Send some poems to a friend - the love thought that counts!

Poems for the People   -  Poems by the People

About the Poem

I wrote this poem late one night. I was in a very strange mood. I had not been getting much sleep. mostly due to insomnia, and was a bit sad about lost love. And why I had moved so far away from home.

Dance Of Terror

Window panes come crashing down
Amidst the tears and pain
Vanishing hopes are gone and flew away
Up above through twilight
Shadows cast across the floor
Reflections of the past
Trembling thoughts of one
Dwelling deep within the soul
A mystical sense of reality
Captured by the craze
All in bewilderment
Of the shock in the wave
Creatures of the dimness
Chattering amongst the green
Everything slows in stillness
What is this we see?

Six FREE things you can do with this poem!

Friend Want to share this poem with a friend? You can email it directly to your friend, with a personal message from you.
Vote If this poem touched you, please take a moment to Vote for the poem and perhaps leave a comment telling us why.
eCard Artistically inclined? You can use this poem in a graphical greeting card, designed by you, and then send it to a special friend.
Print Need a hardcopy? You can send a copy of this poem directly to your printer, without all of the color and graphics.
Author Want to send the author of this poem a private email? If they have maintained a current address with us, we'll send your message for you.
Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
brianne
i think it should be a 5 star poem, because it really shows thoughtand emotion.
Brandon
This is so nice!
bryan
Nice poem,ill soon be writing about my lost love
Roe
I. liked this poem. it was woderful. i think it really meant a lot to me. because some bad things have been happening to me in my life right now. and i have bad insomnia right now. so i guess. i can just kind of relate or something. in other words. i loved it. great job.
Dener
Its really nice. Touched me.
breana
I liked it much, it has a certain jumping point in it that captures the reader.
There are 79 Additional Visitor Comments (click to read them)
All Visitor Comments on this poem have been posted by people who wanted to let the author know the poem touched their hearts. If you would like to leave a comment of your own, please click the Vote button in the Response Panel above.

Poems for the People   -  Poems by the People