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This poem explains how much I love my best friend Jeremy and how his life cheers me up. I would do anything for him!

Jeremy, My Pal

The moon is at it's zenith,
I'm staring into space.
I take a glance at the stars,
There I see his face.

A smile stretched ear to ear,
Lights up my dingy soul.
He dances a jig through my thoughts,
My God! He's on a roll!

His soul is strong and full of will,
I'm so proud of him.
I admire his perseverance,
His laughter's never dim.

I spend a lot of time with him,
Happy it makes me feel.
He's the one in which I confide,
This I know is real.
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29 Visitor Comments

Annette
I know exactly what u mean
farjana
marvelled me a lot
Jessica
Nice, happy poem. Well done!
Connor
It's wonderful to see somene spending so much time with a friend. Let him know you admire him-- you could learn from him and better yourself.
chase
wow, i loved this poem it reminded me of one of my friends thanks so much for writing this. -chase
amie rose
i like the metaphors, which im pretty sure u used, and the angle of which u wrote the poem.
Tyler
This is a great poem 2 read
Stephanie
This poem was just wonderful it reminds me of my loving boyfriend and i love him so much!
TITA
IT'S SO FUNNY HOW YOU DESCRIBE YOUR FRIEND JEREMY. HE SEEMS SO MUCH LIKE MY "JEREMY". SO VIVID. THATS WHAT I LOVE ABOUT HIM. AND IF THINGS DONT WORK OUT I HOPE WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS. I LOVE HIS COMPANY, HEARING HIS VOICE MAKES ME FORGET ABOUT MY WORRIES AND PAINS. I APPRECIATE HIM FOR WHO HE IS. GOD BLESS YOU JEREMY.
Chelsea
This is an awesome poem. my boyfriends name is jeremy and he is just the same as u explained in this peom! He is GREAT!
Lori
This poem really inspired me. I love how you began with the image of gazing into the stars. People can really touch your life, and it sounds like jeremy really has. I admire that.
Dany
This poem reminded me of my friend Jeremy from kindergarten. We got reunited in 2nd grade and stayed together in 3rd grade. until I moved at the end of January and left him. I haven't seen him since then and we have no way to keep in touch, and I wonder if he remembers me. I jus hope he knows that I still love him though. The poem was great and I hope you continue writing more.
Smarty
This poem is great, it voices exactly how I feel about my many friends who have been there when I need to talk or need someone to listen
Jeremy
my name's jeremy,and after reading this i think i'll try to be a better friend. great work by the way!
Matt
This poem reminds me of my cousin Jermey. When I need someone to talk to he is there for me.
Mel
this poem use to match my life with a guy also called Jeremy perfectly until we had fight thanks it made me feel better
lauren
thats a good poem
A.
that is really good my freind for almost all my live was shot and killed last year he was only 15.
francis
The poem is amazing, I think that it was just written for me to send it to my friend
Kate
I think you have courage to write that. That is so awesome that you care so much about one person that you think about him like that. Im proud of you, even tho i dont know you, you are a great person im sure.
Rachael
My Jeremy; what a good friend he was. My best friend died last year in a car , this poem relates to him. It reminds me of what a loving person he was. It moved me to tears. Thank you for sharing it
Britt
I loved this poem because if this ever happened to my brother i would definatley like to use it
Kate
I really like the wording you used to express yourself. It is unique and fun. Serious but to the point. nice work!
edlyz
this is a great poem keep up the good work!
Shawn
This poem is awesome but when i read it, it made me think of my friend jeremy who past away several months ago he had a construction beam fall on him and it crushed his body! but the poem is very good
Maria
i loved the poem. i thought it was really great!
Valerie
You should be very proud of your self!You have written a very touching poem! GOOD WORK!
Nicholas
Beautiful poem,you truly know how to express yourself.
Margie
At first I was looking for a poem for one of my special friends and when I came across the tittle of your poem "Jeremy, My Pal" I just had to read it, because like you I had a Jeremy, my brother who committed suicide and the poem just moved me, you are a great poet, you have a beautiful ways of explaining your thoughts and emotions! Thanks a lot, bye, bye

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