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When all is quiet but your thoughts are loud, you looking upon the one you love and realize that they are much more then the sum of their parts.
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Scott
this is the way a man looks at a women when he is TRUELY in love.
Paul
This poem is so amazing and true. the way you feel when your so in love.
Fran
So tender. How I wish a man would write such a poem about me.
Haley
Wow, this poem blew me away. It's effects are fantastic. Raven you write such beautiful words, they seem like true angles flying from your heart. and landing in mine. well done!
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I Look Upon Her |
| by Raven |
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I look upon her face lying on my pillow Lit by the light of my bedroom window Wrapped within my gently arms Knowing she will come to no harm I look upon her hair, soft and fair Unable to find the words to compare Answers she has given me in times of pain That love and hope will visit again I look upon her lips, moist and red Giving me life when all was dead She restored my heart when it was lost Melting what was covered in frost I look upon her breasts, firm and strong Knowing that love could not be wrong Slowly moving with every breath Always knowing she was not like the rest I look upon her hips, round and smooth Gently touching not daring to move I fix the sheets with delicate care But a gentle kiss is all I dare I look upon her face staring into mine Filling my body as if it were wine I close her eyes with gentle kisses For she has answered all my wishes. |
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Jeff
This is a very touching poem, it was done masterfully.
Nick
This peom said everything I never could bring myself to say. A work of art is all that needs to be said
dawn
this poem was so beautiful and tender, a true work of art!
Linoluim
That poem is beautful. My boyfriend gave me a copy of it. to make me feel beautiful and it worked the girl who its about is very lucky
Amie
Oh my God that poem gave me goosebumps! I haven't read anything so beautiful, or something that would give me goosebumps in a LONG time. That is gorgeous
Natt
My boyfriend has a tough time expressing himself to me, and he found this poem, and asked me to read it. he told me this is the best way to express his feelings that he has for me. once i read this,i felt my heart drop. such beauty in words is hardly imaginable. thanks for helping my boyfriend express himself, keep up the good work. you have a wonderful talent and it should not be wasted
Kymm
I loved this poem. I sent it to my girlfriend. When people come into your life & change your heart forever things just seem to stop. When you find someone that can freeze all that & bring warmth back then you know that you have certainly found a special one. Thanks for helping me find just the right words to show that special person how I feel.
Laura
This is the most beautiful poem I have read so far.
Lucy
tenderness speaks volumes - love so much more than words or actions. beautifully written
joker
sorry exchuse my french when i say this.. "A good one mate" 10/10
Jim
Eloquently expressed the exact thoughts for the one I love. I've been there Raven. Thank you!
Donnatella
Poet, this poem is very sweet and I am quite fond of it. You look upon this woman beyond her flesh. You see the 'features' which are not clearly evident. You have respect for her, and I very much admire you for that. Good thoughts, good job.
glori
love is very deep and emotional u express it perfectly
Jessica
the poem was very good i thought it was cool
Kenn
this one reminds me of my wife and how much she means to me
sarah
This is a very beautiful poem. I love it.
Kasia
Very beautiful poem, reminds me of how much my fiance loves me.
Sonja
Such beautiful poetry can only be written by a woman. Correct me if I'm wrong... but to me this poem is about two women in love.
DAVID
I FELT UNSURE OF HOW A PERSON FELT ABOUT, NOW I CAN SEE THAT SHE LOVES ME, THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS DAVID RUSSELL
Ernie
She enjoyed the poem. Thanks for writing on my behalf.
cheri
YOUR POME REMINDED ME OF HOW I SEE MY PARTNER WHEN WERE LAYING IN BED.
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