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This is a poem simply about a perfect night. We've all dreamt of or felt that special feeling where everything in the world seems right, and there's no where else you want to be. This poem describes a night of perfect love.

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chrystill
it is lovely
Rikki
that was such a sweet poem! ill give that one 10/10 thats seriously sweet! that described me and my boyfriend except i didnt wont to be me until i met him!
Denisha
This poem was very nice and made me realize how i feel about my one true love. Today is our 2 year anniversary and I'm so happy with him. I Love you Felipe. Always and Forever
STARLENE
!WWOOWW! THIS POEM IS DEEP???????? ITS 2 GOOD?Y@H

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Hand In Hand

Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.

You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.

My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.

Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.

Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.

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More Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

amy
ummm. this poem is so great i can really relate to it and it says everything that i feel.
josh
I liked the way the author put lots of emotion into it.
Ronnie
a poem that touches my hearth and gives a vison of my feelings and dreams a vison of that wish that will never be awnserd thanks for that littel peace it give
giovana
i really liked this poem it reminded me of me and my ex boyfriend but he moved anyways this poem reminded me of my last day with him before he moved across the state i love this poem
ciny
The poem is simply superb.
justin
this poem is one of the best i have ever heared i loved it your a good writter
Alyce
this is a great love peom
kristen
this is a good poem
kristen
i thought it was reeallly sweet and my bf got a copy of it thanks to me. i love you jamie!
Ashley
this poem was amazing! it just describes everything i want to feel and more. it was just completely amazing. i loved it!
Anita
HI! IT'S VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM YOU HAVE WROTED I WILL APPRECIATE YOU A LOT PLEASE CONTINUE ON WRITING LOVELY POEMS WHICH TOUCHES PEOPLE BLESSES YOU FROM THE HEART OF THE BOTTOM GOOD BYE.
Angie
This is a very good poem i love it.
Mesheal
I love this poem I was really touched by it. It also reminds me of me and my boyfriend, those are the dream I always have about him. I will probably give it to him and he will love it too. Because I know we have the same taste.
Katie
i love this poem.
natasha
this is a very touching poem and i fell im love with it it sounds as this person really just wrote their feelings on paper awsomw poem I LOVE IT
Rashi
b'utiful piece ! U can really fantasize what is written. neat !
SYLVIA
THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED ME U R A GOOD WRITER
Kasey
Hand In Hand, I like this poem, It makes me think about my x-boyfriend. Every saturday night we would go down to a lake and just sat by the lake and just talk and look up in the sky, then we fall in- love the first night we done that. We are broken up right now but we are like best friends. I know that seems wierd but it is not. If you really think about it, it is KOOL. YOUR POEMS ARE GOOD. NEVER STOP WRITTING POEMS!
collen
THIS IS REALLY CAUGHT MY EYE I LOVE THIS ONE
Clarice
This poem really touched me and I can say that it was wonderful
lovely gurl
WOW this poem is awsome i even printed out and hanged it in my room.
tilisha
I can really see the imagery of this poem and I really liked it. For some unexplainable reason it just clung to me. Good job.
Ngan
Lovee Lovve Lovve
emily
i thought this was increadable i could really relate to it
shakira
i love this poem this is a good poem to meand i can relate to it
Sanniya
GREAAAAAAAAAAAAAT ITS REALLY A GOOD POEM IT TOUCHED MY HEART
LIZ
I love this poem
brandon
THAT WAS GREAT
brenda
i love this poem so much
dandoona
i really liked that poem and it realy touched me '
brittni
this is me and my bf jonathan i mean i love him so much i theres nothin i love more then for him to hold me under the stars
ana
THIS IS A GREAT POEM!
kayla
i think that this is a really good poem b/c if u really do love someone then they should know how much u feel about them and how much u love and dont want 2 lose them for the rest of ur life.
KARINA
I LOVE THAT POEM IT HAS EMOTONS AND IT REALLY TOUCHED ME! AND IT MADE MY DAY
kyle
I THINK THAT YOUR POEM IS REALLY6 GOOD. ITS WHAT IS GOING ON IN MY LIFE RIGHT NOW! THANK U
Elisha
shoebowl, your poem is very touching. It touched my heart. You are a very passionate writer. I'am poem writer and any inspiration i can get is help! Thank you Elisha
Elisha
shoebowl i fell i love when i read your poem it really touched my life thank you
tom
thos was prerfect i could help but keep reading
Cody
I love the poem so much i was going o give it to someone who i like but i don't know if they like me.
ashley
This poem is EXCELLENT! Iloved this poem so0o0o0 much. your really a great poet and you touched my heart in the first line that I read. i hope to see more of your poems and I wish you uch sucess in your current and future life. love your new friend ashley:)
Dori
awww, that reminds me of me and my boi friend. we were once hand in hand just like you discribed in you toching poem. i cant wait to see morre of them on here! over all id personaly like to say very good.
Reyna
I love this poem! It makes me think of my boyfriend Daniel. We live in different states, but this poem comforts me with the thought of the day we will finally be together!
anthony
this is a very very touching poem. I am using it with a picture of me and her. I think she will really like it
brittany
I luv dat poem alot it really touched me it made me and my boyfriend cry you are very talented an god has blessed you use your talent dn't let dem go to waste because your are gifted cuz dat poem was good
Molly
This poem was so good it touched me in somanyways! I have always wanted to laybeneath the stars with that speacial someone!Keep writing poems and never quit.
Desi
I really love your poem. I can really relate to it. You put in words what i feel.
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