well written

WE VISIT A CERTAIN NURSING HOME EACH WEEK. UPON READING THIS POEM, I SUDDENLY INVISIONED A VERY PRECIOUS LADY SITTING BY HER WINDOW LOOKING OUT, A BIRD FEEDER, HANGS OUTSIDE THE WINDOW,SHE CAN WATCH THE BIRDS, SHE CAN ALSO SEE THE TRAFFIC AND PEOPLE WHO COME INTO THE PARKING LOT AND I HAVE WATCHED HER AND WONDERED, DOES SHE EVER WONDER,, WHERE DO ALL THESE PEOPLE GO? ONCE IN AWHILE, A FAMILY MEMBER COMES BY TO VISIT, WE TRY TO CARRY HER TO THE CHURCH SERVICE ALONG WITH OUR LOVED ONE. IT IS WONDERFUL TO KNOW GOD HAS GIVEN TALENTS TO THOSE WHO ARE ABLE TO WRITE THE THOUGHTS OF OTHERS LESS FORTUNATE THAN MANY OF US, WHO, ONE DAY WILL PROBABLY BE ON THE INSIDE ,LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW. THANKS AGAIN FOR BRIGHTENING UP MY DAY. PEG

I AGREE WITH THE OTHERS,I HAVE WORKED IN NURSING HOMES AND SEEN THE PATIENTS BEING ABUSED AND I HAVE TOLD ON THEM AND TO THE OWNERS,ALL I GOT WAS ALAUGH AND EVEN ONE LADY THAT SHOWERED PEOPLE AT MINERVA CONVALESENT CENTER ABUSED THE PATIENTS AND SCREAMED AT THEM,DO YOU THINK ANYONE CARED,NOT ONE WORKER BUT MY MOTHER AND I. WISH FAMILYS WOULD VISIT MORE AND PAY ATTENTION TO THEIR LOVED ONES CARES, KEEP UP THE GOOD POETRY AND WORK,BE PROUD TO CARE FOR THE ELDERLY,I DID,