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This poem is about a girl who is so in love with a boy. She thinks everything is going perfectly and that their love is growing. Then one say everything turns around and he starts ignoring her and putting her down.

It gets better again for a couple days. Then he goes back to being mean and eventually they break up. This poem was written about my ex-boyfriend, Danny.

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raven
this wuz soooo good it made me wanna cry cuz my boyfriend ack the same way and it hurts me 2 see how people change just 2 get what they want
SHANTICE
I LIKE THIS POEM!
Jess
You have a 10 out of 10 from me. This happened to me. Ironically, the reason he stopped talking to me, is the person who sent this to me. Keep writing!
Stacey
This is an AMAZING poem it really has touched me and i lovedd EVERYTHING about it.

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When You Love Someone

When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.

Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.

You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.

He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.

One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.

He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.

You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.

It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Jessica
i really like the poem it touch it saying the truth.
crystel
i loved this poem it touched me really deeply it just so real
Ashley
This poem I would rate a ten. I loved it and it is related to my problem tha I am having nw with my boyfriend but, I hope he don't end yp tha way but tha is the road he is headed on as of now. Thanks for helping me express myself with these words.
Brittany
i love this poem, its so tragic yet perfect.
Holly
This poem relates to me and my ex in a lot of ways. He started off the perfect boyfriend then ended up being the worse friend. I am so glad i found this poem it makes me wanna cry.
natalie
i liked your poem because it really touched my heart
York
Love, wat is it to me its nothing to no one life hands u no helps n handle bars so u can keep stable life is ups n downs i loved one guy lol and never again shall i! last chances come and go
LaTasha
aww. i feel like this after my first true love brock up with me
mai
I love it sooo mUCH!
jessica
the poem was great sorry about ur x-boyfriend dany any ways i love the poem
jane
i really love this poem as it sounds like my relationship at the moment. it touches you deeply
Quanya
I WANTED TO VOTE FOR THIS POEM BECAUSE IT RELATES TO ME A LITTLE BIT BUT THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM ONCE YOU REALLY READ IT.
shaniqua
this poem really touch me i would like to hear more
kyshona
dang dat 1 was very deep
mai
i know i had gave another comment about another poem bas for this really contain of sentences and parts that happens daily with everybody thanks for the person who had wrote it and i hope he or she writes again it is very nice and real .
griffin
this poem was awesome you know it really touched me cause my last girl friend we were together for 2 months and then i went to vancouver for a week for vacation and she forget i exsisted
Sheily
It was so great that I decide to use it in a story I am writing hope u can read it. Was really good I love it 10 cookies for you. Lol take care
cassie
i liked this poem because it reminds me abit like wat my last boyfriend was like e used to be ok with me then e wudnt be and i just used 2 wonder if it was my fault this poem touched me
Hinata
this is a vary powerful when i read it,it was like what happened to me was happening all over great job and keep writing the poems if i were you i would try to get published if i was not olready
shaylena
ohhh i love this poem its so good
samantha
it waz a good poem
Laura
That is a wonderful, touching heartfelt poem. I'm going throught something very similar with someone who I care for deeply. I felt isolated and alone but reading this poem and the comments made me fell better and to realize there are many people going throught the same thing. Thank you.
Kateisha
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Recently i went throught the same thing so i understand how it feels and trust me you will be okay. I believe that you cleared some people minds and probably avoided some decisions that they woulkd have made in the future because if I hadn't gone throught the same things a couple months back you would have helped me. So thank you and I hope this vote will help you out.
lilshawty_27
i really liked this poem becaue i could realate to it because i just broke well he just broke up wit me and it is so horrible how it ended because every thing was so perfect but what eve good poem love it portia
Kholo
This poem is perfectly written, I can relate to most of the story. Its a big risk to expect what you give and more from someone because when it does not happen, its too heavy a load to carry. My weekend has been very tough.
JUSTIN
I LOVED YOUR POEM I HAD HURT IN MY HEART BEFORE TO SO I KINDA UNDERSTAND THANK YOU
Ashley
this poem describes my last relationship with a guy. i really loved him, but things just didnt work out. this poem touched me deeply. i love the lyrics. they are so strong and well said.
saru
i m so impressed frm this poem becoz i feel the same what u r feeling. i would give u 110 out of 100.
domonquie
this poem is really touching in many ways you have my vote
Monica
I love this poem
judy
i like thiz pome bacuse it was true grils boy just say tht they love u . but itn all lies. grils dont be fool by ur man.
Kelly
I like this poem. But i mean love sometimes isnt like that. Like one day hes not all nice then hes a jerk then 2 days later hes all nice. I mean it makes since but not relle. I just been in relationships but better than that u kno?? Well anyways i love this poem and i hope whoever who wrote this poem writes more! DEF. Love Always, Kelly
Rumaire
This poem touched me very much. it inspired me to get more into my poetry. I like this poem very much!
maggie
I love this poem i can really relate to it im in love too
nika
this is so true. touched apart of me
Nessa
The poem was great because i can relate to wat was being said. It reminded me of my present relationship a few weeks ago. It was not until i deside to end it an move on, that he came to his senses ever since he's been the sweetest person.
Maribel
Remind's me when i was in a relatioship like that with my ex-boyfrined,Ronderick
Krista
This was such an awfully GREAT poem! You did a great job and put a lot of mind and spirit in it. When I first heard it, I started crying. Your a fabulous poet and you could have a future with poetry! Well Done
manoush
I just really loved this poem and it touched my heart so much-i dont know how to explain it~!~!~
loulou
OMG I LOVED IT!IT RELATES TO ME. I JUST WANT U TO KNOW THAT THIS POEM MADE ME CRY BECAUSE DAT HAPPENED TO ME. KEEP ON DOING WHAT YOU DO
Heather
This poem has really touched me. Its seems this is what me and my boy friend go through everyday. But it has touched me in a specail place in my heart.
jessica
this poems is so very touching it seems like that poem is made for me keep doing a great job
misha
sad. but a good poem!
AMBER
OMG THIS IS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL. I LOVE IT
cindy
i realy like this pome it so sweet and me i like read pome mrs . cindy
Jaqi
I loved this poem, this is exactly what I went through with my ex.
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