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When Becky and I got into a fight, I got very upset. It just happened that the next day I was going to a church camp over the weekend with some of the teens in my Sunday school class.

Here I met another friend, Katie, who was having a different problem. We both connected with each other that weekend. She completely understood what was happening between Becky and I, and I completely understood what was going on Between her and Charlie.

We're best friends now, and we haven't said our mutual promise out loud. We don't need to.

Promise

As you sit in silence,
Wondering why
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
Until your tears run dry.

When you've been hurt,
And can't believe what they've done
If you need someone to talk to
I'll be the one.

If a close friend hurts you,
And you don't understand
Remember I'm here,
I'll lend a helping hand.

Burdens are lighter when carried by two,
And I just want you to know
I'm here for you.
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560 Visitor Comments

Kristian
I love the poem thats how i feel about my ex gurl andk everthing so i tahnk you for posting this on the computer
merissa
it was great
Vaishnavi
it an awesome poem.
ana
This is a great poem. It describes what a friend should really be. Jessica Sills even though I really don't know who you are , you did an amazing job writing this poem.
Jenny
This poem Really Touched Me. i have a friend who barely shows emotion and no matter how often i say that he can tell me he never does. i can tell he hurts emotionally and it makes me hurt too
heba
this is the most wonderful poem I've ever heard,its so fabulas and fantastic and even great.
caRaH PauLiNe
Ammm. Actually, I haven't got in this website. We just needed to search about friendship poems as our project in school. And among those all poems that I have read, this attracted me the most and it also gave me some ideas to be a better friend. So, I voted it!
Brittany
I THINK YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB WITH THIS POEM AND I'M GOING TO GIVE YOU A 8 THATS GOD.
gizem
this is one of the best poems that ý read in this site
Sophie
This is a very touching poem and it means alot to me as I have many friends who I would feel like giving this to! I hope this poem will one day get published!
Ashia
this poem almost made me cry it is REAL touching!
brittany
i loved your pome it touched me i have a firend that is goign thow some stuff and this is the pome 4 us
Jessica
This poem is so pretty, i love it! It makes me think that Jessica, you're a very nice person. :)
Amanda
This poem touched me. it reminds me so much of how me and my best friend used to be. I couldnt help but shed a little tear as all of the memories came flooding back. Thanks to who wrote this poem.
stacy
it is a really good poem i like it a lot
wajwaj
i love it . it's cool
freta
i love this poem i think it's the best poem for friendship
queenasia
i love tis poem!very sweet remeinds me of me n my ex
Megan
I needed a poem that told how much I would be there for her and this was it . It was truelly great.
suzan
dats a really good poem der ! it touches every aspect of true friendship. fellow readers. if u want 2 test ur friendship , no need 2 do sumthin crazy jus compare it with d poem n u will get ur answer
Marta
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Haley
This is an AMAZING poem!
C
this poem is just like me and my friends and i think this will help them understand that i am always there for them
kim
i think this peom is a good one because it tells the truth of some friends
mary
i love this poem. it's a wonderful description for when two friends are close. It reminds me of me and my best friend alison.
kristian denise
this is a really cute poem 2 give some1
Shamika
This poem is nice. It says a lot about the person who wrote it
devonne
this pome was verey peaceful it made me cry can you be my shoulder to cry on. just joking. but the pome was good
Ingrid
wow! such a beautiful and touchable poem for me it so great
melissa
I really love the poem, it touched my heart, the poem had good detail and a nice set up
minatsu
This poem is awesome! I have been in trouble with my friends lately and my best friend has been staying with me all the time and when I cried, she was with me, when I was in a very sad mood, she was with me. She always makes me relief. So, when I read this poem, I promised that I would be with her when she is in trouble and I would be the one who protect her. That's why I like this poem.
reasia
lol i love dat poem it describe me and mah two best friendz love dat keep up da good poem work.
ZABREENA
THIS REMINDS OF TIMES I ALWAYS WENT TO MY BEST FRIEND WHEN I HAD A TOUGH DAY ! NOW THAT I LIVE IN RIVERSIDE AND SHE LIVES IN LA NOTHING WILL KEEP OR FRIENDSHIP FROM FADING AWAY! THOSE ARE THE WORDS WE TELL EACH OTHER EVERY TIME WE TALK WEN U ND A FRIEND CALL ME IF YO U ND A SHOULDER TO CRY ON ILL BE HERE!
Britney
I really like this poem. Right now, expecialy, it reminds me of somethings going on in my best friend's life, and how I'm always reminding here I'm here for her forever and always. The poem may be short but to those who can relate to it know its so much more then just written words. I give this poem the highest score u can get. Good work!
kendall
it was very good and its helping me with my friendships! thanks you rock~
Brittney
WOW! great job! i really liked it!
sheila
i love it it explains how i feel for my long distance friend who is pregnant and has no where to go -thanks
Christie
this touched me becaus me and my friend had a fight and then we were all good now. thanks
lauren
amazing poems love it ur really talented
Emily
This is a great poem it tells the truth and it has happened to many teenagers and it could also happen to older people it has deffintly touched me it is amazing!
courtney
Thankyou so much for writing this poem! I have a friend at the moment whose fairly stressed and upset but doesn't want to talk. so i was searching for a poem to let her know i am here. yours is perfect. thankyou!
brandie
i gave this poem to my friend and even when times were bad and we were in fights she kept it because she knew that was my promise.
hannah
this is a great poem, i found it said so many things i feel ive often need to say thank you and keep up the good work
Nur
It is a very nice poem. I felt really touched. Reading this poem had reminded me how my best friend and I had broken due to my stupidity. Not being there for her when she needs me,never showed love,care and concern.
Britt
that's good,really good
Iesha
Great job it had a lot of feel to it.
Robbi
this was awsome! i loved it! WHOOT!
Jessica
Great, touching, wonderful poem. I love it.
Katrina
This is great poem and it truly goes into the heart and soul of what a friendship needs.
Cathy
I loved this poem. I am about to graduate and I found this and gave it to my best friend. It is a wonderful poem.
Nichole
Dis is a great poem. me and my boyfriend was having problems and I got on line reading poems and I started reading yours and I had to print it out and call up my bestfriend Amanda and read it to her cuz its da same way I feel about her. cuz if it wasnt for her I dont think I would still be wit my man Andrew. But yea dis poem is wornderful, dont stop writing them cuz if ya can come up with a poem like dis, then girl you can come up with anything else you want to. well peace
lluvia
I liked, its nice.
holly
i like this poem!it is good!
Rach
This poem is gr8 it was purfect 2 send to my mate when he was crushed it related exactly to waht had happned
alysia
i like this poem
Cindy
I LOVE IT!It was so sad but true.
Andrea
I love this poem! It touched me i love it! Its like when I read it I remembered how I always tell my friends that!
bryn
This was a relly good poem it really touched me. bryn 14
Juan
At this point in time my best friend did something that was not right. she could have taken a different direction and she didn't and i sent her this poem and i hope that when she gets out of the hospital she can read it and she will understand why am here and who much i care for her. how much her friends care for her.
jasmine
i like the content of the poem. it's like me. always there when a friend need help. great one.
Sarah Jane
It's really great!
brittany
i liked this poem it was really good!
Arye
THis is a great poem. I chose this because it really has something that touches my heart! luv it. ^_^
poppy
i thort that was realli moving and i will be sending that to my best m8 coz it realli fills wat i want to say that is a grate poem and you are very taulented welldone that is my fav of the year i love it thx for the plesher that u gave me to read it thx love poppy xx its grate wb
Al'Mesha
this poem is very touching it reminds me of talking to one of my friends cause i will alway shave her back she is like my sister! n. e. ways that was hard( great )
Luc
This poem I liked because it is sending a message you need friends real true fruinds to help you though hard times
dgd
i love this this is true. i may not have many friend cause i lost mine but this is true id do anything for my friends.
Nikki
cool. cool. cool. cool. cool. coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
suresh
yeah it really touches my hearts
camille
i love it. in fact i copied it and paste in my project in english. Promise rocks. people should love it.
Elyse
I thought this poem really touched into the subject of how new friends can touch you in a way that your lifetime friends cant even amount too. How you can start over new with them without being judged by past actions and start a great friendship.
Coby
If i was to give this a score out of 10 i would give it a 9. 5, i think that this is a beautiful poem.
Rachel
This poem really hits the spot. It almost had me in tears. I'd like to shear this poem with my good friends. From a poet to another poet you are truly talented.
brittany
that was a really cute poem!
Amanda
great
Diana
this is great!u have a talent
Reanne
This poem by Jessica Sills is very touching and i feel as though it may touch your heart too. Between 1-10, for sure i would say a 10.
alyson
i love your pomes it really help me get thought the held day
Gabi
I think it'a really good. It's simple. but it has a good message! I'm useing it for school ^_^
sandra
The poem was very nice. Sometimes there are things that we feel we can only share with a close friend---and having someone there is wonderful.
Karina
This poem really touched me because I feel that friends are really important in life. I have written some poems and even a song expressing my friendships. It's great.
Suzu
Omg. This poem is so deep. I almost cried when I read this. I hope my friends are like that to me, and I hope I'm like that to me friends.
Felicia
I really enjoyed this poem and I believe that it is all very true. My best friend is a guy and he is always there for me and gives me a shoulder to cry on all the time. He is always there when I need him the most he is like a big brother to me. I think you did an excellant job on writing this poem.
kate
i gave this poem to my best friend when she was going through some hard times,she loved it just as much as i did when i first read it. i think its great how so many of us can relate to this poem,it just means that there are some good friends out there.
Kelly
Yes that is true friends are always there for you and when you need them most
Cheramie
I was able to relate with this poem. when I read this, I remembered my bestfriend. We never said anything about us being the best friends, we just did.
Michelle
This poem is really. the only word I can think of is touching because there are only a few people one person could truly say this to and know that their friend would do the same. I love this poem.
lacey
this is such a sweet poem, it says all the things you want to say, without being to dramatic. it flows like friendship and it really helps to tell your friends they can rest assured that you're there for them. great job jessica.
amanda
i think that this poem says a lot and i realy like it.
Jade
I do like this poem it seem to me like it came from the heart keep it up because to me it seem like you got a lot of talent
Zenya
this a great poem this poem will help your friend feel better if they don't feel good at all
CZARYL
it touch my heart. because it is like my friend who dont know i am here for her.
Jess
Its a brilliant poem! My mate was having a hard time so i sent it to him and i thnk it summed up jst how mch i cared and hoe he wasnt alone! thanks x
mercedes
I love this poems it should help most of us.
chelsee
omi god i luved this poem i sent it too my friends!
toni
this is the best poem it is good for a sad friend this is something i would send to me best friend if she/he is sad.
Nettie
Great poem it had lots of meaning to it and i liked it alot! Great Job keep it up! Nettie
Tiffany
A poem like this could probably relate to tonnes. And for that I'm thankful.
Alix
I was really touched by this poem, because I am going through some tough times at the moment and it really relates to how my friends are helping me, I sent it to them to let them know how much they mean to me! So thank-you
hannah
i love dis poem i am actually gonna print it out and give it 2 my hom3grl!
florencia
i think this poem is great. its tell really what frienship means . been in the good and bad prtoblems. that feiend must be always
samantha
My best friend and I read this togeter and we were like 'OMG i love you so much'
Kay
This poem has kept me and my best friend in touch (Adela). She knows I will never leave her side. I love her with all my heart and because of this poem it will never change.
Carley
Great!
Kayta
I really liked this poem it's so comforting and It's true about me with my friends.
Ashley
This is a awesome poem it means alot to me and its the type of friend that i am.
ashley
This say desiree thompson all over it it is great just like her I love this poem
Paul
I loved this poem it was sweet it really touched me. this poem decribes my friend she is always there for me.
crystal
that was such a awsum poem ay it relates 2 me in so many waiz well just keep up ur writing and make em great n tell da truth no matter wat ay coz dats wat ppl love is da truths LOVE DA POEM
ashley
i thought this poem was so beautiful. it made me think about all of my friends and we ever broke up i would still be there for them always because of what of all we've been through
jessica
this is a poem that touched me this is how my friends and i are. Keep writing poems i will read them i have a few my self. Well done.
Shakira
This poem is short and sweet. It is to the point and it is just righ t for my frinds.
Amber
this is a very touching poem and i think that you are a very outstanding writer!
rocky
i can not believe this that you become a good friend of mine on thei computer and i love that way because you become a wonderful and a special friend of mine in my heart and back to you makes me love you more now .
amie rose
Hey jessica hun, thatz a awsm poem ai, i write poetry similar, normally rhyming, it helps my thortz cum owt easier. Umm yeah i like they way u rhymed it and love the last bit which is amazingly tru! It was nice to read, so keep writting and i might post one mahself sumtyme.
Rhiannon
This poem iz heaps heaps nce. good work u have real talent. u can go far wit poems lyk that
Reggina
it really touched. really touched! it make me remember my BEST Friend, RANTHY. though we're seperate by distance, time, and place, i'm in Canada and she's in Indonesia, i believe we have each other and we have a connect in our heart and we are one in our LORD, JESUS CHRIST. =)
Jessica
Wow This poem Is AMAZING! I love it so much! I sent it to my friend, and she called me up thanking me because she was going through a tough time in her family.
anne
it's simple. but very touching.
chelsea
this is the cooles poem ever
laura
hey i liked your poem alot it is s good one if u have close friend and i jave alot i sent it to all of my friend and i hopr they like it as much as i did
willie
I liked this poem because it was about how u should treat a friend, and tht u should always b there for them.
diera
oh my god you were talking to me
ethan
this poam is one inspiring poem of all!
brittany
i loved this poem its so true about me and my bff chloe. i love her to death i just dont have a way to tell her
Justin
This poem is going to make my friend cry. My friend Sara is all was ther for me when I need her. She protects me or stands up for me. I love this poem. Thank you Jessica Sills for righting this great poem.
sarah
One of my friends alwys lets this other girl tell her how to live her life but she wont listen to me to not talk to her anymore. Instead of constantly fighting with her about it i am now just there for her. This poem is how i feel. Its beautiful and exactly what a friend should be!Brovo
phyllis
this poems realy helped me in my friendship:}
charmie
i lurve the poem it's simple yet it tells everything you can ask from a true friend.
joana
i loveeeeeeeeeee the poem so much i would read all day long over and over again
claire
this poem really touched me. i described how i felt about my best friend ashley and when i sent it to her she really appreciated it and made us even closer
amie
I loved the poem itremindes me of my friend and i and i always tell her that im here for her and i did live next to her any more so i sent it to her and she was on the phone crying she said it was so pretty how the writer wrote it and i loved it i show every one it now they send it to there friends well 1-10 rating i would give it a 11
Brian
this poem. its jsut. wow. lol i loved it. i actualy wrote it on my best friends wipe away board thing as a gift. casue i sjut bought it for her. i hope you dont mind. -) its awsome
Lindsey
I love this poem it is really great.
Kari
thats a great peom
princess
i wuld dedecate that to a realli gud frnd of myn nellie and im very sorry to her:( x0x0
Taylor
I loved this poem because it is just how my 2 best friendz and i r it caught my eye in such a way i cant get it out of my head this is really what a friendship is about!
Nikki
I just wanted to say. awww =) ahah very cute & i love it!
Kaitlyn
Jessica, Your poem says alot. It decribes me i have written poems like that just to tell my bestfriends that if they need me I will always be there. Your poem means alot to me.
Mikka
i love this pome:)
Katie
I love this poem and I will and do encourage you to keep writing. Awesome job!
brandi
i really like this poem and it kinda brought tears to my eyes when i read it and it reminded me of my friend britney alot when i read it!
Emma
wow. I love this poem. it brought me to tears. My best friend recently moved away from me and I'm guna have it framed for her for her birthday :)
Shawn
i really like it. i hope you don't mind me posting it. i give it a 8. 5 out of 10
Melissa
I just wanted to tell you that you have talent. I'm sure you have more to share and I think you should further your ability with poetry.
Victoria
I have no comment about the said poem above. I just admire how she make the poem and her passion in making it.
Jordan
I really like it. 4 out of 5
jess
This beautiful poem brought tears to my eyes, and it truly described the one thing that is important in my life, friendship.
danni
this is a gr8 poem! X X X X X
Jayde
this poem is really good i like it
Megs
I Really loved this poem, I sent it to All Of my friends and My mom. (who i haven't spoken to in 3 1/2 years. ) It's really Beautiful.
elisha
i think this poem is good it makes me think y friend are there and now i know thank you
Becki
It's really nice,It touches the heart! Thanks Jessica you really made my day!GODD LUCK in the comp!
nancy
this is such a true and cool poem Keep writin im interested
katherine
this poem is realy good nd it really means something to me
Kelsey
This poem touched me so much because I have this one friend who I have only known for about 9 monthes, but he is now a best friend. He has gone through some hard times. He has tried to run away many times, and even tried to kill himself one night in early May. He is now in rehab and I miss him so much. I dedicate this poem to Jerome, my troubled friend.
brittany
that poem rocks!
Jackie
10/10 This poem was soo beautiful! Well done Jess!
Lorissa
I love this poem because it represents the same kind of frienship me and my best friend have
Tyler
i like this poam it is very good
amanda
it is a true friend poem
Elizabeth
This poem really means a lot to me because it reminds me of the time my friend got dumped by a jerk and the 1st person she found was me.
kelsey
DUUUUUUUUUUUDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEE** this was sweet man it was a great poem dude! Keep em' comin yo! Peace
Cubit
Oh, that's really sweet. I like this; brings a beat back to my sorry little drum. I was in a quiet bad mood before I read it, but was soon glad I did. ;)
ashley
hey i really like your poem it's really good
Kelsey
this poem reminds me alot of my best friend she is always there for me and i will always be ther for her this poem really touched me
Brianna
hey, i have to say. your poem was awesome. it touched me, i have one of the greatest friend anyone could ever ask for, your an awesome writer
Shannon
GREAT JOB! it's cool the way you put it together.
Aryan
That was very interesting and i enjoyed it very much i'd love to read more of yours
Shannon
I love this poem, it's really good and it just best explains the ways you can be there for a friend. great job!
julie
hey i just wanted 2 let u no i loved this poem. also maybe you could e-mail me the date when u wrote it cuz i want 2 use it in a poem portfolio i have 2 do for school. thanx a bunch!
Makayla
this is a very touching but true poem and I LOVED IT!
sian
WoW , I am not one to read poem's, or anythin like that. but that was amazing . fair play you must be thinkin of someone when u wrote that, an you'r friends must be very special for u to do so .
ashley
i really liked this poem because it really sounds like me and my best friend yahaira!
Liz
its very emotional and true with my life its just what i can show a friend. i would give this a 10.
Adriana
Thats so good! Keep writing poems like that
tabatha
hey this was a great poem it reminds me of all the bad times ive gone thro with my boyfriend and i have a best friend thats always thr for me
savannah
that is a good poem you enspire me alot!
lacey
this poem is like me
Re'Nesha
I Love this poem and I think this is an understanding poem about some frienships and this is a true outgoing poem.
april
it was really good and i like it
krystal
i loved your poem it descrides the relationship between my friend and i. i hope that you continue writing from your heart
Mandy
THis poem rocks
chantelle
this poem is just so good. i sent it to my friends and they nearly cried i loved it.
Shea
this poem really touched me! Because this really put what happened with me and my friends.
Jian
NICE! I LOVE IT. 8-)
Whitney
I really liked this poem. it almost made me cry and it touched me a lot
adam
this is very good poem and i am going to use it for a school project:) thanks much, adam
Kelly
this was a wonderful poem and i can relate to it a lot !
amanda
great i really love this poem
Kaylynn
Nice poem Oh and Hi
Rachel
hey this poem is awsome it is really nice
sarah
i can relate because that happened to me too. i really like your poems here. keep getting new ones for me. plzz ~_~ . well bye bye. sincerely, sarah
nessa
this poem is sad but i think it is great
Hope
its a great friendship poem. Keep up the good work! ~hope~
jennifer
Wow i guess you really care for your best friend.
Uta
Definitly a great poem I'll be sending it to many people.
ashley
i love this poem it should be a greeting card
Trisha
Hey. Thats a great poem, I my self found it touching and great way to put it. Im also a writer but not on this site. I write about love. but keep it up, that was good Trish
LIsa
This poem is a very good poem so good and write some more!
aNiCeTo
This peom is a really good poem. As soon as I read it, it touched my heart. It makes me feel having a friend in your life is a wonderful gift that should never be taken for granted.
amannie
Whoeva u r i want u 2 no dat i really enjoyed n'd luv dis poem. i myself writes poems but dis is good. it touched me in so many ways
chelsea
this is a good poem! thank you it make my friends day!:):):):)
Kevin
You just defined friendship just the way it is.
Lirie
this poem was beautiful. because i'll always be there for my best friend and she knows it,nut the poem really relates to us. thanx.
Antionette
I really like this poem. I hope you continue to write these poems. May God bless you sweetie!
Chanty
I think that this poem is a wonderful and truly amazing poem. I liked it because it reminded me of myself. and what I went through. I almost cried when I read this poem. It really touched me. !
megan
This is a great poem. This is something I would say to a very special person in my life to.
leah
This poems is great. It makes me think of my best 2 best friends michelle and jillian! just reading it makes me think of some times we have had !
Rocky
I loved the poem! it was soo cute. i just gave it to my friend and she was soo happy. i love this poem. you are a really good poet!
Tanessa
I loved this poem, because all my friends are being mean to one of the coolest people i know and i'm right there beside her sticking up for her. and leting her know i'm always there for her and she has nothing to worry about! It is one of the best poems i've ever read and one of my favorites!
crystal
Hey, this poem is incredible. keep up yhe good work, you kan realy touch someones heart by you work!
Kayla
The poems wore very lovely and sweet and I think they will touch people very much and I love all your poems
Melissa
i love it
ally
its a heaps nice poem casue my friend just sent me an email saying heaps nice stuff and thats the way i feel bout her :')
ashley
I read this poem on the right day i was on the phone with my best friend and she is having her problems and this poem goes to her
Laurie
This poem made me cry, it describes my friendship perfecly with my best friend. This desribes exactly how i feel :)
Ashley
I think the poem is great i hope u cant write more like it
Shaylene
I really liked this poem a lot. it was great and showed a lot of emotion. it's awesome.
marina
this is cute i think it would be some thing i send to my best friend grecia i love her we have been best friends for 6 years bye
kaitlen
this is a great poem. I love it!
Jodie
I think this is a very good poem. This poem is how me and my friends are if they get in a fight they come to me know one else. They know im am all wasy here for them.
kellie
that was cute. !*****
Amina
Hi, First of all I shall thank the staff that made this awesome site. Second, good goin' it was a poem that touched me and made me send it to my friends by e-mail. Again, thankx very, very much. I consider this poem as a A+! Yours, Amina
nellie
I loved it! Your poem described everything i wish i could say to my bestie. but i hope he already knows. It was beautiful.
sable
Hey i loved ur poem me and my best friend fight all the time but it never lasts for long with specail friends like us even though she was all over my boyfriend i forgave her that is a true friend dont u think?
sean
this poem was inspirational . simple and straight to the heart.
Amanda
It's REALLY good!
angela
i LOVED this poem. its beautiful!
fang
that really touched me, and i am giving it to my good friend
Amada
I loved this poem. it reminds me of my bestfriend Mandy and me. we are like twins and she would also love this poem. Who ever wrote this should keep writing. you will be a great writer someday. :)
Bella
This poem has touched my heart. Today my best friend and I were experiencing this. I read it to her as she cried not knowing why another friend was doing some dreadful things. She knows I will always be there for her. I wanted the author to know I am truly grateful for this poem as it expresses a lot of my emotions as well as many others
Daniel
I really like your poem. I found it while I was researching a school project. It reminds me of my close friends, boys and girls. I also shared it with my family.
Amanda
i saw this and it was just how i felt about one of my friends so i sent it to her in her time of need
Tasha
i loved this poem, because it related alot to how good my friends are to me. i have some friends who are everything and more, and this poem reminded me to not take them forgranted, and it reminded me that i need to be like them and be there for them like they are for me. thanks alot for reminding me.
kassi
it is really good it makes me think of my friend becky
zana
this is a really touching poem, it really relates to what teenagers really feel about those special close friends. x
chelsie
that is a very sweet poem an its really good.
Julie
that was so touching! it was one of the best i've ever read! you could really go far with your talent and ability!
Danielle
i really liked this poem bc my friend is in a bad part in her life and i think ill give it to her. thank you
Erin
It is very good in style and it reminds me that friends r always there 4 u
rose
i loved this poem. it really described how i felt about my friend(s). i've been having a tough time (with them) and this poem helped me to understand.
sritika
the poem is really touching. friendship has been potrayed very well!
michelle
omg! i love this poem and it is soo true and i can relate soo much to it. So thanx for writing this hun!
Amy
This poem really captured what friendship is or should be all about. It was fantastic!
Mujer
and exciting and truthfully poem that enchants waht people belief
tina
well i relly love ur poem it can touch people but its jus like me n my best friend thats y we can relat to this poem!
Asmita
It is a very touching poem, and the second line of each stanza describes exactly how anyone feels after a betrayal or disappointment. The rhyme and the meter of the poem also make the effect more pronounced. Kudos to the poet!
anthony
awesome poem!
Moe
I loved this!
Yanis
This is a great poem. I love it.
Robert
I voted for this poem for the simple fact that i have a special friend called Charlotte in which this poem relates remins me of us two.
Amber
i really liked this poem. it reminds me of me and MY best friend, Romni. i would like to see more poems from this author.
Stephanie
I love this poem ! It`s like I am saying it , because all my friends come to me because something happend and they need someones shoulder to cry on . I LOVE THIS POEM!
Rainey
I loved it. It was so sweet. I loved it.
sherell
I love this poem "Promise" by jessica is the best i heard yet!so true
nikki
This poem touched my heart and it helped me to realise who my true friends were, they were'nt the ones who ignored me they were the ones that helped me to share the burden.
caryn-marie
THIS IS A GREAT POEM, I SENT IT TO MY FRIEND AND SHE LOVED IT TO! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Charissa
I LOVED THIS POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART I THINK IT WAS A TERRIFIC POEM.
Chelsea
I love this poem i think that it is really good and i write poems myself and i think that u can go along way if u keep it up
Wo
one of my best friends bf jus brake up wif her. she took it relli bad. shes been crying tears of sadness for awhile i read this poem to her and for the 1st time in a while she cryed tears of happyiness, it just made her relise that friends are one of the most strongest fings in the world and more important then ne guy! this is a great poem and relli help my friend relise the importance of friendship. thanx:)
Kimberly
hey, i just wanted to say that, that was a amazing poem and i was wondering if it was ok if i printed it out to send to onw of my friends that just lost her boyfriend and i wanted her to know that i am here for her. thanx KIM
April
this poem is really really good and made me think of me and my best friend! thanx for being such a good writer and thinking of a poem that is so inspirational good job!
Ishita
i liked it because i also just have one friend and we both have same problems like one in the poem
precious
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Tiffany
I think your poem is Very Very TOUCHING! please write more for me to read!
Monica
I loved your pome and so does my exploratory arts teacher. It's deep and it touches me. I hope you go far with this pome.
cori
your poem rele touched me and my best friend kayla we cried wen we read it thnks!
Tiffany
This poem was sooo good, I read it 3 times. This poem really touches me.
Julie
I really liked your poem. I have been through the same thing. it is a great poem!
aidid
Good job! It make me think about all my old friends
roxy
it is a great poem and thanks to who wrote. me and my friend were making this contract to each other and couldn't find the right poem until i found this one it is a very beutiful poem.
samantha
i just went through a once in a lifetime thing with my firend and this poem rocks for her she deserves it and so much more
Franshell
this is a really good poem and if you think this is bad writing you are really crazy! good luck on you writing! :P/;)
nichola
i thort dat woz wikid
Bum
this poem is a nice poemm bt it should be longer. But its still soised.
noel
I LOVE IT!
Ally
I really like this poem. It's exactly how friends feel good job!
Angela
my friend is in jail and i know these are the words i have been looking for to say to him this is a great poem u have skills go with them
Courtney
I am 13 and I recently had a little conflict with my best friend. Now that we're friends again there's nothing more I'd want to say to her than what is already expressed in this poem! This is great and shows teenagers' true feelings about their friends. GREAT POEM!
Emma
Your poem was really good. You should like get it printed in a book or something. It was amazing. I really liked it. You have a wondeful talent. How long di that take to write? I wish I had talent like that. Keep up the good work your poem really touched me. You're awesome at poetry!
jess
this poem touched me deep inside. it gave me a reality check of how important my friends r 2 me. jessica sills, never stop touching people like this through ur writing. U ROCK!
Melissa
wow! this is a reallie great poem! i really enjoyed reading it! i even got teary eyes! it is a reallie touching poem! i wud luve to read more of ur poems! keep writin peoms for tha world 2 be touched! lol. i loved ur poem!
Jade
This poem shows the value of true friendship. To call someone a friend is something that should be trasuered forever. If you are a friend be, true to all your friends, through thick and thin. I love this poem because friends are important, and they bring out our character and sense of humor in times of need. "A friend in need, is a friend indeed"! Well done Jessica on a fine poem. -Jade
Amanda
That was a great piece of writing. for real. like. I write poetry. but I can never honestly find a piece of writing that I really really feel. not even mine. But I really really liked that one
Tygra
I really enjoyed this poem because it really touched me. This poem is how i feel towards many of my friends because we are always there for eachother. It was nice for me as a teenager to read this poem and know that i will be there for my friends and they will be there for me, and to see this in a beautiful poem which really touched me.
Whitney
This poem is awesome. i love the meaning i love the way it all closes in the end. i luv the way it flows! i am going to give it to one of my friends, cuz it soo good great job!
sandy (sis)
good job you real discibe a great friend
kendra
i think friendship is very important to a person and should never be trampled
Crystal
That was a very good poem. it was real deep. we need alot more kids around our age to read and listen to stuff like that. i LOVED it. it was very touching and inspiring. keep up the good work
ELLEN
hey i luv this poem! it really touched me about how friends will be there when ur in pain and they can help nuture ur broken friendship
Tiffany
this poem waz awsome i really liked it keep up the good work
cAmLiN
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pj
this poem was very intresting
Michelle
The person who wrote this poem is a very good writter! Never stop writing! You are really good and that maaay take you alot of place when you use it!
Jaimie
This poem is amazing! Omg, you are the best teen writer ever! Keep it up!
Vee
I really loved the way your poem was worded. It flows so well! I've tried so many times to communicate the same thing in poems of my own, but they end up being too long and not quite to the point. Yours rocks!
Heather
I loved the poem. It relates to my best friend and I's friendship. It is very moving. You are a very gifted writer and I encourage you to keep publishing your work. You will make it very far in life with your writings! God bless you!
johanna
i give this a 10 is was nice
gia
i was lookin' for a poem for my bestfriend cuz is her birthday and this one is perfect and beautyful, congratulations to the writter,it really touch my heart.
ashleigh
this poem made me cry man i have been there done it great job!
dimple
it is so so cool it not only rhymes but wait for it it realy touches the heart . ITs not very cheesy or too sad its just perfect.
Delilah
I think this is a GREAT Poem it is like so real and its from the Heart!
Lacie
The poem was very good:)
anna
On a scale from 1-10 i would give this poem a 9. I really liked it alot. It explains me in many ways of how I think and am with my friends. YOU did a really great job on this poem.
tricia
this peom is very good it touched my heart.
Terrie
Hi this poem was right it's not fair if you don't keep a promise then friendships wont stay together.
grace
its a excellent poem i love it
Amber
You are a very talented poet. This poem was very touching and pulled at my heart strings. Keep writing!
Brittany
Wonderful poem, it fits what is happening in my firends life better than any poem i have read before!
Haley
Jessica I know what u r going through cause I've been there before and I have respect for what u do. Keep doing it! I'll check for ur poems. P. S. I LOVE THIS POEM!
savanah
i love it! it inspired me!
samantha
i think this poem is very touching and i thank you for writing it because it helped me throught a lot of things in my life
Michelle
In the past few days I have lost a life long friend and have been quite upset about it. Thank-you so much for the beautiful poem, it really helped me!
noe
very good. ! :-)
amanda
i really do like this poem. i sent it to mmy best friend
Halley
Hi. I ove your poem. It was very sad.
David
It's A real relief,The poem has put down all my burden.
regina
that was a good poem. it reminds me of when me and my friends get in an arguement.
Nicole
This is an awesome poem. I think that you should take this up. This poem really did touch me. I want to say thank you for writing such a beautiful poem. I will never forget this. It is in my heart forever.
andrea
i really liked this poem. i just went through a rough time with a bunch of my best friends and reading this made me believe that someday we will work everything out and that i will someday have them back. it was a really cute poem.
jacki
This poem is so great i luv it! don't stop now, keep going!
kizzy
It make me feel like u know how i feel.
chris
where have you been. ive had a rollercoaster of a week and this sums it up brilliantly . fantastic thank you.
Jess
I love this poem it is really touching Love Jess
Darlene
This poem is very good, its very touching. Im glad Jessica you wrote this. It reminds to be the one. Good Job
julie
i liked ur poem cause it really touches me
Kayla
i thought i was really good and i wish i could write like you. Keep up the good work
Melanie
This poem is sooo good! I loved it!
vanessa
this is such a pretty poem i wish i had wrote it jessica keep it up!
n/a
This poem really touched me because recently my best friend lost her close friend to suicide. She has gone through so much in her life already and did not need this and i wanted her to know that I will always be here for her and sending this poem to her really let her know that.
kira
this poem gave me shivers like when u hear a good song. it was great!
Nur HafizAh
i lyk diz poem. it really made me feel inspired.
Dorine
i really like this poem. it reminds me of my old best friend. we were always there for each other until a boy got in the way. we were inseparable, but now we are cuz of this boy who took my best friend away from me.
melissa
i think this poem is really great because it says so much to a close friend because peolpe cant always explain how they feel and it really helps to show how much you care about your friend in an easy way.
Chelsea
This poem realy touched me a lot. I almost cried when I read it.
Swapna
This was a really great poem. I wish I could write a poem like that.
allison
i really appreciate the meaning of this song. it really touched my heart. friends are really important to me. thanks for making this poem. it really touched me.
Myisha
i love this poem because if i was to need a friend i would love to get a poem that sound like this one thank you!
Jessica
I think tjos poem really touch my heart i have lost so many of my bets friends and all new ones came along and now there the best friends i have ever had.
angel
Pretty good poem i liked so much my whole family thinks it great your pretty good don't quit
Bryttani
thanks for sharring this poem with us. keep up the good work on making such good and great poems!
Adebola
I think that this is a very good poem, and it has helped me a lot. So I would just like to say thank you to the writer of the poem. Thank you so much
nessa
Thsi is the best poem i have evr read! it helped me so much thank you
Kayla
I think the poem was lovely n sweet. I could say that it touched me. So much n I think it could touch lots more people because its all about friendship n thats what it counts.
Jessica
this is a great poem i sent it to my best friend Mandi it is just a great poem
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Maria
this is a nice poem
Sarah
This poem is very touching, and it doesn't just work for best friends, it also works for my crush, I think he knows all this information, but I would just like to show him this poem so he really knows how I feel about him. This poem tells how great of a friend he is to me, n that I don't wanna let him go! Even if him n i can't b 2gether, I wanna b friends w/ him 4ever.
Jindrich
This is one of the most beautifull things ever! you have a lot of talent
Candace
This poem touched me in a BIG way. It makes me think of all of my friends that i love so much. Im glad i have a friend like that.
natalie
it is a great poem
Someone
I find this poem an extemely touching one and it seems as if the author wrote it from the bottom of her heart. I thnk that Many people would like to read this excellent piece. This deserves a very high score. By the way you have a great website.
Jenna
I loved this poem. if you don't mind, I'm gonna put it up on my xanga 4 a friend who's going through a really rough time in her life right now. I have your name on my site. It's a good poem and it shows what a good friend and person you are. Thanks!
Niki
This was a very deep poem i liked the wording and it reminds me of me and my best friend
Jess
Good Job! Very cute and touching!
riri
This is a tight poem it puts in to words things we don't always say
linda
it is the best i have ever read
Danisha
i like this poem. It reminds me of when me and my friend got in a fight and i told her that i would do anything for her. i dont want her to get mad but i feel like she will not forgive me. i try my best to tell her that i am sry but it doesnt work.
Crystal
it was a great poem
chloe
i loved your poem! it's so meaningful and it really touched my heart. it dispicts a strong friendship. i hope u will continue writing more poetry. coz u have the talents for it. =)
jessica
it was really sweet
Ummi
Its a great poem. I liked it a lot. It taught me a lot of things which i thought i should have known before.
samantha
hey this poem is awesome and i would like to get a copy of any other peoms you write
jen
This was a poem from the heart
Whitney
This Poem is great. It shows what friends are really there for.
desirae
this poem is touching. this poem just wants me to send dis 2 all of my friends. jessica you write so beatifully.
Marisa
i really like the poem. to tell you honestly i printed it and gave it to a special friend of mine. she like it to so she put it on her binder. if i will rate this in 1-10 it will be 8! its really nice! :)
Jackie
hey this poem is great. i was wondering if i could use it because my best friend is moving away to collage this year and i wanted to wright her a poem but painting is more my style.
Ashley
I think that your poem was great.
Leon
Great. Loved it. Keep up da good work.
Jessica
this is a good poems i really like it i have friends that would jump off the end of the world for me and i would do the same also. this poem kinda says that
Caroline
I love this poem . it has made me so tender and I am going to write some of this to my friend.
Chris
I love the poem.
kate
The poem reminded me of how close i am to my friends! I put your name and peom on a gift for my good friend. It ment a lot to me!
Amber
I think this poem is wonderful!
kayla
great poem! it was really good. Same as me in some catagories
Danai
ahhh that was so sweet it brought tears to my eyes
Sherry
Coming to a new school for me was very hard, and there are two girls in my class that have been best friends for a long time. And i constantly keep trying to find a way to tell her that even though i m not her best friend, i will always be there for her and i will never let her down. :) (I would just like to say that I wrote this comment for Brittany Parsons and Lizzy Hartley)
Angela
This was a really good poem
Ginny
I get goosebumps when I read sad poems or poems that touch my heart and that is the affect that your poem gave me. Thank you!
nicole
well this poem touched me in places that ive never been touched before
crystal
this a really nice poem!
Jessica
well done. That's exactly what I would do for my two best friends
Emasha
This poem is so sencitive I like it so mush .
ketlyne
I liked it it describes me and friends
Alexis
I love this poem it is so much better then any of mine your a really awsome writer. I can't wait till I get as good as you are but I have a long way to go. I hope you keep writing!
Jackie
your poem was very inspirational. And made me realize how important my friends are to me.
Laura
I read this poem, and i am truly touched. I am telling with friendships and fighting right know. This is an awesome poem!:)
Seri
The poem is very nice. it's the best one so far. it's absolutele wonderful!
moi
its REALLY good
cn
It is great
jeanene
it touched me and i read it to my best friend and he cried and the only time i ever seen him cry was at funerals.
Tay
OMG that is sooo great now that is so what a friendship is about keep it up!
Brittany
Hi, i'm not much of a poet so i mostly read peoples poems and by far yours is one of the best i've ever read. It may really touch someone like it did me
Amanda
i really like this poem its a great poem about friendship
Paola
This is a really good poem it is really touching. I am pretty sure your friend loved it Jessica.
Jade
Yr poem touches my heart! REally good words put in that poem of yr's Jessica!
Mallory
Jessica, I just wanted to say this poem is so beautiful and very well written, I love it so much and thank you for putting it in here and sharing it with everyone. it really is a beautiful poem and i can relate to it so well. You are an awesome writer so keep on writing.
Mika
The poem was awesome and so true.
Whitney
this poem fits a problem in my life right now where ive always been there for this person and i sent him an e-mail telling him my feelings were a lil stronger than he knew. and well he took one of the things that i said wrong, and now he thinks that i don't have time to listen. That im no longer a true friend. :(
tegan
it was so sad it is perfect almost! i abasolutely looovvveeeddd it
Lacey
I totally loved your poem! I'm love to write poems myself! I like how you put thought into how you really feel. Keep your head high and stay at writing poems!
Tiffany
I loved this poem, i got online one day to look for a poem exactly like this one b/c one of my friends is going through a rough time and i wanted to let him know i am always here for him and i seen the name of this poem and sure enough it was the perfect one, and to Jessica u wrote a wonderful poem, it would be nice someday to see more poems by u up here. i'd definately read them.
Lora
your poem was awsome it is touching and i relly know how it is to be in fights with friends and i have people i talk that understand the situation! i really like your poem it was touching!
Richard
This is really a beautifull poem, I've got a very close friend with lots of problems, I'm trying 2 help her as much as I can. And this poem made me think 'bout what dear friends we are :) I love it, I really do!
GrAcE
Hay, I really liked your poem it was great! You must have a good imagination. It reminds me of this fight im having at the moment with my best bud and i sent it to her to show her i care. Well done and keep writing :)
Debbie
That poem was awesome Im gonna show all of my friends what a great poem writter you are. Awesome job!
Sherrie
I LOVED THAT POEM HEAPS AND I SENT IT TO MY BESTIE.
Sherrie
I love this poem! As soon as i read it i sent it to my best friend Rebekah. It is so sweet!
Jayda
i loved your poem it was great!:)
diana
i really liked it good job
nick
this is a very nice poem. right some more
shilah
Your poem is a very insperational
Whitney
I thought this poem was so good. I sent it to one of my closest friends. I could feel her passion in my stomach as i read it. I LOVED IT!
George
Very Nice and moving poem May God Bless you to write many more. Cause you are a good poet.
Laura
In my language arts class we had to find a poem showing gratitude and love to someone and since I picked my best friend Kelsey I needed a good friendship poem. This poem described exactly what I was feeling! Thanks Jessica:)
Kamera
This is a great poem. It really explains how I feel right now with one of my closest friends.
Ferne
My best FRiend just sits in silence all day and never speaks english and very soon she will return to Japan and I reminded me how much I will miss her
Jenny
My best friend is the best, most wonderful person I know and this poem reminded me of our unconditional friendship and how we help each other through hard times. You really are a great poet Jessica!
laura
That poem expresses exactly how i feel about a new friend. He goes through a lot. But i'm always gonna be here for him.
Amber
I thought the poem was great. It was everything I've been wanting to tell my best friend, but just haven't found to right words. Good Job!
jessi
i wish i could write a poem like this one i liked it alot.
Illi
This is a great poem well done Jessica!
Jessica
it was very nice & sweet & it sounded like she said it ALL from her heart! It touched both me & my friend who was sitting next to me when I read it!
ROCIO
I really enjoyed your poem. it was great.
Donna
I really like this poem and I understand were you're coming from and what you mean through out this poem.
Adrian
I LOVED this poem. IIt has emotion and heart and can relate to many people. There is REAL talent herre!
amber
Me and my bestfriend foughtyesterday and this totally describes everything that i needed to tell her. Thanks!
yusra
I love your work. It's really touching and made me realise what friends really are. well done!
Desirae
i wanted to say that this poem was the best its is real good and it defis friendsship well
Kimberlie
I loved this poem. it reminds me of my best friend lola, we've been best friends for 7yrs n we've both been through alot. We met in 6th grade and through out all them years, she's been with me through the ups n the downs. n vice versa. now i'm gettin ready for college n she's bout 2 1/2 mths preg, n gettin married. even though our lives are changing, we're still the very same people.
Meghan
I really like this poem. It reminds me of my friend back in my old home town. We were always there to lean on when times got rough and since Ive moved its been hard to do things w/o her being there beside me. But like the poem I know shes always there for me. Your poetry is awsome!
Andria
u are really talented , and u found the way to express yourself i wish i could to . this is just great honestly keep on writing
Joe
this poem is great, because it reminds me about my friends.
Tiffany
i like this poem alot i give it a 10 after i read this i sent it to my best friend jackie
Chihiro
It was so good, that this poem make me cry. Jessica, hope u could made more poems like this!
Shaleia
hey! jessi if you read dis its me shaleia. just wanted to say dat dis is such a great poem and it really does express what i go through with a lot of my friends.
lizzy
I really liked this poem it descibed my feelings exactly.
Stephanie
Great poem! Its dedicated ( by me) to my friends!
Courtney & Emilee
It was very good!
katharina
this poem was very touching. i am having trouble with a friend right now and this really helped me understand. thanks
Krista
Your poems has touched me! Its exactly how i feel about my best friend!
Ryan
That beutiful poem, It touched my heart, A poem of friendship, The power of art
jade
i really like ur poem. its beautiful
Lacy
I love your poem! My friend, Sarah and I have been having troubles with our friendship because since we are in high school now we dont see each other as much as usual, so we are starting to get together more often, and this poem was the reason. Thank you so mcuh!
Cassi
this was a very touching poem, i liked it a lot
Ash
Hey This was an excellent poem. I just recently moved out of my house after years of abuse from my father and I live so far away from my best friends whom I loved a lot. It's been hard but I finally made a best friend where I am living now and her name is Heather. She is my guardian angel and I sent her your poem because it says everything a person like her deserves to hear. Way to write such a poem-keep it up and you'll go places.
Hez
I LUV IT! My senior class and I are going to Chicago this weekend and while we are up there My three friends and I are celebrating a birthday and I think that this will fit the card perfectly!
Dan
this poem reminded me so much of how my best friend ditched me, and it just reminded me that i have new best friends now, and i have 2 b the best friend i can, and give them a shoulder to cry on, thx for the reminder Jessica!
Jon
Just wanted to say that i love the poem it is really nice and beautiful :)
LeeAn
This is such a good poem! I love it.
jacki
this poem was really nice and showed just how much friendship is worth and how much we care about eacthother.
Tylise
Everyone needs a friend like this! I found one and I am not giving her up! I love her!
Kerri
I really love this poem. Its great and makes alot of sense. This is just what I needed to send to my friend!
Angie
I read this poem and it made me cry, I think it is really good and touches you right at the heart. Please write more I'd love to hear them!
Asmi
I think ur poem was reallly sweet.
rache
I TOO HAVE BEST FRIENDS AND I MIGHT LOSE THEM AND THIS POEM DISCRIBED MY FEELINGS. I LOVED IT
manda
this poem told myfriend exsactly wut i needed to tell her! we were gong through a very rough time and i printed this uop and gave it to her and from this day on all she will ever say say is a burden is lighter when carried by two! i love your poem and i only encourage you to keep writing pieces like these. people like uyou have a talent and u finally found the way to use it! keep up the good work!
Tiff
My best friend Becca and I had gotten into a fight, and i always visit this site and i found this poem! When i sent it to her and she read it she wrote me a long email that made both of us cry! And i just think this poem is really touchin and sweet!
Libby
This poem really spoke to me and helped me to put my life (inparticulary my friends) in perspective. Keep on writing your awesome peoms coz they're da shit aye. Thanks again for your poem. I'll never forget it.
Rach
I think this poem is great it gets right to the point
Jess
That was great. helped me find the right words to say to one of my friends
g
well jessica that an awsome poem and it makes alot of sense i kinda felt the same way too. But sometime that just the part of life and friends will be there 4 u or and sometime they won't but when you loose that friendship that means alot to you it hurt. But then you find someone better or someone that will understand you and be there right by your side when you need them. so keep on writing because sometimes that the only way that you can express yourself on writing poems i write poem too and well just keep it up aight?
APEL
I HAVE A BEST FRIEND SHE IS EVERYTHING TO ME I CAN TAKE A BULLET FOR HER, ANYONE WHO MESSES WITH HER THEY MESS WITH ME, WE NEVER FIGHT WE SPEND EVERY DAY TO GETHER. WE KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT EACH OTHER. BUT ANYWAYZ I LIKED YOUR POEM ALOT.
rox
i loved your poem it really meant alot it touched me in a way that wasn't sad but wasn't happy all i have to say to the author of this book is you can go farther than you think with your skills of poetry and may all of your dreams come true!
TAMMY
what a brilliantly written poem. well done!
mary
I thought your poem was great it reminds me of all the friends i have and all the friends i had its really great.
ally
this poem is really good it reminds me of a friend that I have that is just like that
JESS
jessica what a groovy cool poem i've always wanted to write something that good and its so hard writing. i have a friend called becky as well i don't see her because her mum is a bit mean i mss her a lot.
Beth
I think that this poem is very touching.
KrAzY
It Was a TIGHT poem and i luved it i dedicate it to my BEST friend for life Nay-Nay!I luv you girl
Andi
Promise is a great poem!i gave it to a friend who was going through some tough times so she knew i cared. she's doing much better now Thanks!
wafa
it is so touching
Jaden
This poem touched my heart and it was great to give to my friend because she and I are a lot closer now and we hang out more and it also touched her heart too. I think you are a really good poet and I wish you lotz of luck on writing you next ones in the future. Thanx a bunch!
Dana
Your poem was really great. It is just the thing to help me cheer up a friend who's parents are going through a divorce. I know it will bring sunshine to her day. Thank you and God Bless!
quita
This poem ROCKZ and i would just like to say that u have such a good poem riting talent Keep the good stuff going man!
Nikki
Jessica - This poem really hit home for me, becuz I recently got in a big fight with a friend. and her name was Becky. SHe died recently in a car accident, and this poem just reminded me that I think her and I could have been friends again. Great Job Jessica!
Rayza
I think this poem is meant for all the people who have problems with there friends and its stading the truth so i think is realy good that jessica made apoem about it.
Bob
This poem brought tears to my eyes. thank you
nora
this is the sweetest poem my friend vanessa and i have ever read about friendship! we think you should seriously publish a book about friendship poems! kewl buh-bye
heder
i love this poam it makes me think of all my best friends.
megan
i love this poem sooo much. It expressed how i felt and put it down on paper. Great Job!
heave
I loved your poem, it touched me and really shows whats in the heart of freinds, true freinds
Jenn
This poem is exacly what i needed to send to my BEST FRIEND cuz she moved away from me about 3 weeks ago. Thanks
Alicia
I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM ME AND MY FRIEND JUST HAD A BIG FIGHT AND WE RE FINALLY ARE FRIENDS AGAIN AND WHEN I READ THIS POEM IT REMINDED ME HOW MUCH OF A FRIEND WE REALLY ARE TO EACHOTHER
Larry
hey that poem is REALLY sweet! im a really tough girl, but some poems. like this one, make me just totally melt! it is really nice!
Amanda
i loved ur poem it really touched me
Michelle
I think the author of this poem did a beautiful job of writing it
Justin
Excellent poem. This is exactly what I needed to say to a friend going through some very hard times.
Lauren
This was very good. I have a really good friend and I wish I could wrie poems about our friendship like that but i am not talented at that sort of thing. But you are good job! I love it
ashley
this poem is very touching. and comes from the heart- i can tell.
Kate
i read ur peom and i thought it was beautiful i hope to be able to read more by you in the future.
sahar
coooooooooooooooooooooool!
Vanessa
I have a best friend that had moved away years ago and we have been friends since pre-kindegarten. I've been looking for a poem to send to her to let her know how much she means to me. I also write poems like yours, but it is helpful to know someone else shares the same viewpoint. Thanks!
Aaron
This poem is great, it was what I needed to say to a friend, thanks!
lucy
Jessica, i love your peom it is so sweet. Sine it was the way i felt about all my friends i sent it to every one. I just want to say i LOVE your peom.
Melony
I really like this poem cuz it reminds me of my friends and what happened.
Marisol
Great poem has a lot of truth to it.
lesha
i really like this poem because it is what i need at the moment to give to my best mate
bannana
I love this poem it reminds me about me in away.
kid
beautiful
Maria
This poem totally represents true friendship!It's short,but SO sweet.
Jesus
This poem was very nice and it shows what being a good friend is all about. I write poetry too, at least I try to.
Jennifer
This is a really beautiful poem.
Nikki
This is a great one! I can totally relate to it with all my friends! They are there for me and they know i'm there for them..its goin to all my friends!
Jason
Great poem It came straight from the heart you can tell
Erin
I wont be anyone to you..I'm a person out of many reading your poem..but you should know that you touched my heart..your poem will remain in my thoughts for quite some while..just one of those things
Laura
This poem really touches my heart!! And i have a friend who is just like that!
Baby
I thought that this poem is really heart felt! I thought of my best friend when I read this!
Daisy
I really love this poem.You are a fabolus poet.Continue with this wonderful work.This poem reminds about my best friend.beautifu poem.
Jessica
This poem reminded me of my friend Lizeth and how much she means 2me.
jjinjk
This poem reminds me of me and my best freind Ericka. I want to decate this poem to her.
Samantha
This poem makes me want to cry.
Crystal
This is a great poem
Fleurtje
Jessica, your poem is great. I loved it
Nikki
simple yet very, very touching. :)
Kara
this poem is sooo good. everyone should sent this too a friend that u truly care about.i loved the poem
STRAWBERRYZ
I LOVE YOUR POEM!
tanner
i LOVE this poem. it really relates to my everyday life.
Molly
This was a gread poem for anyone who has a best friend. This goes for anyone who does love, trust, and care for a good friend. If you have a best friend then you will know what I mean by this. Keep up the good work and you should accomplish life alot better.
sweetangel
when i read this poem it brought tears to my eyes. it is really great thanks for submitting it
Nicola
I gave this poem to my friend at a time when it pretty much summed up what I wanted to say and it only made things even better between us. Thank you for a beautiful, inspired poem that helped me a lot.
Bartez
Keep up the good work!
Erin
I love this poem, me and my best friend think it's great, keep up the GREAT work~
Trina
I love you're poem. It speaks volume's with friendship's because it's hard to find someone else who understands your situation no matter how hard you try! I just wanted to say that it's a GREAT poem!
jessica
this poem totally represent what me and my friends feel, most if them, go through really tough times!
ashley
I could tell the poem came from the heart and that is what made it so good. It was so true, spoken straight from the heart..
Kittie
this is exactly what i've been telling my best friend since we've met and even though i dont like her boyfriend, i'll still always be there for her if she has a problem with him or any one or anything else.
Cara
this poem toatly explaines the way i feel towards my best friend
lovely
great
arifa
its a real good poem ! keep it up its for frendz who r alwayz there for each other
Dustin
This is a good poem that is something I would do for my friends.
Misty
I really like this poem. It explains true friendship. not all friendships are full of joy and happiness. For they all need help with burdens to.
AD
great poem, i love it <-ADFUNDUM-> ghent-Belgium
Heidi
I believe this poem is very inspiring. It's hard these days to find a true friend, but I did finally a couple weeks ago.
Crystal
It is really good i like it alot.
Talishia
Excellent work onthis poem it really touched me and my ffriends I am a poet to maybe we could email each other some of our work but if not keep up the good work
laura
your poem, inspired me because I have a friend just like this.
Kathy
This is really a good work. Words so true, but sometimes hard to live up to.
Cara
aww it was sooo good i got chills!
Bobby
I think the poem you wrote was very sweet.=)
shayne
i like your poem a lot
Jessica
This poem is great and I really like it because I feel that way about my friend.
CM
Great!! Simply Great!!
Anthony
Your poem is the perfect poem that describs a promise I made to a freind; it hit close to home... awsome poem
Debs
I can understand the strong feelings you have expressed in your poem, Jessica. I really liked reading it. Keep up the brilliant writing!
ali
That was one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read! Keep up the good work!
Laura
I love this poem! This is what I try to tell my friends.
Brandy
I love this poem. It reminded me of my best friend.
Shauna
I think that this poem is wonderful! It explains exactly what is going on in my life ad when my friend e-mailed it to me I practicaly baled! Thankyou for writing this poem you saved m life.
Alison
I know exactly who to send this to. It is perfect.
jonathan
this,is a very good poem!
bosha
i loved it.i sent it to one of my closest friends and we just didn't become friends at the first sight he had an old girlfriend dump him and i was there to help him thabks for writing this poem
Emily
This poem is very well written, and it hit very close to home.
Henry
This Poem "Promise" has made an friendship even more than it was. I would like to thank you for that. It just made alot of sense of what we were going through right then and there. THANK YOU!!!!!
Jessica
This poem is very sweet, and sincere.
Dinez
This poem seem so real because a promise is something everyone needs to keep. I always try to lend a helping when needed.
Kaylee
Jessica, this poem was fantastic!! I loved eveything about it. It completly describes my friendship with my best friend, Kristy. Thank you and good luck on your future poems.
Brittany
I thought that was an awsome poem!

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