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This poem was written just today (4/18/99) for a friend of mine. She and I just are totally not on the same wavelength. I feel she doesn't need me. I used to tell her everything and now we sometimes don't even say hello anymore. I haven't showed her this poem and I don't know if I ever will (it was a way for me to release my feelings). I hope things get back to normal between us, because if I ever do tell her goodbye I will miss her terribly.
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angie
This poem was so sad,but im sure it's true. I'm sure people have done this before.
JESSICA
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blue butterfly
i like diz poem,bcoz i can relate bout it.
dorothy
that poem was very good it reminds me of my friend who was stabed in the chest for no reason at all.
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Goodbye |
| by Rosebud |
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Well maybe now I should just say goodbye You used to be my friend But I never felt I really was yours So maybe this is the end. I'm different from you, all of you Each other we've never understood I hope that if I do tell you goodbye That it won't be for good. Whenever I'm mad it hurts me so bad And you don't even care I don't know why, I just want to cry And someday I won't be there. The streaks on my arm they've done me no harm They're only made of pen But once they are blood that turns brown like mud They'll be there again and again. If I'm mad at you I'll hurt myself too But that doesn't really matter Although when I hurt I feel like dirt And my spirit's bruised and battered. I do not know why it has to be so I really wish it did not But the way this has been going it is basically shot. You don't need me and we don't need we And that's how I think I know why These words are the ones I have to speak- I love you, but goodbye. |
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meya
Good job!you have made a great poem it is so touching just continue to make. and maybe someday you will have a book of it it is an achievement. good luck and by that time i hope a get one of those copies. good day!
olivia
this is really goood :] touched me like i'm drifting from my best friend
Amy
I've been searching for a long time to describe how i feel about my best friend, everything that you wrote, down to the part of hurting yourself when you're mad at them. its exactly what i feel, thank you.
Andrutzy
wow. i feel exactly what you write here and i really feel like someday it will be the end and i feel it will be soon,but i love her doooo muuch and i don't think i can do it
chrissie
thank you for your poem. i didnt know how to express the pain that I was feeling. and you helped me. thanks.
jesus
i really liked it it reminds me if my friend i lost a year ago. she killed herself and when i read this i had her in my mind wishing she was still here
paulina
i love this poem. just like my condition now. i've to say goodbye with my bestest friend :'( gudbye na. love u forever
mercedez
I LOVE THE POEM SO MUCH. I BEEN THROUGH THAT WITH ONE OF MY FRIENDS. IT TOUCHED MY HERAT
Oishee
I loved your poem. I had to say goodbye to one of my friends and your words so much easier. Thanks. ^-^
Sara
I know how true this is. I can relate to this. Thank you and keep on writing.
samantha
it made me cye
Crystal
Well i really liked it beacsue it explains how a person feels in a way that doesnt want to hurt that other friend. Nice job and keep going at it.
will
this poem was really deep and well described and should be given the time to be read
PHUMZA
i think that in so many words a person can tell a tale, your poem has touched me deep in the core. sometimes its hard to express ones feelings and in writing you can never go wrong. it is a heart felt message and i hope you and your friend sort things out in the end, finding true friends is hard these days if someone finds one they must nature it and take care of the friendship. YOUR POEM IS BEAUTIFUL! I WILL PRINT IT AND KEEP IT.
gurlz
i really love this poem bcoz it touched me deeply. just what i want that person to know.
shera
This poem is great! i am in the situation now? At first i thought it was something i was doing wrong, but thank u for letting me know that i am not alone!
pranav
really a great poem. Its possessing the real feelings of a real broken heart.
Jolene
Sad, but very nice. I'm looking for the words for my own situation very similar, and it helps to read your words. Thank you for sharing.
monique
I really like this poem! It remind me of my friend i had to leave .
sabrina
thank u it made me relize somethung me and my friend are goin threw the same thing
NICOLE
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. THATS ALL
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