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This poem is meant to show how great a hot and sizzling lovemaking session can be. It attempts to show a bit of the harsh and lustful side and the loving and sensuous side of the act at the same time.

It is purposely lacking certain subtleties to gain the effect of a heaving chest and the rhythm is written to that of energetic lovemaking.

A Few Visitor Comments

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HOT!
Dionne
This is absolutely mind blowing. I love it. Now all of my body parts are awake and alert! Fantastic!
Rebekha
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You captured everything perfectly. I cant tell you anything else but it was beautiful.
Tarique
Best ever

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The Coupling Of Passion And Erotic Lusts

A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

ravi
Awesome!, truely Passinating, rekindles the memories of passionating romance.
shedevil
That was absolutly wonderful, and inspiring, to feel love like that is such a wonderful thing, I know because I too have found such a love.
Tye
I love it. so passionate. Great Job!
charlene
THIS POEM WILL SURELY GET U IM THE MOVE FOR LOVE. I'M GOING TO SZEND THIS POEM TO MY BOYFRIEND. :)
alicia
you did a great job on this poem
Sarah
Amazingly, you have captured the true meaning of love making with words. It was like a play, every word leading to the next in perfect harmony, without being voulgar. It is perfect, you should be really proud of your ability to voice such a moment as that with such elegance.
Faith
Amazing, it's like you're right there. Loved it!
Donna
This poem is beautiful and reminded of a very special encounter that I've come to share with a man. Thank you for sharing this.
Carrie
i love this poem. i felt the passion and the hottness. it was wonderful. i even think i broke a sweat reading it.
Kimberly
I would like to say that poem is so emotionally involved yet so passionate and touching with the ways it has been written. Fantastic!
Debbie
I ws so touched by this that I had to send it to someone. It brought me to tears because it describes exactly the way we were with each other the first time. Beautiful!
bre
i loved it it was intoxicating and exciting i couldnt wait to read the next line
jeancarlos
its very full of passion
Don
This poem had my girlfriend melting in my arms.
Jess
I love this poem. Takes me back to some very good encounters. Keep up the great work!
Kimberly
Absolutely fabulous! The writing was enough to let the imagination flow free, but not too vivid to be porn! Great!
ada
great
Audrey
This poem truely captured the reality of sex and how intense it truely is. it's amazing and every line drew me into it more and more. simply incredible.
Jean
This poem honesly made me cry when I was finished reading it. My fiance and I are distanced apart right now and it made me long for not just the act but the feelings, the experience of our love at such a deep needed level. Thank you for helping me feel those longed for feelings that I have been missing and couldn't express. It was beautiful!
Helen
Passionate and realistic. If you have had romance this poem rekindles the fond memories.
Staci
WOW! VERY AWSOME.
christina
HOT! AWESOME! THAT'S GREAT!
Lay
The way i felt after reading this poem is can be best described as EROTIC. My mind and body were involved and responding to every word. Great writing!
Lolo
it was good
Terri
I loved this poem because it describes exactly how love making goes with someone who you care so passionately about.
Vanessa
This makes me simply speachless!
Kenneth
One of the best erotic poems I have read. Truly captures you into the moment.
lovestruck
This poem got me wanting my honey even more. Thanks for making me all hot and steamy b4 my shower
Beverly
I really enjoyed this poem,,It came from the heart of someone who has loved and knows what it is like to be loved in return.
crystal
WOW! I absolutely loved this poem, it reminds me of a very passionate night i had not too long ago with a very specail someone. It has great detail. i love it!
Jacqueline
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS NOT JUST AMAZING IT WAS UNREAL!
Sally
This poem was amazing.
Bonnie
The wording is 100% perfect for the first time making love together.
Courtney
That it the spot
zerifa
This poem was enlightening it made me feel like whoa! It made me feel like i wanted to make love to my boyfriend this instance!
Amanda
I love this poem it is very romantic. it makes me think of my man every time I read it.
dalover
i loved the poem it said everything I wanted to say in detail to my man
Angela
WOW! What an incredibly powerful poem. My heart was racing by the end. Incredible.
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I can see and feel our time
Layne
Wow, its a very graphic poem, its exactly what i experienced, i hope to read more of your poems, your very talented
MANDY
this is a really good poem its very graphic and i like it a lot.
Alva
sheer brilliance. well done. great poem
Clare-Jesse
Wish i could write like this, its stunning
Wendy
I loved the poem. With my husband half way across the world at the moment it was a nice treat for him. It will give him sweet dreams of me. Thanks
Monica
this is my favorite poem so far!
Marquita
this is A very intimate and wonderfully descriptful poem about love and lust that i really enjoyed and would like to vote this into the favorites category. Much respect and props to the author, keep doing your thing.
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