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I wrote this poem to a guy that I was in love with and he had to move out of state. I will never forget him.
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Ashley
this makes me sooo sad because my boyfriend just moved about 5 months ago. and i am so in love i cant stop thinking about him. he lives 8 hours away! there is a chance that he could move back and if he does then we are meant to be. GREAT POEM!
Samantha
its a poem about something real and not fake
Lauren
I really can't tell you that i know how you feel because i'm in a two year relationship to this day but i know it's really tough on you to lose someone so important to you. i know if i lost my boyfriend i'd probably go crazy. not only is he my boyfriend but he is my best friend too!
Caitlin
Very excellent poem! It has such depth and desire. I really felt the feelings that the author put into it. It made me feel an urge of love and happiness but, yet sadness all at once. I really enjoyed it and I wanted to say thanks to the person who created it!
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Juliet's First Love |
| by Linze |
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Everything was perfect Like a relationship should be Time spent together Honesty trust till Eternity I never knew how much one day could mean to me I guess I was blind Not willing to see My love of my life had to leave Face to Face he slowly, patiently Explained everything to me Full of pain, shock Not wanting him to leave Was the hardest part that I did not want to believe Silence, grieving My heart could not take I wanted to fall in a deep sleep and never awake For the last time I look deep in his big blue eyes And all I could see Was a heart broken lover Because of me My Romeo has gone But maybe he will return To behold me his Juliet Without saying one word I need to move on That is what I tried to remind myself But it's hard for I could never love anyone else. |
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alexa
I like your poem. It touched my heart. I did experience something similar but fortunately me boyfriend came back 2 wks later. So hey, maybe he will come back you nerver know. If not move on but don't 4get him.
tasha
this poem had really touched me when i read it cause this is how my boyfriend did i love him so much i cry over him all the time can i ask you something what does it mean when u think about some one does that mean thier thinking about u to
Shureka
This is a very good poem it makes me think of my ex-boyfriend .
caridad
this poems really touch me. it reaaly nice so some one u like or love very much hope to here more from u
robin
this pome is good
raihana
this is a good poem. great job
Crista
this poem reminds me of the boy i was in love with that had to move away. he even had blue eyes. i loved him so much and i was so sad when he moved. it was a great poem
Jacqy
All I can really say is that I cryed when I read your poem. It is so amazing how somebody could have so much passion and Love for another person, and the way you brought your feelings into words. it is such a beautiful thing. Great Job!
Brittany
Hi my name is Brittany Im 15 I know Im young but Im in love. In love with the guy who left me to go into the navy. Now hes in Washington and is not coming home for 4 years.
Keenan
This was one of the best powms I have ever read and it was very touching
Kim
I loved this poem, it reminded me of my x-boy friend,and what I had to go throw and thill do go throw.
stephanie
i love this poem it touched me so so ill leave in such a way ill just say keep writing poems till the end
Lauren
* i know how u feel in a sense, my boyfriend of over a year might be moving miles and miles away from me, its not for certain yet but i dont see how i could go on, ive never found ne one like him, hes everything to me, i know its hard for you, and ur poem was really good.
Patience
this was a really great poem that has happened to me before it was either he moved away or i moved away it was great
Jackie
I know how you feel. My feeling might be a little different though because im the one who has to move. i feel guilty because i know he really likes me and i really like him. Ihope 1 day i will move back so we can be together and i really hope he feels the same way then about me.
Desiree
hey omg its so weird but thursday was my boyfriends lasy day of school cause he is moving to new york so i had to break up with him but thsi poem is exactly hwo i feel
monica
this is an awesome poem, im in this situtation right now.
jessie
I can relate to this poem. I think its amazing
Tashina
When I read the poem I cried at the end. The man I love now is going through a very rough time while im away at school he doesn't want me to come back untill im done. He tell's me that he cant be with me for much longer cause he thinks that he isn't worth anything and will ruin my life if I return to him. He says that I could do so much better but to me he is the best and your poem really explains the way I feel right now and I am hoping he will not leave but he just might.
Alyssa
omg this poem made me cry lol
Maria
I loved your poem it really touched my heart greatly. I almost cried remembering my love who went away. I love it!
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