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Lover's Dance by Poet deVine

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amber
I LOOOOOOOOVED THE POEM. IT WAS GREAT! WOULD LIKE TO SEE MORE OF.
Dimples
ALL I CAN SAY IS FINALLY SOMEONE HAS PUT INTO WORDS THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT MY BABY (MAN). WOW, POET DIVINE U SURELY NEED TO GO ON AND MAKE SOME MONEY WRITING CUZ U R TALENTED IN SUCH A WAY TO MAKE THE READER FEEL EVERY WORD YOU WRITE. WOW. TO ME, THIS IS THE BEST POEM ON THIS ENTIRE SITE. THANKS FOR THE READ!
candy
I love this poem it gives a real open mind to anyone who has not had that kind of passion in there life,and the boost to want that kind of heat when making to love to those who have someone.
Julz
This poem really hits the spot!
marianne
I loved your poem so very much. I am going to frame it and put it up on my bedroom wall. It brought me back to the summer past when my fiance and I spent five wonderful weeks in a village in Morocco. Your poem is so tasteful and so erotic and just so beautiful. It really touched me within. Reading this poem you feel that you are making love. What a great job you have done.
Linnea
Excellent, excellent poem!
Krystal
I got to give it to you. GREAT poem. Your very good with the way you words things. I really enjoyede reading this writting.
Sweety2102
Wow. That was a Good one!
angelica
this poem was wonderful! there is not anything that can describe this better than what u did man u were great!
Rossana
oh my gosh, this is true poetry at it's best and describes the beauty of two people really enjoying one another. Thank you
Ri
One word: DAYUM!
Melissa
I think this poem is amazing,its a mix of passion and love. And its real. This poem rocks!
KaShawna
This is a good poem, i like it very much
Dez
It sent chills up my spine.
fAiTh
HOLIE. thats iz the most descriptive poem i have ever read in my whole life its so poetic. Poetic Emontion
Bonni
Oh Yeah !
Danielle
This poem took my breathe away! It made for a very intresting night with my boyfriend.
Jack
This is a decent love poem
cheri
All I can say is dynamic, equisite, seductive, and oh so sexy. Excellent, superb job!
Jess
The poem makes a very strong point. I is most definately very graphic and shouldn't be read alone.
Shay
One Word: WOW
Melis
Perfection!
Sandy
Beautiful!
Holly
This poem makes me think of a special person. He means the world to me and always will. Other than that it is a really good poem.
Ken
My lady loved this one. It had the desired effect.
Jennifer
This poem gave me chills up and down my whole body!
Cindy
True desire and fulfillment in print. Delightful!
talented
*speechless* i just don't know what to say! All i know is that i hope to be as deep a poet as you are!
Ruth
This is absolutely the best love poem I have read ! It totally describes the real passion of true love.
Angela
This poem was so moving. I was so moved by it I had tears. It was exactly what I try to say but can't.
seanybo
WOW!
Heather
Loved the poem. The words were beautiful and very erotic.
Angelina
one of the sexiest poems i've ever read. excellent!
Raechelle
I had been searching all over for a poem that might be able to describe how I feel about my husband. I just never was able to write my own words or express how I felt, until I found this poem. Thank you!
Donna
wow. what a poem! All my compliments to the author! believe me, it's a masterpiece!
Annie
Beautiful poem right from the heart.
blue
Thank you Thank you a poem to make me sit up and take notice. The emotions that we asleep in my heart were awakened by the racing of my heart while reading this Thank you!
Russ
Fantastic,,, thank you for an expression of the act in a very steamy way
julie
I feel in love with this poem as soon as I read it it's so beautiful
Destiny
WOW! Im speechless!
Kat
This poem is excellent and it descibes the art of making love to a T..At least to some of us.Keep it up.
oscar
No comment needed ;)
Kathy
Simply Wow is what I said in my personal email to the poet! I also said that I was sure the man I love would react as I did. Lord did he ever! Thank you for sharing your words with us
Joona
Whoa.. This one makes the blood run in your veins.
Heather
that was an awesome poem.
wet
Im dripping with desire.
angel319
I know DeVine..he is brilliant. the most romantic soul to roam the Earth. He captured my heart and resides deep within my soul. Iam a better person for knowing him.
Les
One hot poem in a clean way. Better, much than any poem I'll ever read!
toya
I LOVE THIS POEM.
Mica
this poem is great. it made me sweat. it is hot. keep the poems coming.
Caroline
It's the best poem that i ever read.. so emotional and sensual. It shows how sex must be!
Paula
i soooooooo long for my man to make love to me like that, to bad it usually lasts as long as the poem did! lol
Becky
Oh my! This poem is just what I've been looking for. So sensual and erotic. Perfect!
Erin
incredible, moving
Holly
Is it hot in here or is it just me? That was the most intense, beautifull, lifelike poem I have ever read.
Bambi
You are amazing, i could feel every emotion within, the desire in me has been brought forth and will be shared because of your writing
Joe
These are moments to treasure And these are moments too few But if these are only moments I think I like this brew That was an exquistie poem. True devotion of a night. Very sensual. Breathtaking in it's own way. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Jolene
Words can't describe what an excellent poem that is. It is so beautiful just the right words.
Shirl
HOT-HOT-HOT!
jody
WOW!
Selena
all i can say is WOW! best poem i've ever read & i must say i shared it with my boyfriend & he was speechless.
Laura
Totally awesome poem! I loved it!
Jackie
A very erotic poem, enjoy by both myself and my partner.
dennis
Fantastic poem,one of the best i have ever read on the internet! so full of passion and love! so touching and sentuous.keep up the great writing.
Ino
Wow.and wow some more.
KIKI
THIS POEM WAS SO MOVING I FELT LIKE A BURST. I READ IT BY MYSELF
Thane
Beautiful
D
Hey DeVine, I think you are a really, really great poet, I read every single one of your poems and thought they were all really great. I really liked this one especially, "Lover's Dance" that is the best love poem I have read. Well I think you'll get big girl,soon you'll have your own poetry book:)Well much props to ya.
Veronica
I thought this poem has captured everything that there is to capture about the act between two people that brings them as one, i liked it.
Gary
This sets the standard for sensual love poetry, tastefully written and beautiful.
Kari
All I can say is that was passionate and mind blowing. I felt as if I was actually having sex while reading it.
winky
Terrific!
dap
WOW! AWESOME!
Julie
What beautiful words. I had such emotion reading this poem. Please write more.
Jamie
I can feel this poem. this is very beautiful. I love it!
MsFire
So erotic & sensual...I love it.
Kacey
I loved this poem. It says it all!
ROSES22
This poem is beyond great. it is phenominal in it's own passionate way...
Lawry
I could not have said it better!
mysweetself
speechless....WoW..THANXS!!!!
Debbie
Absolutely the best poem i've read so far
Laura
MARVELOUS!!!!!!
noelia
Wonderful, Great, Just Beautiful I have never read anything like it. You are just great.
Roxane
Oh this is a most wonderful poem it has captured feelings of love passion,and desire.Thank You
Annie
A beautiful poem from the heart Keep writing them
GODSANGEL
FOR US IT WAS A 12 SO VERY EROTIC ,FELT THE LOVE AND LUST !HUSBAND AND I COULD NOT THINK AFTER THAT,GOOD
Sofie
Only words needed for this poem are beautiful and passionately
nessa
it a very beautiful poem! It so true!
Tassie
I LOVE THIS POEM!
Cynia
It's the best poem!
suzan
very sexy and romantic
Martine
Wow! I have the perfect person to mail that to.. Keep writing!
Don't know
Ohhhhh ahhhhhhh
Candace
This poem is so vivid, so alive. I shouldn't have read it alone, now I want my baby and he is at work! applause to the author. Keep up the unfeigned work. This is by far the best on the site!
Lori
Simply beautiful. You have managed to put into words what is felt from the mind, body and soul. You are bless with a wonderful gift, and I for one, am grateful you are willing to share.
Susan
I have shared this poem with my love.It is the most beautiful erotic and exciting poem i have ever read.
Tori
Beautifully written.
Bob
Softly erotic, but very passionate. I sent this to my wife. I'll let you know what she says (DOES)!
shawn
BRAVO! BEAUTIFULL! EXCELLENT!TRULLY PASIONATE.
namrata
it's an amazing poem which left me and my partner read it again and again . it still lingers on our minds..
Candace
I read it and read it again. some parts are so true. the author of this is truly magnificent. I love it!
His
OHHH GOD! This poem really took my breath away. It reminded me of the first time my true love made love to me.so erotic,so sensual,so completely he fulfilled me and my soul.INCREDIBLE..I sent it to him as distance keeps us apart for now but in my heart I know it wont be much longer till I feel those feelings again..truly brilliant.
TONYA
IT WAS SO REAL. I REALLY ENJOYED IT.
Michelle
One of the best poems I ever read
Claudia
BEAUTIFUL poem. Wish I hadn't been alone when I read it.
Oyin
His words describe everything i hope one day to feel with and from my future husband. I'll tell you how it worked out after we're married!
Fritz
That was the sexiest thing i ever read please email me personal with ideas. WOOWOWOWOWOWOWOW
Billie
I thought this poem was breath taking! I really liked it!
Renee
I loved this poem ! it was so real.truly captured the love making of lovers in a very classy way. :-) i read it over and over. it the best one i've read so far!
Ara
This poem was great. I loved it. I just had to pass it on.
Debi
I loved the poem.Had to send it to a friend to remind him of old times.Really great work.
Pat
When I read this poem my first thought was ohhh wow and a double wow , words can not say what I feel for this poem except it was awesome .. loved it.
Ricardo
Exquisite description of passionate lovemaking between two souls.
Lindsay
I loved this poem so much.It described in the detail my love for my husband in a mature way. A lot of poems on this site are not in such detail as this one is and that counts to some one like me.This poem is the best!
Charlotte
this poem is so awesome. i can't believe that i read this. this is so intense.
Cathy
Very hot and steamy. I love it!
Kim
I'm speachless.
Patricia
Without question, the best poem on this site! Highly sensual and erotic.. my boyfriend and I love it! Bravo.!
Cassandra
I think this poem is great! I would love to submit some of my poetry, but I don't think mine can even come close to this!
Marcie
If I could but a lover's dance, I would dance with these words. If I could but a story read, I would read these words.. No medication desired when this poem is around.
chantel
Wonderful poem
evelyn
this poem is great very graphic and leaps of the page at you it is really realistic
SxyLatina
WOW! this has to be the best poem i have read in a very long time i must say u have talent thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Lauren
Best poem I have read in a long time.
Christie
I have never read so much passion in one poem,If there more people with this much passion no would be lonely.
Stacey
I really like this poem. It described itself very nicely. Keep writing.
Acqulyn
The poem was very filling to me . It really makes you think about what you have.
Bob
Simply beautiful.
Peg
One word.EXQUISITE.
Paul
This is the best, It describes the passion of love , and it remind me of how Love making should be so magical.
Vina
This is among one of the most interesting poem which i hope will decribe myself one day with the person who i give myself to with all my passion which has be bottle-up.You my dear poet have given me the feeling that I long to feel...... ;) Thanx you.
henny
this poem is hot ;)
Jay
One of the most erotic poems I have ever read! Beautiful!!!
amanda
i loved this poem it speaks clearly of the beuty of making love and this poem is the best i have read so far - truly inspired
Bonnie
The best love poem on the site!
CY
Enjoyed the poem true to life. What lovers are.
Karen
This poem was so totally realistic, and as i was reading it I could picture the setting. Hats off to the author.
shane
all i got to say is it is good and my favorite of all the poems i have read
Amy
I love this poem. I plan on sharing it, with the new man in my life. Keep writing, youre wonderful.
Jerred
i think that was the best poem i have ever read i am not much on poetry but lovers dance definately caught my eye and i enjoyed it alot i sent it to my girlfriend and it really turned her on and she loved alot too keep up the good work
L.J.
What a poem!!! deVine truly has a gift of words. This poem acutally brought tears to my eyes.
Leslie
so beautiful and passoniate
chris
WOW!!!!!!!!!
Vickie
My most favorite poem, beautiful, sensuous, well written!
Jeffy
Good God, this is sex in words!!
Tina
Amazing...a beautiful expression of an embrace shared by two lovers...I sent this one to my online lover who I'll be meeting in just a few weeks...I can't wait for his response...keep up the wonderful writing!
rosa
just excellent!!!! you have a great way to express your inner thoughts...keep writing!!
Brandy
I thought it was an excellent poem. I would like to read alot more of your poetry.
Liz
Never read this over the phone to someone who is alone! It will drive them crazy!
val
True to the love two people feel BRILLIANT, CONGRATULATIONS
Nora
All I can say is that this poem was by far the best that I have ever read. I am a big romance fan so this really kept me interested. It's just beautiful.
Manon
Really good!
Charlotte
the best poem i have heard in a while. This one really touched my heart.
Cheryl
This poem is the most erotic poem I've read. Tells it like it is with taste and grace. Wonderful piece of art
Heather
All I can say is....damn!! The author of this poem is so deep, connected, unbelievable. Keep writing, Poet, you sure are deVine!!
judymarie
excellent poem, glad to see there are others in the world enjoying love at its finest!
Jim
Beautiful!
Winston
My girlfriend sent this to me in a card. I had to check it out. Whew! Almost need a cold shower! Very beautiful in a softly erotic way. She loved it and so do I. Thanks
Ellen
Absolutely beautiful.....
Clint
This is the best "erotic" poem I have ever read.
Anna
Absolutely the most beautiful and incredibly romantice poem I have read. It was wonderful to share it with my soulmate!
jeannie
Oh this poem was very delicious! It really excited my imagination, I could picture every part, and loved it! You are vary talented! Keep it up! :)
clarence
This poem I feel captures the true essence of love. It set a feeling in me to my soul.
shalanda
I enjoyed that poem, it made me wish that my husband was somewhere nearby instead of 3,000 miles away. Thank you for making me feel as if he was here and for giving me the chance to e-mail him with something that truly expresses how I feel instead of just the run of the mill.
Theresa
I think this poem really captures the passion that two lovers feel for one another. It is so intense and emotional, you can almost feel the rapture the lovers express. I know that my heart rate really jumped when I read it...and I immediately sent it to my love! (He really enjoyed it!)
carmen
This is such a beatiful poem. It is very erotic and described perfectly the way i feel when my husband and I enjoy each other. Great work!
Carrie
this poem is awesome. Sexy without being vulgar.
Dee
Wonderful use of erotic phrases
jess
deep
Donnie
Oh!!!!!!! My the words made me rise. But this is the true essence of man being with a women. This is what I want to feel sometime in my life with a women.
Brad
This explains what making love to your true love feels like!!!!!! exactly
Nancy
My my my my! The heart skipped beats, the palms became sweaty, with short breaths I began to wonder why I didn't head the warning and wait to be with my man before reading on... he is in trouble. :-)
Rebecca
This is so beautiful. Never before have I read words that touched me so deeply.
Kristi
This was an awesome poem! It was so life-like, but in words.
emily
wow very emotional
Dynesha
That poem is the bomb! Keep up the good work
Johnny
WOOOOW, makes me just want to make love tonight
sandie
brings back the memories
The
This poem was exquisite, very passionate,and erotic. I really hope that everyone who reads this can feel the passion that i did.
luckyguy
what a beautiful piece of art?really set my heart and passion on fire and increased my longing for my beloved ten fold.
Errica
After i had red this I wished my man did not haft to work out of town. This was a Ecellent poem