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There are so many people who cannot show emotions and feelings very easily. Many times they are misinterpreted as being cold or unfeeling and pay the consequences when, all the while, they just want to be open and expressive like everyone else.
They just can't.
A Few Visitor Comments
sunita
My mother is a cold and hard woman. I have hated her all my life because of her coldness. However, after reading this poem, I started to ponder, what if. Amidst my tears, I think I may have made a mistake all my life. Please continue to write.
ritzelle
I love this poem. i even post this to my blog!
sarah
This poem really touched me - very sad but beautiful x
Lorraine
A lot of truth packed into this poem.
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The Robot |
| by Michael Mack |
|
Upon the stairway of despair, Complete with broken love affairs And promises that never came, But faded with a touch of shame, A pretty girl with golden hair And innocence so sadly rare, Strove to keep her head above A way of life devoid of love. Feeling pinned against Life's wall, She chanced upon a robot tall And said, "Please come and share with me Whatever Fate has deemed to be. I'm through with love, done with chances Spirit crushed by past romances, Just be a friend in word and deed. That's all that I shall ever need." "There's not too much from me to learn," Remarked the robot, in return. "Emotions do not form a part of my cold, solid-steel heart. Whatever maker fashioned me Did not permit my circuitry Responsiveness to love or pain - You're thoughts for me would be in vain." "No matter", spoke the maid. "No more Do I wish passion to explore. Be someone I can come home to When my exhausting day is through. Count yourself a well-worn shoe - A friend that I can slip into . . . Protection from a stone cold floor . . . For this I ask and nothing more." Agreement made, he took her hand And lived the life that she had planned, Always willing, not demanding, Aiding her with understanding He made her smile with humorous wit (As his restrictions would permit) And, bit by bit, she came to feel That he was more than iron and steel. "I love you, robot", she at last Replied when several months had passed. "You're strength and quiet dignity Have brought a wondrous change in me. No more do I feel all alone, And pray you must be flesh and bone. Deep-set emotions you MUST feel Within that outer coat of steel!" "If I were able, I would say I'm sorry I was made this way But my design and programmation Does not provide for that creation Of feelings normal men may feel That were not born of iron and steel. I told you all this once before. You have no right expecting more." "Go, then!" cried she. "I will not live Beside a fiend who cannot give! Though I be battered by misuse, Misguided trust and strong abuse, At least the men I chose were real And had the power to love and feel. Of all the lovers I recall, You are the cruelest one of all!" The robot, indestructible, Continues freely and at will. Emotionless, apparently, But, bearing closer scrutiny, One can see a small tear streak Down that cold, metallic cheek As I reflect upon my life . . . That lovely lady was my wife. The robot, of course, was me. |
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will
simply amazing. well constructed and touching i love it
AMBER
SELF AWARENESS IS THE FIRST STEP TO CREATING A LIFE LONG CHANGE IN BEHAVIOR. IT IS DIFFICULT FOR ANYONE TO BE HONEST ABOUT WHO THEY ARE EXPOSING WEAKNESSES AND FAULTS WITHOUT STRAYING AWAY FROM THE TRUTH ABOUT WHO THEY ARE. THIS IS A GREAT POEM THE BEST IVE READ OR HEARD IN A LONG, LONG TIME. AMBER
Amin
you are just fantastic
AMELIA
i really like this poem whoever wrote it is a very unique thinker
michalyn
i loved this poem its from the heart and so seriele for feelings are so often unreal and painless for one to express
Adriana
i love this poem. ive been in a relationship with a few guys who just dont show much emotion towards me. and it kinda hurts in ways but this poem was absolutley amazing. i never thought about a man so insensitive like that. The other crazy thing is i went out with a guy named Michael Mack and he didnt show much emotion eithor and this poem made me kind of giggle of all the thoughts running through my mind when i saw who it was written by cause of the experiance i had with a guy named Michael Mack. i cant really explain it, but i absolutely love this poem!
Ashley
Michael-- your poem was amazing. so creative and the words run off the page! you are a great writer and i would love to read more of your poetry. the way you write is so heartfelt and real, you can describe feelings that people have, that they themself cant. thank you for sharing your poem! i truly truly enjoyed every word!
lili
i liked the poem so much especially the last part. its so touching and i want to tell you to proceed and never stop.
jennifer
OMG. i luv this poem. i wish my poems were this good! so sad too.
Jenn
This is an amazing poem! I am sure it has created much feelings for many! Thank you!
kalindi
All i have to say is WOW! this is a realllllly good poem. i really liked it. you are talented and theres is no dought about it.
chainney
the robot reminds me of my son's father that I've been dating fir 5 1/2 years
rebecca
wow that is more than emotional. i think it could have discribed more than 100 people's lives! wow is that how every man feels when they truely love someone but do not know? or are scared?
jazlin
omg great poem it made my eyes watery bravo
Nicole
Wow! Amazingly well-written. I really enjoy this site and the stories the poems tell. This is truly one of the best writings I have ever read. So many people (guys and ladies) have that love but do not know how to express it. Maybe this will help. Thank you for sharing.
Kassandra
I love it.
PATRICIA
I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM. I COMPLETELY RELATE TO IT IN A WOMAN'S SENCE. I AM THE ONE NOT ABLE TO SHOW ANY FEELINGS TOWARDS OTHERS BECAUSE OF A BROKENHEART. A LOT OF TIMES WE ARE UNAWARE THAT THERE ARE OTHERS OUT THERE EXPERIENCING THE SAME IN LOVE AND LIFE. THIS POEM FOR ME HAS MEANT FREEDOM -TO BREAK AWAY FROM THESE SHACKLES OF SORROW. THANX
Blossom
awwwwww it's rele touching and well written
leenayka
i liky he he he he i give u a 8 out of 10
Joletta
I LOVE THIS POEM! i tried it at last years speech and i ended up crying:P it just reminds me of how me and my boyfriend were:P gotta love this poem!
Greg
My wife want more from me that I seem to be able to give. I strongly identified with the robot.
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