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Everyone has a first love and they often still stay in your heart.

Losing Your First Love

My feelings for you grew stronger as the days went by,
you hurt my feelings how could you cheat and lie.

After everything that happened between us,
the one thing that was missing was the trust.

The night you had me over
my heart melted the moment you held me so close to you,
then you dumped me in a heartbeat, leaving me cold and blue.

I cry every second wondering what I did wrong,
I thought we'd last for so long.

I miss not hearing your voice on the phone,
I feel heartbroken and very alone.

why can't we work this out and still be together
you by my side telling me everything will be alright,
why did we have to end and you leave me
speechless on that cold January night?

I still like you a lot and hope one day again soon
you will realize that what we had was special to both you and me,
and that God intended for us to be together
we were meant to be.
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18 Visitor Comments

jr.
this poem was so touching to me. i literally fell into tears. losing some one you really care about is quite painful, and just remembering the "good" times makes me even sadder. i was just recently released by my g/f lizzy, she just didnt realize how much i cared about her and always thought wrong things "the trust was missing". time will conme t mend my broken heart. so painful it is to lose your first love. anyway, i have to say that this poem is quite deep and yet simple, definitely one of the best piec3s of literary arts ive read.
katie
this poem reminds me what i am going through right know. It brings tears to my eyes.
audrey
this poem really touched me because my boyfriend cheated and left me after he promised he would never hurt and never wanted to see me hurting he hurt me so much. that's why im touched by it audrey
Lindsey
WOW! Really, really nice! I'm sure this is exactly what everyone goes through after their first true love and it's written perfect! KEEP IT UP!
FLO
NICE FOR REAL, I BEEN LOOKING FOR SOMETHING LIKE THIS FOR MY X GRL FRIEND!
Caroline
My boyfriend dumped me on Tuesday. I felt like our love was so strong we could get through anything. The reasons he gave were we were going in different directions! I loved him with the whole of my heart. I have recently found out that he cheated on me on a weekend away in Latvia, I respect him enough to have dumped me after that but it shouldn't have got to that point! I loved this poem it explains how i feel. xxx
troyetta
i can really relate to every word written in this poem. My first love moved away to Bolingbrook, and I tried to keep in touch, but he eventually stopped caring (calling), and I didn't wanna feel like I was stalking/needed him, so eventually I stopped calling too. But EVERYDAY I wanna call/see him.
sharlyn
WOW! I have been searching for someone who really understands what i am going through. Your poem really touched my heart and soul. My first love broke up with me, and two months later i found out why. he was cheating on me with a girl at his school. Losing my first love really hurt, and it still does; however, with poems like this i know i can make it through the hard times. Thank you so much for allowing me the chance to read your thoughts.
Jen
This Poem was so hot! I actually looked up "poems about losing a love" on Yahoo, and it gave me this site and this was the first poem that popped up. It makes me realize that there are other poeple going through or have gone through what i am dealing with right now.
Garth
this poem was awesome, but it made me think of my love that I'm losing now and it hurts so bad it makes me want to die
Jenni
I really liked it. it made me think about what my boyfriend did to me when i was with him
Erica
It mad me feel really sad because my boyfriend move to a different state but me andhim are friends now. He wants to be with me & i want to be with him
Brook
I just got dumped by my b/f chris and this made me cry i loved it this is the way i feel well done
tulz
...::sniff sniff::...beautiful...touching...gotta love...peace out...(me like korn too)
amber
very well done and oooh sooo true,I loved it.
Melissa
I love this poem to death. It is exactly what I want to say but havnt yet. Thank you so much for your work.
eric
very nice
BEBA
AHHH.... REMINDED ME OF MY FIRST LOVE..{EXACTLLY} BUT,,, I LEARNED TO LIVE WITH OUT HIM, IT TOOK ME 2 YEAR TO GET OVER HIM. BUT, I MADE IT~!!!~

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