This poem is about a girl who is so in love with a boy. She thinks everything is going perfectly and that their love is growing. Then one say everything turns around and he starts ignoring her and putting her down.
It gets better again for a couple days. Then he goes back to being mean and eventually they break up. This poem was written about my ex-boyfriend, Danny.
When you love someone so deep inside,
It seems like it's so easy to hide.
You've loved him for so very long,
You would think he could do no wrong.
Every day you would hope and pray,
That he would always stay this way.
He treated you like you should be treated,
You thought your life was finally completed.
You thought your love was growing true,
And then one day it was all so blue.
He started putting you down and it hurt,
You thought all you were to him was dirt.
He started ignoring you and you wondered why,
All you wanted to do was curl up and die.
You thought your relationship would never end,
But that was all so fake and pretend.
One night he was so sweet to you,
You thought all those things were maybe untrue,
Two days later he was back the same,
You thought you were the one to blame.
He thought the relationship was getting too serious
And that you had become a little too curious.
By this time you knew it wouldn't last,
All the nice things he said were in the past.
You thought that you would marry him some day,
But this time God wanted to get his way.
You wanted things back how they were before,
But you knew this couldn't happen anymore.
It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock,
You heard the news and it wasn't a shock.
You knew this was going to happen soon,
As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.
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I really like this poem, at the moment I liked this guy he was being really sweet to me, saying we should hang out. Then he goes and be's all funny with me when I saw him. So this poem kind of touched me abit!
kristal
its so touching and sentimental i love it
JESS
THAT WAZ SOOO DEEP MAN WHEN I WAZ READING IT I WANTED 2 CRY
Ashley
I like it. It makes sense and it's the truth for some.
redbuddafly
I liked the poem and I could relate to it because it happend to me before. It was almost like you knew exactly what happend and how I felt when one of my ex's did the same thing to me. I hope to read more of poems so continue writing.
Latrisha
i voted this one beacause it happened to me and i can relate to it , the first couple of months was so good i thouhgt it was a fairy tail but after that he started not talking to me , and i thought it was someting i did but he is so nice sometimes and just not himself. so i hope you win
Maryoum
GREAT POEM !
Kassandra
I love this poem. It reminded me so much of me and my ex boyfriend Jorge. When he broke up with I wanted to curl up and die. I cryed when I read this poem.
Precious
hey this is one of the best poems that there has been in a long time!KEEP IT UP! LOVE ALWAYS PRECIOUS!
radhika
how true how true how true! i vote it 10 on 10 . excellent! brilliant. i love the way its jot down!
dannya
I BELEIVE THAT EVERY ONE HAS GONE THROUGH THIS LITTLE PHASE ,WHEN U BELIVE THAT THAT PERSON IS OH SO PERFECT, BUT IN THE END IT IS ALWAYS SO NOT TRUE.
shambria
this poem really touched me and i know what your talking about i went throw the same thing with this guy that was the love of my life one day but the one i hated the next.
jessica
that poem actually sounds like me and my first love falling apart i loved that poem
rachel
this vote made me cry im going through the same thing omg im like feeling this poem its soo good who ever wrote this is an amazing poet ! -sincerly rachel
Alisha
You did a wonderful job on this poem. You need to write a book of poems that's how good they are! Keep up the good work I write poerty too on teenage love, because I am a teenager.
maysoon
Hi. I liked your poem soooo much. It is very nice,impressive and I think you expressed your feelings in a very good way.
Jade
Your poem was very good. it showed true pain and hurt.
brittany
i thought this poem was very good. it reminds me of me and my ex thats exactly what he did to me so whoever wrote this poem dont feel bad because it happened to me too.
samantha
yes i really love this poem because it tells me story that happen in my life once this poem was true to me coz it is the same thimg that happen to me while i was reading it i just start crying because of what happen to me and how this poem touch my heart
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