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I wrote this poem late one night. I was in a very strange mood. I had not been getting much sleep. mostly due to insomnia, and was a bit sad about lost love. And why I had moved so far away from home.
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brianne
i think it should be a 5 star poem, because it really shows thoughtand emotion.
Brandon
This is so nice!
bryan
Nice poem,ill soon be writing about my lost love
Roe
I. liked this poem. it was woderful. i think it really meant a lot to me. because some bad things have been happening to me in my life right now. and i have bad insomnia right now. so i guess. i can just kind of relate or something. in other words. i loved it. great job.
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Dance Of Terror |
| by Justbleu |
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Window panes come crashing down Amidst the tears and pain Vanishing hopes are gone and flew away Up above through twilight Shadows cast across the floor Reflections of the past Trembling thoughts of one Dwelling deep within the soul A mystical sense of reality Captured by the craze All in bewilderment Of the shock in the wave Creatures of the dimness Chattering amongst the green Everything slows in stillness What is this we see? |
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Dener
Its really nice. Touched me.
breana
I liked it much, it has a certain jumping point in it that captures the reader.
Abb
Graet!
danielle
i like ur poem i feel like that sometimes when im awake and cant sleep hope u write some more poems good luck
Emily
I like it
april
have a friend that felles the same way.
abel
a good and thoughtful piece
jenny
ii like this peom too cause this poem is liek talking about how our pain actuallybrings a life of its own i understand its menaing this poem is so unique
aly
awwwwwww this was such a sad poem. but i loved it
eline
i don't know what to say ,, but its really good ,,
kuanani
its really nice poen i love it
nashia
i realy love this poem, it reminds of so many nights when im lying awake, your realy talented. i would give it a 9 out of 10
Tanner
this is a good poem it gets you thinking about the loved ones you miss i losed my aunt and i dint even get to tell her i love her b/c we were all ways fighting
Bay
Wow. I loved this. Feeling came through those words. I am very touched at this poem. It touched me very much.
jhosselyn
you have a great sense infreestyle keep on letting your feelings out on the great world of poetry
siobhan
im only 12 butthis poem touched me i found it very intresting and so read it to my mates they enjoyed it to Siobhan ---Xxx---
damian
this poem touched my heart because ive been through the same things
Gracie
this poem really touched me it said everything that i feel the writer did a very good job when this was written
Niki
It reminded me of the theatre. People on stage making us feel real things that belong to the stage. I wote for this because it can be so many things to so people people.
Tegan
man i really like this i read it and it was like oh my god wow
loz
i think ur realy talented. sum of those lines r realy deap and i can relate totally to what mood ur in. like u said u ws ina strange mood. wen ur upset but dont realy have a particular cause for the pain, and ur poem doest have a particular topic. its just random fealings in every line. its great. i love writing but my poems are so to the point and obvious. you have really inspired me.
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