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I love this poem. Its really awesome. Beautifully written and I didn't know what it was coming to but when I did I loved it. Great work. Wet dreams rock.
Ladycat
Ali, your work is always amazing to me. I know that if I want to read a good piece that I can always read something by you and be completely enraptured over and over again.
LouAn
Alastair, Your poem is very vivid! I love the humor in the description of the alarm clock(lol). It was subtle, albeit effective, to change the style of your writing from the dream to the waking. It really seemed like different worlds that way. Please, do more and more.
stacy
I love this poem and ohhhh can I identify with the rushing out of the house after a night of bliss
Valia
This is by far one of the best poems I have ever read. For being a modern day poem it reminds me of how poetry was once written.
Allen
So true! So true! Dreams and poetry are the only release for guys like us. Excellent work and a passionate heart. I commend you.
Shirl
I love the poem. I love the way you write. Thank you.
Ken
Very approprite to my life at present,,love separated by a great distance in miles,,but crossed in dreams,,know well the feeling of steeling myself for another lonely day,,
Lav
This may have been a dream to the author but it was all too real to me. Thank you.
brandi
it is great. it flows very well. both the words and the idea
Tricia
I thought this was to be one of the best that I have read on here the fours hours of the night.
Bill
The poem was excellant! What meaning and what an ending!
Andrianna
My heart skipped a beat, this poem was beautiful.
Kevin
This poem is so true to what I feel. Being stationed by military half the world away from my wife. My dreams of her regularly shattered by the alarm clock as my days begin anew and alone.
Lane
A very fine piece of work. I love the rhythm and rhyme. Nicely done!
david
I loved the poem it cought my attention from the heading to the beging of the poem to the end. I belive you to be very talented. Keep up the good work I belive you could write poem books at the rate your at. Have a nice day.
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