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Little Sister by Michael D.

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Brontae
this poem seems to me athough you family and friends may seem to pass by suicide,dieses,or problems people have to remember that they are always with them in the heart,mind and soul to guide you on a new road to a better life i have heard that god takes the good ones first and i understand better now that its not just something to put your self on guilt its hats inside how they made you feel before the passed on to a new life
Karen
This Is a really lovely poem- you always say that you don't love your siblings and you always fight with them, but you do love them and there is no turning back the clock when they are gone. I love my older sister very very much and I would hate to lose her. I tell her a lot that I love Her so she knows before anything happens to her.
Alyssa
OMG ! this poem is absolutely incredible ! i have a little sister who is autistic and everything you mentioned here has been in my mind ever since i found out that my little sister had autism ! I LOVE IT !
Corinne
your poem was sad . i lost my grandpa and my aunt to cancer. but i know they are at peace and watching over me everyday. it was a good poem
Devan
that was a great poem i cryed so hard i thought of my sister and what i would do if something happen to her i would go crazy
Katie
I Love this poem it is very good!
Amanda
I thought that this poem was very good and awsome because it showed how diffacult loosing someone really is!
Diana
I lost my mom to two brain anerisms. I know my spelling of it is wrong. But she died after surgery but while she was in she went paralized on her left side. That caused her brain damage and the tissue started to slip down her spinal cord. She died at age 42 and still look like she just got out of college. She was so butiful but I was 14 at the time she died and I remembered crying when her chest forgot to raise.
priscilla
Your poem is sad. It really touched me. my little sister died of lukimia cancer just this year january. it hurts to know that she's gone but we have to live with it don't we.
Christa
I really love your poem. I am sorry for your loss i also know what you are going through. Just a few months ago i lost my sister who was only 8. I love your poem keep it up.
Lindsey
Your poem was very touching. I'm the only child but to imagine a child that age going so soon. No matter what she will always be there with you. I'm sorry to hear about your little sister.
Nasty
wow,I don't even know what to say,except that that poem is one of the best I ever read! Great job,keep it up!
robert
i loved your poem. so much it made me cry. i lost my twean sister. 10 yr ago and still mess her. loved it and god bless you
Andre
I am sorry for your loss. But God looked into her eyes and said this little girl will suffer no longer. He said no more pain, for she has suffer to long. For she will always be with you and never leave your side.
dreia
hey i'm sorry i feel ur pain because i know how that feels i lost my sister to and she was young and tears still fall out of my eyes today. god bless them
drea
hey look i'm really sorry for what happened but i feel ur pain . the same thing happened to me i lost my sis at a young age and i'm really sorry because i know how u feel. god bless them above
Bryanna
I love your poem! Tears are coming down my face! I am really sorry for your loss and my condolenses go to you and your family! She lived such a short life! I'm very sorry!
Benjy
Michael was my best friend. If I could ever scrape up enough sadness in my life to fit in his finger, I don't know that I would make it. But above his circumstances he had risen, and is so much better than any of us can ever hope to be.
Jennie
When i read this poem i got chills down my back. I see everyone saying there sorry for your lose.but im not going to say that. Im going to say. You were So lucky to have Such a blessing from god. God needed another angel. Dont mourn on the loss. Rejoice now that she has no more pain. I loved the poem and thought you did an excelent Job!
shishir
A true reflection of brotherly love. A perfect '8 1/2'
shishir
A poem that really touches your feelings. A fine composition indeed!
Belize
im sorry for what happened to you you are a great person
Louise
I share the same experience with the author.
S.J
Sad I'm sorry for this tragic event
hope
my sympathy cannot change the past but i'm sorry for your loss