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Nearly Unnoticed by Reese

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i love your poem it really reflects me alot
I am the girl in that poem. That's me!
a poem that is beautiful
dis really touched me coz i woz in da same sortof prob where da depression ddnt show on da outside
the poem was great.
That was beautiful.
Wow. Just, wow. This is exactly how I'm feeling right now in my life, all rolled up in a neat little package. This is a great poem, keep up the good work.
ur poem has alot of emotion in it and i really like it
i cried.
I was suprised by the fact that im not the only person going through this i thought i was stupid for being depressed but i guess im not alone i meen who would think me sad?? nobody notices nobody tries to help that pisses me off reese thanks for this poem i feel so much better.
This poem described totally how I felt and still feel. My dad is never there and my mom is always in the hospital battling the eating disorder that threatens to take her life. The only thing that pulled me through this year was a group of teachers from my school who showed they cared when I thought I couldn't go on anymore. I hope to tell them someday how special they were to me and how they saved my life, even though they don't realize it, but anyway, i loved your poem and I hope you'll write more like it. Thanks!
I felt exactly like this a few weeks ago and i feel that this poem expresses how i felt perfectly
That was an amazing poem. I'm the exact kind of girl you described b/c i always smile and as long we smile no one cares. i just someone would see beyond my smile. great poem!
hey i think tht it is just brillaint! i understand it totaly! its gr8!
i know everyone says that this poem is exactly how the feel. well its true , this poem to me relates to how i feel when im around my best or ex best friend.
Wow. Such a great poem. This was how I felt not too long ago. It's reassuring to feel less alone, and that's exactly how you made me feel, thanks to your poem. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.
This was the most incredible poem I've ever read. It says everything perfectly. This is exactly how I've felt for an entire year. invisible and unnoticed. I've been trying to write a poem myself about this but have not been able to capture the right words. Thank you so much for letting others know that we are not alone.
This is an amazing poem. i can really relait to it. i really dont know what to say about it as i was breathtaken that someone can write a poem so true to someone like me. this poem has inspirered me! thank u!
lets see. thats exactly how i feel. specially b/c no1 would ever think sumthing like that of me,and thats what hurts my the most,to sit there and have everything just poor out,and no one notice
oh great poem! this totally describes me, i always feel like no one notices me, thanx for a great poem! :):):)
i liked it very much
I just wanted to say that I feel the same way and I dont think that anybody should ever go through this. I had to since Kindergarten and now I am in 10th grade. So if you are one of those people that dont 'notice' us take a look around.
Awsome. Awsome
I really loved your poem. It's exactly what I'm going through and feeling right now.
I really loved your poem. It's exactly what I'm going through and feeling right now.
I love this poem. It is amazing. Exaclty how I feel.
Reese describes how many people including me feel about depression.
I like most can relate to this and i think it's sad that there is that many people in this world that feel like this including me!
this poem is just amazing i actually cried reading it its exactly me and my feelings its how i feel every secound of everyday thanx for sharing it helps to know other people feel the same way that i do your an awsome writer keep writing!
This poem is a great truth for many people. Many of us feel unnoticed during our life -and probably are for many-. I don't think they really notice us and it seems to me that they don't even try to notice us.
i think this poem is good i can relate ive been through alot and im sad all the time but no one notices or cares i sumtimes cry and dont know y im alwayz sad but i cover it up with a faded smile so i can say i relate
This poem is awesome I know what your going thru.
just wanted to tell reese that this poem is full of beauty. you have wrote what i have been trying to say for a long time.
AMAZING POEM! thanx for sharing
This is how i feel everyday of my life i just cant expressit qand u have in this poem thank you
I am 33 years old and can so relate to ths poem that it hurts you took was in my heart and soul and wrote it
This is my favorite cause it's the one I most relate to. I think the authore of this poem is a realy good poet and can probably relate to this poem like I can.
I can really relate to this poem, it describes exactly how i feel evey day.
Amazing. I think this poem captures exactly how it is for so many people. I know when I first read it I felt as though it were about me. There is hope out there for all of us who are screaming on the inside, and this poem shows that we arn't alone as there are so many of us in the same situation. Hope, love, and peace to all of you.
your poem is so much like how my life used to be.
this is so beautifully written. I have depression and I don't tell anyone how I feel so I feel like he wrote this about me.
This poem reminded me of a friend (if you replace the "her" and "she" with "him" and "his"). He's always alone, and this poem reminded me of him. Great work.
by reading the comments i realize that i am not alone but i am still unnoticed
It seems as though you wrote this poem while in my head! I feel this way so much and by reading this I realize I am not as alone as my mind thinks!
hey i hope someone notices you and helps you
I just want to say that this poem is so true. I read it and I feel that you know exactly how and what I feel.
that was so beautiful
This poem is great it states so well what its like to go into a depression and know that nobody can see you cry inside even if you wish the could but are to scared to say so. Its usually the people that you don't expect that do the most damage to themselves and its usually because nobody cares (at that what i thought when nobody noticed) , but this poem means you are noticed and everyone who reads it cares.
This is an amazing poem it is short yet gets to the point it says so much. This is exactly how my life is and im relived to hear that people have gotten thru what i am going thru and what i have been going thru for 5 years.
I've read this particular poem several times now and it never ceases to amaze me! It's really beautiful and it touches me deeply
i totally feel you. i was seriously, clinicly depressed for years. thanks to 2 1/2 years of counsling and paxil, i am better, but this describes where i was. wow.
I know how you feel. I was in love once with a guy. He never once took notice to me. It's like he saw all but me! I just melted into the background forever alone. I'm a poet too.(mostly 'bout sad poems of lost love.) You have a talent, never waste or take it for granted.
This is a beautiful poem! I have felt the very same way a time or two. I truly hope the poet is doing better now!
this poem is so good because it hit me where it hurts- i have a friend who is very much alone (she has attempted suicide a number of times) and this poem captured her for me- i could see her in this poem. thank-you
I never read a poem that actually explained my life so well,the poem spoke to me so clear.
this was a really great poem it hit at the heart of depression.
i can agree with this poem directly when i was in my early stages of depression
I think this poem was good. But, I think you should of went for the unthinkable for the title. The poem you wrote gets people's attention, it is noticed. Your note nearly unnoticed at the end, so for the title you should of written Noticed. People wouldn't expect that, it's daring. Keep writing poems though.
this poem was interesting. it was calling my name, and it touched me. i liked it a lot. it is exactly how i feel.
This poem explains my life so well. I appreciate the fact that you care and write these poems. I am now trying to receive help from the doctor
i love the poem
Hi Reese, What a sad poem. It reads as though you have entered my life and know what is going on in my confused mind.
I really know where you were coming from here. I still feel this way sometimes.