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Suicide Poem, A Sonnet by Stage Diva

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Brittany
This poem really touched me and I think you did a really good job with it.
Alley
Even though I am not suicidal I like to read poems about what others go through. I think this poem portrayed the feelings of the author very well. I loved it. Even though I am never going to commit suicide.
Ashlee
This poem helps me to understand that I am not alone in the way I feel. I would like to thank you for putting this on the internet. It has helped me in many more ways than anyone would know.
Skip
Alot of the heavy metal music artists i listen to use big words and metaphors to make the lyrics sound elegant even if the guitars sound like lawn mowers i suppose thats what caught my eye on this particular poem.
SHEZZA
i don't understand this poem but its good and creative
sara
This poem is amazing. I get chills everytime I read it. Everything that defines a sonnet is in it; the iambic pentameter, the rhyming, the patterns. I just absolutely love this poem. Excellent job! (The last two lines are beautifully composed) :-)
Krissy
I think it was amazing and it was exacally how im feeling right now. keep wrighting you trully have a gift.
Bree-Ann
it was fantastic
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it was good, i like it
Helen
Hey This POem really touched me, I have tried to commit suicide many times and this poem really cinected with me.
ashley
I loved this poem. It has so much emotion put into it. all I can say is you're not alone. others feel the same way out there.
katie
this was really good
leila
i think this poem is fantasitc, it sounds like it has a twist, extremly mind blowing. i think the author of this poem should continue making extrodinary poems like this one, i only wish i had the same talent as this author
Kimberly
I thought it was beautiful. The writing, and depth in this poem really touched me.
kelli
i am a 15 year old girl who had suffered from depression and suicidal thoughts and this really helped me understand what other people go through i loved it it was great
Angie
i have poems exactly like this. Cutting for me was a release, a beauty that i could never understand. you captured those moments just like i have attempted to. Thanks
Kristin
This is a wonderful example of those who are not understood inthe most precious and valuables of times. I'm a poet myself I'm just looking for a publisher to publish my book.
Punk
this peom really touched me it was the same way with me that's what i felt inside it was great to read it from someone else.
sky
it was great i really felt with the poem
Cindi
This is one incredible poem. I think it speaks for most of us that are depressed. Keep writing, maybe we'll see some of your poems in a book one day in the future.
Darkness
Love it! Defenitly
sarah lianeth
that poem really touched my heart. its so great. i wish i have a talent like that because to tell you honestly i love poems very much. no lines 2 say but nothing compares.
Alissa
10 outa 10! Seriously, this poem hit so close to home, I went through the same thing, and I have barely over-come it. But this is definatly a way for people to know what we go through
Amanda
I am 13 years old and some time si feel like killing myself but its these kind of things that help me hold on. The cuts on my arm tell me i dont have such a good future ahead of me and some times i am scared 4 my self. I loved ur poem.
megan
I loved the poem. it really touched me and I myself have had thoughts of suicide and it's just nice to know there are other people that are going through what I am.
Jennifer
OMG- this poem is touching to me alot. I have made so many poems about suicide. I use to hate my life. I still do but sometimes u think about it n wonder why would u give up a life that a young baby who died could of had. This poem is one of the best poems. Its touching, its sad, and i admire it. For a short poem, it means so00o0o much to me. WEll, al i wanted to say is that this poem is good. Actually it is GREAT! Good Work on this Poem. And make more that are as touching. GOOD WORK! And i think that poem made me think more and more. Tears are running down now. !
Alexandra
This is a wonderful poem. it 's also very romantic. Just lovely.
Samantha
It just. ment alot to me. Thats all I really have to say
Brittany
This was a very good poem that touched me and made me thin about every one that wants to kill or try to kill them selfs. i hope you write more like this.
MaRI
These poem really relates to all my feelings
Frankie
Every word is truly beautiful, yet it is still very depressing. But isn't life a package of depression? I guess that's up to us to decide which path we would like to take when sadness overwhelms us. 10/10. You are a skilled writer.
monica
it makes you think alot. you have a gr8 message.
amy
this poem makes me feel like someone understands how i feel and i realize im not alone someone does understand also before i go this person is a true poem writter
Brittany
Whoa this poem resembles me alot but i thought it was awsome i would give it a 10/10 if i was a judge it really brings out emotions and thoughts i liked it alot
Tachina
It touchec me deeply. It made the scars on my arm tingle. It's very good.
wayne
love the poem excellent 10/10
Kelsie
This poem is one of the most beautiful I've ever read in my life.
Tonya
it was great
Rachelle
I loved your poem. I'm currently searching for suicidal poems for a speech I am to present at a number of tournaments. I'm hoping that I may use your poem in my speech, and (of course), give you full credit for it.
Natalie
the poem is very deep,beautiful and sad.
vicky
words can not express how much your poem touched me. big talent. Xx
Jessica
This was a really good poem. it is so good i am going to use it for my speech project! This Poem has really touched me and made me think about things and how i am glad i have things going good for me right now!
Kelli
I loved your poem. It was truely fascinating.
allen
i thought you did a great job writting this poem i truly enjoyed it
Paula
I enjoyed the poem. It was full of imagery and allusions that made it more interesting. This plus the fact that the subject was handled so well makes this a great poem. I hope you continue to write.
Joe
That has to be the greatest poem i have ever read. You put into words what i have felt for so long. You have a great talent and i hope you keep writing.
lina
beautiful structure. The choice of wording is very admirable. well done my friend and may your talent bring you places.
John
That was absolutely stunning! There is a profound sense of emptiness and regret, an excellent rhyme scheme, and a dark, moving aura over the entire work.
Sofia
i love your poem. it describes alot of what i feel, as im sure millions of people out there feel. im glad you've voiced it so that we wont forget we're not the only ones feeling the same way.
A
Wow. A lot of thoughts in this poem. You've done a great job. I'm just very sorry that some people feel this way. I wish there were something I could do to help
Sara
That poem reached me deaply because I went through everyhting with suicide. I then realized that no matter who likes or dislikes me my life was worth it to me. You have a very good talent, keep up the good work.
k-lee
loved the poem it touched me so something ive been going through my whole life not sure if i kno or anyone else knows why?
Chaz
This poem was really good, the ending was just amazing. well done!
Linda
I'm pretty dense about poetry but the last few lines were very moving. "the curtain fell too soon" "razor's edge grazed my skin like the moon" or something like that.
Robert
it says a lot iam going through the same and need help with my family cause they hate me all of them.
april
i really loved your poem. i feel this way right now. i been to 4 hospitals and still havent been cured. it just makes me feel good to know that these same thoughts and poems are running through other peoples heads. THANKX! with lots of love:(
rose
very good sonnet i really enjoyed very much keep up the good work
Iris
I liked this poem. It describes the things I have felt before.
ali
I think this poem is one of the best ever poems that I have read, it must have come straight from your heart, I to write poetry, mine is very depressive, because i have been through alot and am still.I could reall relate to this poem and know exactly how you feel deep down, this poem bought a tear to my eye and I felt that feeling you do when you finally realise someone understands you!I feel empty, but knowning someone has the same thoughts as me really helps alot!Thanx for your innate talent I feel I belong
Shaz
It's an strangely beautiful poem, almost intoxicating. I think it's good how it sorta snaps the reader into realising the lure of death, and how you will miss so much if you listen to the tempation that's there. I wish I had read it sooner.
Thuy
Those words are sooo deep! And has a great meaning to love life.
SW
Wonderfully written to decode the suductress of masochism. Lovely.
no
Very well written
Amanda
I loved this poem so much. It was deep and very real!
Mariana
This poem is one of the only ones i have read that actually feels like deppression
shabrion
i feel where u r coming from in your poem. i cried as i was reading it because i can relate to it. i was at that point in life. i had to go through a lot in life for me to get to that point. i thought it was the only way out. im glad i wasnt the only one who felt this way. you should write more poems about this situation. and you should write a positive way to solve this problem and tell people that death is not the way out. thats what i had to find out.
JESSICA
THIS POEM HAS A TEMPTING TASTE FOR DEATH IN A GOTHIC FORM I ENJOYED THIS ONE. COMPLIMENTS TO THE CHEF.
Críona
This touched my heart and helped me understand why he did it..thank you.
Lyndsey
This poem was really great and gives a good image.
Abby
This poem is so true of how I feel a dn how a lot of other feel. Going through life each day being scaredt o wake up in the morning and just wanting it all to end is what a lot of teenagers and adults feel. But it certainly moved me in a way I will never forget.
reha
very good
Megan
I really like this poem. It says a lot about what I have been feeling lately, although I am too scared to do that, but I have thought of it before and I just really like this poem!