot. Cheers!
YENY
THIS POEM IS AWSOME! this things are sooooo tru! no one knows when love can end and even though we never wish it did it happens... i've done some stupid things in the name of love, and then realized that he wasn't worth it but no matter what i will always love him!
amanda
I luved this poem because it reminds me of me and my exboyfriend (simon)and it's exactly how I feel about him..even though we aren't together anymore..this poem touched me deeply..
Mandy
your poem touched my heart.It's so true.I really admire your dedication to your friend
tabby
This poem was great and i can relate
Jazziebabe
This is a great poem it speaks the truth, and i think it is how alot of people feel they like me just didn't know how too express themselves. i myself write poetry but i had not been able too write for ages then i ready your work and found it really insperational.
Tara
This was a great poem. And it really touched me because I can relate to it sooooooo much and thank god that someone knows how I feel. So thank you LW for writing this poem. YOU have a gift from above.
cari
this was the best poem!! it took the words right out of my mouth! i feel the exact same way!!
SHARON
ONE WORD..PERFECT. I LOVED IT. MY LOVE OF MY LIFE MOVED FROM ME BUT I TALK 2 HIM EVERYNIGHT. I LOVED IT AND I HOPE 2 SEE MORE THANK U!
lil_cheer_angel
this poem really reminded me of this one relationship i had and i didn't know how to explain it to him. this poem is very well written and is one of my favorites!
chanisty
This poem is so true to me it gives me a feeling of not being the only person in the world going through those kind of problems.
Ellie
This poem depicts exactly how my heart feels right now.I nearly started crying after reading this. I love my boyfriend very much but school studies is keeping us apart. Hopefully like the poem suggests "Until we meet"again at the year of this year, things will be the same again. Love you Grant...
Tamara
I thought this was a really great poem and since I write poetry myself, I am glad that you of very few people can express your feelings in your words!
Shelly
This was the best poem I have read yet. It is reallly emotional and so true. My ex and I had the same problem and now, 4 years later we are back together and engaged. There is hope so dont give up. And keep writing - your great.
nancy
this poem is one of the best thing that has happend to me. I didn't want to end my relationship because I was scared to lose him but now we are closer than ever.
Lindsey
Oh my gosh girl that poem was amazing and it made me cry because I'm going through that exact same thing right now! :)
Andrea
Hey LW ~ I likes this poem because it reminds me of this guy I was seeing in the 9th grade I cryed so much when I seen it. It was so PEACHIE!
Jammie
I feel like a persons first love is every thing to them
lilmo
this poem is off the chan and i love it so very much cause it's keeping it real and you need to keep doing what you doing cause you are truly blessed
Jeremy
I am a poem writer myself and I have got to tell you this poem was intreguing not only how it was written bought there's that true feeling when you read it. Loved reaing your poem
Ashley
I really like this poem.This is exactly how I feel about my X.
Ashley
OMG I almst cried when i read this! It completely relates to me and my ex who I love so very much. its an amazing poem!
andrea
I LIKE THIS POEM SO MUCH IT REMAINS ME OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND SO MUCH THAT'S WHY I VOTED FOR IT.
chikfromhawaii
Yo LW, this poem is very very good. it seriously almost made me cry.
Tori
I loved this poem so much! i can relate to it so much when me and my boyfriend broke up i felt everything this person is describing in their poem. this poem is great
Tiffani
I loved this poem. Me and my first love just broke up and im still trying to deal with it. Its killing me cause 1 day he says he wants to be friends then the next day he doesn't. This poem explains EXACTLY what im going through. I keep reading it over and over again. Thank you for writing this poem i appreciate it so much. Keep writing poems cause you could go somewhere someday!!
tabitha
I really like this poem. It was written by my cousin.. love ya gurl
Sergio
This poem says exactly how i feel. I was suprised and and speechless when i read this because it desrcireds exactly the situation im in. Its a real beautiful poem!
Morgan
I am still with my Boyfriend right now and I am debating on breaking up with him because I love him so much, if that makes any sense. I relate to this poem and I agree with it too.
Jennifer
This poem was perfect for how I have been feeling lately about me and my ex boyfriend. It explains almost exactly the situation we were in. It was so much more than a break up it was about so many other things too. And now we are becoming good friends again..maybe even starting to be more.
Tiffany
This girl can write poems! She has a feeling like me when i had to call my boyfriend, just a friend. It's very hard, and I know it's very hard to get over!
shana
this poem tells all the story from what me and my ex-boyfriend have passed. Its increadible! i thought now one else felt this way before..soo many thanx to LW, this has a been a wonderful poem
Princess
cool poem hopefully it never happens to me!
Meagan
Pretty sad poem, brought "tears to my eyes". It is straight to point and really does happen. "Thank God it hasn't happened to me"! lol
supergurl
i love this poem! it says exactly what i have been wanting to say to my ex! this is a kick ass poem keep writting more!:)
JC
I REALLY LOVED YOUR POEM. I UNDERSTOOD WHAT YOU WERE TAKING ABOUT.
Avatar
Interesting poem. Although I am a guy, this poem describes my most current EX. She is now my best friend, although I still love her with all my heart, and she still loves me. Truly, love doesn't ever end, not until both sides give up!
Ashley
I love poetry a lot. And it takes a lot for me to consider a poem good or catch my attention. your poem was both of these things. I could almost feel what you were feeling. That poem was amazing! Keep on girl!
Jamie
I love your poem. This is the only poem that really shows how i feel about my ex-boyfriend. He is my best friend and i cant wait till the day that were together again.
Kelly
I loved this poem. It made me realize that there's always hope when it comes to everything.
Yani
I love it, my kinda same situation.
Erica
I LOVE IT IT WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ
jill
im left speechless! this is exactly the situation im finding myself in. i thank you for writing such a touching poem. it makes me feel good to know im not the only one that goes through something so heart breaking!
Nicole
You did a wonderful job with this poem. It actually means something to me b/c I went through..no lie.the same thing as you. "My first true love..my first kiss" Yea that was me too. Good job
Nena534
this is a very good poem.this expresses my exact feelings towards my ex.
Jacinda
I went through the same emotions as she is explaining! My love for him will always be..one day i hope were together because our love was something special, he was my angel, my love, my everything and now all of that is gone. this poem was something that im experiencing. I will always love him! From now.until the day i die!
christine
i've recently broken up with my ex and this is absolutely how i feel right now. it describes exactly what he & i are both going through, and even though i have moved on & have a new bf i still feel this way about my ex, i love him dearly & will forever.
nickmills
really good poem
linsey
oh my gosh..i absolutley love this poem..whoever wrote it must've had pretty strong feelings..i gave it to my ex-boyfriend..he told me that he loved me and i got scared..that is why i broke up with him..but now..i realize..that it was love that i was feeling the whole time..and now he knows that..and we are together at last! thank you soo much for writing this poem..it really means a lot to me!
rosa
this was an xselent poem it made me cry itsr really deep and meaning full
Candace
That poem really did touch me. It actually made tears swell in my eyes. Because i knew there was going to be a time for me to go back to just being friends with the guy i really care for. Keep writing wonderful, touching poetry. Thank you
Veronica
I loved it. Its the best poem I have ever readed
Sunshine
This poem is so good it made me cry. It tells what the majority of us women need to say and just can't find the words.
Nelly
I think that's a very good poem and it really got to me because i just broke up with my boyfriend and i think it has a really good deep meaning.
shelley
it's exactly how i felt!!!
Jayme
This poem is alot like what has happened to me and my boyfriend and it made me cry. This is such a true story.
Chandra
LW this poem you wrote is an awesome poem and the funny thing about it is that your saying what I just went through with my boy, and just to let you know your poem is very beautiful!!
Lennie
This poem really reminds me of how thing ended with my first love. I really like it!!
JaNeLLe
everything in this poem is SO true. I've experienced the same feelings with my first love!!!
Danielle
OMG! I totally loved you poem! your the greatetst! xoxo Bye hun
VaLeRiE
I really enjoyed reading this poem; it really made me think. It really relates to me, but the only difference is that i'm still with mah beloved boyfriend. But there are times when we fight so much, i think it's time to end the relationship and just be friends. It's so hard to do that when it happens thought and i usually end up not breaking up with him. i'm really glad that i haven't yet, cuz i still really love him. Thanx for your poem, it really touched me.
Trisha
very very impressing!! great job
peter
very good
andrea
i can really relate to this poem. it was excatly what i was just going through, and i'm not sure if i still am. but this is a great poem!!
kendra
i thought that was a true poem. it was real good!
Richard
I thought this was a beautiful poem. It reminds me of my first love, which I recently came in contact with,again. I wish for you to find love again,because,as you know, true love is hard to come by.
Joy
This is a great poem it goes along with how you feel after a hard breakup
Dan
Really great poem your not the only one who has ever felt this way it kinda makes you feel good in a way knowing that you know what its not only you that deals with this and that not everyone is perfect and good
Yasmin
This poem got to my heart because its exactly what i'm going through.
ashley
wow boy i know just what you mean great poem it really hit home
Sunnie
I loved this poem It really touched my heart. I write poetry myself and I know exactly where these people are comming from. I just can't stop reading.
Cortney
honest, sincere, true.
pixiebell420
this was a fantastic poem!
Shenne
It's such a nice, touching poem! You can really put your feelings into words very well. All the best in whatever decision that is made :)
kristina
this poem describes me and my ex so much. we were best friends before we dated. and now that we are broken up, i have lost two things very dear to me. a good friend and a boyfriend. this is a very well writtin poem
Lisa
This is the cutest poem ever!!! You took the words right out of my mouth.... i think it was writed for my ex-boyfriend (my best friend) and me!
marian
this poem is so beautiful. i love it.
Jason
I think that the poem was very well written and it helped me think about a lot that has happened between myself and this girl
lisa
I would like to thank LW soooooooooo much for her touching beautiful poem. I couldn't believe how much I related to it as I just broke up with my boyfriend. I really thought I was the only one feeling like this! Thank you!
Kacey
I loved this poem. It is exactly how i felt about my X-Boyfriend. It was perfect on how I felt. I love finding poems that explain how I feel about things and this is perfect.
Kizza
sick poem i used it! it works well
Gina
THIS IS ONLY THE THIRD POEM THAT I HAVE READ OFF OF THIS SITE BUT I REALLY LIKED IT. I EVEN SAT AND WROTE IT DOWN. IT REMINDS ME OF MY EX-BOYFRIEND, WE WERE TOGETHER FOR A YEAR AND I HAD TO BREAK IT OFF BECAUSE IT WAS UNHEALTHY BUT I DO STILL LOVE HIM VERY MUCH AND I WILL ALWAYS BE HERE FOR HIM. ANYWAY, KWWP UP THE WONDERFUL WRITING. ITS BEAUTIFUL :)
Angel
i like this poem because it is sweetest thing ive heard of and because it reminds me so much of me and my boyfriend and because we just broke up and i knew the day would come when i had to be just friends and i hate it and it is like i know where this guy/girl is coming from. so i just wanted to vote this poem #1!
Mya
that poem was real touching as i was reading that it felt so real this feels like what i'm going through right now and it hurts
Randy
I thought the poem was a great explanantion of what she was feeling. It caught my attention in the beginning and kept me reading.
sheila
i am in the same exact situation right now and your poem made me realize that maybe if it was meant to be, me and him will be together again
Denise
this reminds me of me and my ex
steve
This poem describes my relationship perfectly. i love it. i want every poem you ever write about love. send it to me. your great.
Denise
THIS WAS THE GREATEST PEOM I HAVE EVER HEARD
Tina
I was really able to relate to your poem, I think you did a great job on writing it!
ANGEL
I LOVED YOUR POEM, IT REMINDS OF AN EXPERIENCE THAT I HAD WITH MY CURRENT GIRLFRIEND.WE WENT OUT THEN SHE DUMPED ME BECAUSE I FLIRT TOO MUCH, THEN SHE TLOD ME SHE LOVED ME AND WE WENT BACK OUT.
Jenny
i love him so much, and yet i only want him to be happy. he would be happier without me. thanks for the poem, i think its just what i needed to tell him.
Aarron
a great poem..
joanna
i love this poem
Rachel
i really enjoyed this poem that was written. it brings back many memories, keep writing these types of poems
may
I feel what ur saying in this poem.it's what I feel sometimes.
NICOLE
I AM REALLY FEELING THIS POEM BECAUSE IT EXPRESSES HOW I AM FEELING AT THE MOMENT. I'VE BEEN THERE AND I AM STILL GOING THROUGH MY FIRST LOVE BREAKUP
Christina
I love this poem so much, It reminds me of me and my ex boyfriend. Even though we are apart I still love him. He was my first kiss and first love too. I though that I was the only one that thought like this. We don't talk anymore but I will always be here for him If he needs me, I will open my heart and arms to him again. Once again this poem Is the BEST!!!
Linda
This is a sad poem but i think it was well written and thought about. I really enjoyed reading it and i hope you keep it up.
Louturia
I think this is an excellent poem. I was trying to come up with the perfect words for someone very special to me without hurting their feelings but I found it hard, this poem is just right!
Amanda
I have been dating my boyfriend for two years and I know that it is going to end someday. Now I know what to say I how I feel thanks for the poem on-line you are an awesome writer.Don't stop!
Kiana
This poem tells the truth about relationships that have died but are not dead.
belinda
that is such a beautiful poem...it touched my heart!!!
jessica
This is the poem that has gone in to my heart and it says the same thing that im going throw now.