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His Paradise by Amanda D Besserer

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VICTORIA

I THOUGHT YOUR POEM WAS SWEET AND TO THE POINT.

Chrissy

beautiful and true!

Monica

very strong loving poem!

Robyn

its amazing and beautiful. very precise but yet wonderous.

Amber

I lov this pice it is really nice, it is short and sweet which is how alo of poems should be great job!

Oceania

I love this poem

sarina

beautiful.

Shemeka

this is a very good poem and whom ever wrote it should keep up the good work. sincerely, SHEMEKA R. TAYLOR

Tiffany

Amanda was saying some of the things I have been feeling about my relationship and never knew how to say it! Thank you for saying them for me! Tiffany

corinne

Just the kind of poem I love to read. My exact words to my lover.

Pamela

Very Hot. Great poem

Candice

This poem was very nice, I liked it and I sent it to a very good friend of mine.

nicole

i love this poem it's great!

Triasia

I think this is really sexy and romance poem every gurl can relate to all the girls out there who want to be a boys fanties.

Katie

You poem is GREAT! ~SEND ME MORE~

vannessa

i love it!

Brooke

I enjoyed this poem a lot. I thought the person who wrote this took thier time and effort into this poem. GOOD JOB!

ANNET

THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL I AM CRYING AFTER READING IT IT IS JUS WONDERFUL YOU DO IT

Mandy

that poem was really good you obviously gave it alot of thought and in a way i can relate to it so don't stop, your poetry can take you far i know because it did it for me

salome

VERRY NICE POEM. WELL DONE JOB KEEP UP!

inita

keep up the good work.

ChArLEnE

I really liked your poem.It was short and simple but right to the point

jeannie

very beautriful poem, would love to hear the story that inspired it

Jennifer

Very Good Poem..Very Nice work..

Jen

This poem was soo simply romantic..reminds me of a long distance yearning for love..beautiful

rangle1

I enjoyed this poem very much. It explains how alot of feel inside.

Misty

GReat poem

Stephanie

I Love it,it says so much in so many ways.

Kate

now that was hot

Ashley

It was really great! Keep um coming

David

Just wanna say great poem,it rocks! like so many in here that lag in imagination..yers stands out!

Leighe

NNiiccee!

Martha

wow! a really good poem. It's deep, touching, perfect. I give it a 10. (*_~)

Precious

I love it. It was short and sweet.

Violetz

A wonderful depiction of the endless human struggle to surrender to love.

BDA

Lovely

Susan

I wish to be his fantasy too, but know it cannot be.

The use of aliteration would have created a prolotariate feeling to your poem. Thus the emphasis would have been on a confrontation of love and not a metamorphic reaction, but i am impressed

Cindy

Quiite moving

Dustin

That not a bad poem keep writing

Mariann

simple way to describe true love

Sylvin

this poem is the best of the best

Tiffany

Girl, that was the bomb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lindsay

that was awesome!

kanisha

I just would say I know how she is feeling in this and it is completely beautiful to want to give your all to be complete in osmeone else world of lust and love and passion. I like all the words that she chose.

Lyn

Beautifully said...

mark

Hits the spot

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