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Proposals are a difficult thing to do. You have the joy of acceptance and the fear of rejection that seem to occupy your mind and fill it with doubts and hope. This is how I would propose to my love.
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Elisa
Excellent
Breanna
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cherry
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Vicki
Wonderful, touching words and thoughts!
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Evermore |
| by desperado |
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wait just a moment in time freeze the movie in your mind put aside the whispers filter out the doubt look into my eyes ignore the muted shout don't you wish to melt away? into the golden sun? don't you want to whisk away, and have a little fun? aren't you sick of pain and fear inside your life all I know inside of me I want you as my wife I'm tired of the race I'm ill with blank disgrace I want the world to leave us be I want the world to set us free take my hand and smile you can let those tears fall I'll make it worth your while and always give it all through good and bad I'll love you through thick and thin I'll stay from the blinking of the sun to the fading of the day and in the night I'll hold you until the sun appears I'll take away your sorrows, and cast away your fears so let our love combine us and let our spirits soar just take my hand within you and I'll love you evermore |
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lilly
i think this poem is really nice i never read anything like it befor
Miki
so sweet
Kimberly
this poem is a really good one.
amanda
omg this is the best poem ever it is soo cute. i wish i can write like you
brandon
This is a very good poem, it is plain and simple, gets right to the point and is definetly a good poem to read to that special someone.
Roek
Unbelievable! Best poem I've ever read. You have a gift for words my man. From start to finish you have a spell over the reader. Just amazing! And the word "evermore" at the end, wow. Haha, good luck with your proposal, but I doubt you'll need it.
Sarah
this is a very beuatiful poem a very well written poem. i like it.
Wonder
this poem is so beautiful. and whoever you wrote it for is one lucky girl. great job! Wonder*
Shauntell
I cried when I read it. So beautiful!
Heather
This poem best describes me and my boyfriend. some people don't want us together. we hav similar backgrounds but our familys are different.
Thsering
It straight touched my heart! One of the best poem I've ever read. Gud work!
Shawn
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mark
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Nakia
This poem talks about my reltationship with my Baby and I am sittinh here reading this poem about to cry cuz Its sooooo ture I mean the words are soooooo ture and ever worte this poem Ive give them an award for this beautyful pretty poem and this poem touch my heart just by the words that was said. (Thank You) for this beautyful poem Nakia Moore
Jennifer
I loved it. it was wonderful!
stephanie
i loved it i like some what sad thingz cuz my life s alwayz sad i dont think im ever really happy so ya it was really sweet
hisham
this is a very good poem,composed by a very talented poet. very inspiring which has a powerfull way of expressing true love and emmotions to the woman who he loves and wants to be his wife. it is a beautiful way of expressing love .
Kristen
If any man proposed to me with this poem, I'd melt into his arms right then and there. I love it!
heidi
i thought this wasgreat
Shenoah
i vote that this pome is a 4 out of 5 becuzse it tells that the person wants to the moment for ever. we are doing a poem notebook and this is one of the selected few i am going to put in there. Thank you for your time.
Tierra
If all people were in touch with their feelings the way you are, there would there would be no need for lies.
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