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This poem is about one of the greatest pains in the world - loving someone who doesn't love you back. I wrote it but never did send it to that someone.

Maybe I should have.

If Only You Could See

This isn’t supposed to be happening,
I can’t believe it’s true.
Even though it may sound silly,
I can’t help falling in love with you.

You have the body of a god,
Enchanting green eyes,
And the perfect brown hair.
Just the sight of you makes me weak.

If only you could see me,
The same way I see you.
We could be together forever,
In a paradise for just us two.

When I look into your eyes,
I see the heaven that I long to be a part of,
As I would be in a state of joy and comfort.
I want you to know I love you with all my heart,
If only you could see.
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20 Visitor Comments

ashleigh
that is the most sweetest poem ever! it has so much meanng, and it is so true I LOVE IT xoxo enjoy your day
Maria
i love this peom its great
natasha
I loved this poem so much I posted it on my website.
mousa
it's the best poem i ever read
LUZ
I LOVE YOUR POEM I FEEL U BECAUSE IT HAD HAPPEN TO ME AND IS A STRONG FEELIN THAT CAN'T GO AWAY FOR MORE THAT U WANT IT TO GO AWAY. ATT SHORTY
Erica
you poem has touched me because the same thing happened to me i loved a guy who didn't love me back and thanks to you i can use this poem and show him how much i love him thanks for the inspiration
Cynthia
I really like this poem i think it realates to a lot of real life people who sometimes fall in love but aren't seen
frenando
this is a great poem
al
i feel the same about the love of my life. we are still together but i wish she felt the same way i do. our life would be so much better but i believe her past x's have given her such a bad taste for love. she is just not going to give it up freely. i don't blame her but i know we would prosper much better.
Helen
HI MY NAME IS HELEN, AND MY OPINION OF THIS POEM IS THAT SHOWS ALOT OF FEELINGS AND MAKES PEOPLE FEEL REALLY HAPPY AND TO KNOW THAT THERE THINGS IN LIFE THAT CAN'T BE THE WAY YOU WANT THEM TO BE.
Jake
i agree i to love anouther who cant see. i astand olane in the shadows as a meere friend and nothing more. thanks for the inspiration
Crissy
This is a nice true poem. Many people relate to it.
Co~Rie
I loved that poem because only to well do I know how you felt. it was absolutely wonderful
minerva
i thought it was very touching
claudia
i love your poem. belive it or not i do know how you feel. keep on writing poems you are very good at it.
Veronica
I just wanted to tell you guys that this poem is so beautiful. You got 100%
Tommy
a very touching poem, i can feel the pain VERY good poem!
Jose
i know how you must felt because of that person. It hurts I have been thorugh it. That poes is really great.
Peggy
A very touching poem. I felt the love. Wonderful!
Chris
Very beautiful, it stirred my emotions.

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