This poem is meant to show how great a hot and sizzling lovemaking session can be. It attempts to show a bit of the harsh and lustful side and the loving and sensuous side of the act at the same time.
It is purposely lacking certain subtleties to gain the effect of a heaving chest and the rhythm is written to that of energetic lovemaking.
A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.
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This poem honesly made me cry when I was finished reading it. My fiance and I are distanced apart right now and it made me long for not just the act but the feelings, the experience of our love at such a deep needed level. Thank you for helping me feel those longed for feelings that I have been missing and couldn't express. It was beautiful!
Helen
Passionate and realistic. If you have had romance this poem rekindles the fond memories.
Staci
WOW! VERY AWSOME.
christina
HOT! AWESOME! THAT'S GREAT!
Lay
The way i felt after reading this poem is can be best described as EROTIC. My mind and body were involved and responding to every word. Great writing!
Lolo
it was good
Terri
I loved this poem because it describes exactly how love making goes with someone who you care so passionately about.
Vanessa
This makes me simply speachless!
Kenneth
One of the best erotic poems I have read. Truly captures you into the moment.
lovestruck
This poem got me wanting my honey even more. Thanks for making me all hot and steamy b4 my shower
Beverly
I really enjoyed this poem,,It came from the heart of someone who has loved and knows what it is like to be loved in return.
crystal
WOW! I absolutely loved this poem, it reminds me of a very passionate night i had not too long ago with a very specail someone. It has great detail. i love it!
Jacqueline
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS NOT JUST AMAZING IT WAS UNREAL!
Sally
This poem was amazing.
Bonnie
The wording is 100% perfect for the first time making love together.
Courtney
That it the spot
zerifa
This poem was enlightening it made me feel like whoa! It made me feel like i wanted to make love to my boyfriend this instance!
Amanda
I love this poem it is very romantic. it makes me think of my man every time I read it.
dalover
i loved the poem it said everything I wanted to say in detail to my man
Angela
WOW! What an incredibly powerful poem. My heart was racing by the end. Incredible.
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