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I wrote this about a person who came into my life after another person hurt me very much. It's about the wonder of someone who is willing to clean up another's mess, merely because they think you're worth it.

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Annlizmarie
This poem is great. It reminds me of my father, its kind of hard to talk about him but he was never there for me but he calls and says "I love You" and then he stops calling and it hurts me. So when I had my first boyfriend I thought he was going to hurt me so I tried to hurt him first before he hurt me and that when I known that he wasn't trying to hurt me but love meand slowly me heart opened and everything. So when I read this poem it hit me, in a good way.
Socorro
Your poem is just wonderful. I identified with it so much. The feeling that is put into it was great. The hardest thing is giving someone another chance. Your poem explains that.
DAISY
Wow! It's incredible, I cant beleive that the author of this poem expressed my feelings and emotions as if they were reading my mind. This poem was really beautiful written.
Oluwole
My heart was so familiar with this kind of poem as it remind of my former girl friend. It really touch ones souls and very simple to understand. simple diction. Thanks.

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Could You Be The One For Me?

Could you be the one for me?
Could you be my find?
Could it be, after all this time,
Fate is going to be kind?

Could you be the one for me,
The one to help me forget
The man that broke my heart, my soul
The man that haunts me yet?

You tell me that I'm beautiful
Something I've never heard
But the one still lives here in my mind
That couldn't spare a kind word

It's going to be hard to forget
And pick up the pieces he left
Could you be the one to teach
How to love again and forget?

Could you be the one to come
And mend my broken heart?
Are you willing to piece together
What another broke apart?

It won't be an easy job, you see
My road has been long and rough
And the heart that was once so soft
Is now shut, locked, and tough

But I can feel my heart open again
It's opening for you
Just come in, and love me back
That's all you have to do

I must ask you one small thing
Before we kiss and part
Please be nice and kind to me
I'm tired of broken hearts

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Hopey
This poem was hot and you had to really go through somethng like this to understand it. . Its DEEP
alexis
i love this poem cause ive had my heart broken so many times before and is inspiring to me.
AMELIA
THIS WAS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM IT GOT TO ME CAUSE I KNOW HW IT IS TO HAVE A BROKEN HEART AND NO TRUST
Andrea
I thought this was a very uplifting poem. It touched my heart as I am feeling the exact same ways and because of the same reasons. Thank you for the encouragement :)
Shae
i love this poem because i could very much relate to it. i was in an abusive relationship back in high shool during freshman-sophmore year and the guy i dated hit me a lot and yelled at me almost everyday. so when i finally got out of it i didn't date for like 2 years i'm 19 now and i have a new man and i couldn't be happier so i really love this poem, one of my favorites.
chainney
I love your poem because I've been hurt many times too,and I'm tired of being broken hearted. I also sent it to my son's dad.
caitlyn
this poem relates to me cause i just got out of a bad relationship we went out for 6 months and he left me cause his friend told him i wanted to do something with him whenever hes the one that grabbed me, and it hurts knwing that he believed him over me but now i have this gut i just met about 2 weeks ago and he told me i was the most beautiful girl he has ever seen and that he would love to treat me good and this poem just reminded me of how he has been trying to keep my ex off my mind. thanks oo much for this poem.
Lisa
wow! this exactly describes my current situation. well written
LOUVAN
THiS iS A B3AUTiFUL PO3M. iT iS WAT i M GOiN THROUGH RiGHT NOW.
gieselle
oh my god i loved this poem it really touched my heart. i was going through the same thing and i could really relate. thanks for writing this poem. keep up the good wprk
lady in the rain
Thanks a lot for this lovely poem . i really loved it. expressions and the the kind words were so close to the heart.
Kelsey
i love this poem because it is so true! Treaz broke my heart and Deondre helped me get through it. Thank you Deondre, I will always love you for that! :)
melissa
i think this poem is verry beautyfull. and full of feelings. i can totally relate to it
Jahquisha'
i can really relate to this poem just a few months ago i was asking myself the same question.
drea
great
CINDY
AMAZING,SO TRUE AND HONEST IF YOU HAD A BROKEN HEART. THANK YOU
yani
this poem speaks to me.
LATESHA
I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE THIS POEM IS EXACTLY THE WAY I FEEL CUZ IV BEEN HURT TO MANY TIMES BEFORE . AND I THIS POEM IS JUST WHAT I NEEDED TO GET THROUGH THE DAY. AND LET THIS GREAT GUY INTO MY LIFE ,CUZ HE TOLD ME AND HE HAS SHOWED ME HOW MUCH HE LOVES ME NOW I CAN LET HIM IN MY LIFE .
asheley
I really like this peom because it really reminds me of my life situations in sooo. many ways!
cassie
hey. i can relate to this poem. on a scale of one to ten. i give you a 9. 99999999999! LOL.
Brianne
I love this poem! It is truly how I feel! I have to give it 5 stars. it's soo true! Two thumbs up!
LaDonna
This poem touched my heart very, very closely. see I have been talking to this guy on the internet for about 3 months now and he is the sweetest person. I am married and he knows. I have talked to him about my problems with my husband and he listens. He is so kind and caring and considerate. He cares about my feelings. And this poem has made me stop and think is he the one for me?? If so how Will I know?? Someone please help me. Thanx for this poem.
Melinda
I love this poem so much, it touched me deeply
DALE
BEAUTIFUL POEM. THEY SAY WHEN YOU HEAR A SONG THAT TOUCHES YOU ,ITS BECAUSE THE PERSON WHO WROTE IT HAS FELT WHAT YOU HAVE FELT. WELL THIS POEM HAS TREAD WHERE I ONCE WALKED. GOD HAS NOW GIVEN ME A GREAT MARRIAGE AND A WONDERFUL NEW LIFE. THANK YOU
Jessica
i found this poem at the perfect time. my last b/f cheated on me and now i have found a man who makes me feel like i'v never felt or thought i could feel after last summer. i wanted to tell my current boyfriend how i felt and that yes there is a scare left from the past but that with his help, he can make it go away. so i sent him this poem and he loved it. i wish i could say that i wrote it but that would simply not do. so thank you for writing this poem. it means a lot to me and now to my boyfriend. because i didnt have the right words. but i found them through you. thank you
Nina Nazliana
this poem touched me as it reminded me about love. In which love is not an easy game but a painful game. I myself can relate into tiz poem. How i really love and devoted to someone, but i was taken granted for. And wen sumone else enters ma life, i just don't trust da guy anymore. It's life maybe??
Mary
I'd love to vote for this poem becoz it's beautiful,it has touched my heart becoz I think he/she's talking about me.
britt
i loved this poem
tracy
this poems say it all wen you have a broken heart and find someone new
makhena
this ppoem relates to me so much beacause i like this boy named Zachary and i'm not sure if he could be the one
Kathleen
I really like this poem bec its how I feel aswell
baby
wow!i loved the poem. because it just wat i feel right now abt my boyfriend
tiarra
I love this poel since the first time I saw it which was a while ago. It relates to me in which a way you couldn't even imagine. I have this poem on my myspace and my other pages to show people the way I feel. I just want to say thanks a lot for this poem because if I didn't have something that related to me in such a wayi probably would have been lost
Anna
I also can relate to this peom i was in a relationship for 2 years ive been single for about 4 months now and have a guy in my life that wants to bee with me but scared because i dont wanna get hurt again. but this poem is awesome.
Nikki
I voted for this poem because of the poet's ability to touch upon a real-life situation so accurately in a poem. This poem expresses exactly how I feel at this very moment in a way I could have never put together. Wonderful job Lovebug! And many thanks.
Kat
I loved this, so sweet and simple, straight to the point. It just flows along!
Swarna
Best poem I have ever read. Its so true and touching.
Donna
this poem says everything about me and all the heartbreak that i have been through. i have read many poems, but none have touched me in the way that this one had. i never thought that any words could ever be written to explain my torn, broken heart. this poem has brought tears, for it is so close to the real me.
Stephanie
I read this poem and omg, it's Wonderful! I had to send it to my friend to let them see how good it was. You are Awesome! Thank You, Stephanie
shanae
I love this poem i also can relate to this.
crystal
i luv this poem. this poems is my favorite luv poem ever! it reminds me of kenny! i luv u kenny
mommy
yo dis poem tell alot wat im gon throught right now dis dum boi he broke my heart and my first love came back to me and pick it up for me just keep writying those poems you are doin a really goooooood job.
ijeoma
i love this poem. it has touch a place in my heart,where i though no one will never touch. the words are gentle and soft that it made me cry,it also remind me of my past. but it also told me that i can love again. thank ijeoma
Candygirl
Tollay love this tollay of wat i feel
Keilee
OMG this poem is ahhhh-mazing. I wish I were a poet, well I do some mysef but this is kewl
natasha
this poem i love it is like you read my mind and my feelings i love this poem and it explains exactly how i feel butno one understands that but i guess your poem does
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