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Remembrance by Brier

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shauna

loved this poem it made me question myself. great write.

jenna

i think,this is a very sad poem!this poem will touch meny peoples hearts!the peoples heart it will touch the most is those who have lost thier kids for this reason!

Ashley

this poem really touches me b/c i just had a friend that comitted suicide last night and she is only 15 yrs. old.

Sheri

Your poem really relates to me. I was touched by the words. I used to think that was the answer for everything. by slitting my wrist. I have slowly stopped seems like each time I did it the pain was making every thing go away. but my life still isnt that great. but day by day Im surviving. enjoyed reading your poem though.

Whitney

Poem makes you think about who is really there for you in life. great poem

kayla

that poem was sooo good ! i loved it all it made me realize what ive been doing to myself is not the right choice thank you

sandra

I think your pome is great I hope you win. !

Crystal

This Poem is so in depeth, i can relate to this so much. because it is talking bout a girl who was going through alot and was wanting to kill her self. i have tried that before, but it isn't worth killing yourself over some guy or over any one. God has put as all here for a reason and he has a plan, i read that poem to my mother and she cried, because it brought back memories for her and she looked at me and have you ever tried that anymore, and i didn't answer her. i am 15 yrs old and i have tried it twice. So if any young people reads this, please take heed. and not take your life or try to take your life for anyone else. Good Job keep up the good work!

Angie

Awesome Poem, reminds me of when I was a little girl

Rum

I really loved this poem. I actually cried when I read it cuz thats exactly how I feel but I wouldnt c/s. Some of my friends have comitted suicide and its the worst thing to feel to lose someone you love so much.

stephanie

Hey This poem reminds me alot about myself, how i was feeling when ken left me

natalie

this poem is soooo good i almost cried. im doing a project on teen suicide and depression and i hope you wont mind if i put this one on it. thanx, great job.

Arianna

I really liked this poem because I have been through this so many times. The only thing that stopped me was my friends and how much they loved me, and that I knew if I were to leave them how they would be lost without out me as I would be lost without them.

NANCY

This poem touches me today i know how she feels iam there with her

Ricky

I like this poem it helped me alot i tihnk you so much!

robin

your poem is so good i loved it

crystal

this poem speaks to me a lot it makes me think abotu my ex-boyfriend and my real friends and then people wo i THINK are my friends i think i knwo who are and whoa rent know thank you so much!

katie

WHAT A TOUGH POEM I LIKE IT.

angelina

I loved that poem. I tried to kill myself in August and almost succeeded but now i love life because now i see every little thing that is important. So anyone who wants 2 die, DONT cause there is no guy not even your dad or anything worth dying.

polly

really good. wow. can relate

crystal

This poem was REALLY good. I like how it keeps things open. How you didn't say wether the girl will slit her wrist or not so you can basically put ur own ending. GREAT JoB.

Erica

The questions that you asked in your poem, are the questions I ask myself everyday. Thanx for asking them aloud.

crystal

i understand how you feel when you love someone and i know the pain of depression.

sisterwhiskey

wow.i loved the poem..well written and the flow of thought was good..brought back some sad memories and really touched my heart

katie

This poem was wonderful, i can really relate 2 it, thanx so much 4 having the inspiration to write it ! Please keep it up!

Aimee

This was a beautiful poem that brought back things I used to ask myself. I cried whenI read it. You have talent.

jen

wow!! I think this poem is nice.. i touched me like no other words do..=( i never had someone break up with me until the thought of commiting suicide but my family is like *grrr* that makes me wanna commit suicide.. And i have friends that doesn't care either..ok well good poem.. i love it..bub bye

Amanda

I know exactly how you feel.I feel the same way right now,because of a break up between me and the one i love.I just wish i would die.I have tried to commit suicide so many times

Amanda

"Remembrance" brought many memories flooding back to my mind..my depression after a hard break-up, the suicidal thoughts, which I still have and many other painful memories.

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