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This poem is about a relationship dwindling - with only one party noticing, yet being able to do nothing.

The poem also explores reality by showing the reader you can only help someone so much; the other person must respond in some way for the bond to work. All too often, the relationship fades and you are left with one person heartbroken and the other totally unaware.

The Lie

Woke up this morning
Trying hard to hide my melancholy
I joined you for breakfast
And we continued our lie

Every day it is similar
You are cheery
And so am I
Our terrible lie

Can you imagine a time
When we awoke and did not speak
Realizing our moods would cause tension
Tension caused by too little life?

I do wish sometimes
As I leave for work sullenly
Dreading the day already
Weeping far within

The lie, terrible and unending
Would cease to be
And I would know the real you
And you the real me

But, the lie drags on for now
For it is not written in the stars
And perhaps it will never be
I am my own companion

The dreaded truth
Gathered in a lifetime
Sentenced for an eternity
Realized too late

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Vianna
this poem was really good. i liked it alot. to me it sounds like 2 people who pretend there happy but really there just unhappy and emotional and can;t take the preassure anymore so they live a lie.
Mayra
it hit me for my parents were lisving this lie, sadly it was me who had to waked them up and know dad hates me and mom loves me. at the end they are both happy. all in your poem is beautyful and truthfull
Rustam
It had been a year since emptyness and total darkness descended into my life. Read the poem and it really say the true feelings that i had when I discovered the lie and it made me lie just to make her happy. She thought I didn't know what's going on, but the truth hurts and it still hurts. To the suthor of this poem. I love it.
solomon
it is an emotional poem,it makes 1 think of the lie we live with everyday & it was the most beautiful thing ever read & not everything is as always as it seems in life. THANK U.
Tiffany
I really believe this is the best poem I've ever read. It has so much meaning to it. Wikket did a wonderful job writing it.
litia
i wanna vote for this poem because what the poem potery is sometimes we would like to make it up to someone inorder to be feel accpted by the person or avoid disapointmenton others inorder to accept them but in reality you dont.
daylu
this is a good poem i really enjoy reading it please send me one.
rebekah
this poem is really good it reminds me of a relationship that i just got out of because of all the lies he had told me and i couldnt take it no more. i really liked your poem
Heathet
this pome is so cool i wish i could write as good as you.
Kelsey
This is a really really good poem! I really liked it and ti touched me!
Just
Your poem is very deep and heartfelt. I was or am in this type of situation right now. I honestly do not care anymore about what we had that was special. Everyone makes mistakes and some are just ALOT better at stomping on someone's heart,even if they aren't even totally aware of the other's real feelings,such as mine. My situation is very personal so I won't get into it with the world but all I can say is that people should make TOTALLY sure someone is feeling how they think they are,BEFORE they tear their head off and treat them bad AND hurt them because they may need them someday and then what?Their left with the memories of what was actually a solid friendship,gone wrong. Gone so wrong.
Pam
I loved your poem because it was so real and true to how I feel. Thanks for sharing it with everyone.
Anastasia
I, really liked this poem because it comes close to home in one of my past relationships.
Meeta
I read this poem. It touched me and only shows that as a human beings we are divided on the basics of race,nation etc but the feelings are same. Emotions are same and the thougts are same on our minds when we are especially betrayed by the person whom we love very much.
Zoe
your poem reminds me of everything i watch my dad go through. I am 16 years old and in the past year my dad has confided in me about his relationship with my mum, or lack of should i say. i cant help him, i only wish i could but they are adults now. thankyou for letting me see the things he cannot say. xx
Jaicee
I love this poem. Infact I'm going thorough something like this. Reading this, I get a good prospect of my relationship from the outside looking in
toni
When havent I felt like this poem . in the last few yrs of my marriage i have felt so much of what you have written . thanks for the words to put to the feelings GREAT JOB
Jen
This was a beautiful poem, Wikket. I understand what you're saying, and it has to be hard. It's these experiences though, that help you realize who you are and allow you to become stronger. Keep the faith. God bless you.
laquanta
i like this poem it tells mostly about the truth and i loved it
Jin
wow this peom is beautiful, it really touched me. it made me cry.
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