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this poem was so good thats was the best poem ever u should write more!
saja
many days i wanted to scream the pain i feel inside ,but when i read this poam its just like the exact translation of what i feel inside ,it realy touched my heart ,thank you
rizwana
i luved the poem,it was excellent. well done to the person who took time in writing it.
tia
i absolutly LOVE this poem! You are so good at writing i would never be able to write somthing so magnificant and meaningful!
katlin
that poem was tight gurl if anyone know how to write it's u u odda write one 4 me
savannah
this was a touching poem. i would like to get to know more about you because you are vary talented.
chrissie
this was such a moving poem , so much depth within it, i wish i had wrote it
Jacki
I really like this poem, it has lots of meaning behind it.
chris
I like ending the best, inspired me loads, first in a long time .
samantha
simple. Related to reality, full of emotions thousands have felt yet few have understood. i bet you're mommas proud.
jennifer
I think this poem is a work of art.i had only reached the second stanza and already my heart was touched.a great writer,a great talent.
Ka-Ming
its reali good! i love the way u put so many mataphors similes etcetc. i liked the pattern it had n the rhyme.it was so touching too.it must have taken u forever to write this.
Andrea
It is sad....but true!
cole
its true, all to true, i thought i was over my x b/f, but i cant stop thinking of him ever since he likes some1 else.
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