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I wrote this poem after my boyfriend and I broke up. I still really care about him!

Everything

The day we met
I had the oddest feeling
I didn't know what it was
So I just brushed it off
After a while I found myself waiting
Waiting for that phone call every day
The one I always got from you
Every night I went to bed happy
Happy that I had talked to you
Every morning I would wakeup
And think of you
The day you asked me out
I was on cloud nine
I couldn't stop thinking of you
The time we spent together
I was always so happy
Then one day
It was gone
Everything
The hand holding
The cuddling
The drives
The times we spent
looking into each other's eyes
The long good- byes
Everything
Just vanished
Everything
except one thing
The one thing that can't be taken from me
That's my love for you
It's here from now
And forever
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114 Visitor Comments

kay
AWESOME BRO!
Tiffany
omg this poem is so good i love it im really srry 4 u and i no how u feel my boyfreind dump me and i really care bout him but nows hes w/ my friend i hope he relizes wat he lost
ALEXIS
THE REASON I PICKED THIS ONE IS BECAUSE IT REAMINS ME OF ME AND MY X
elizabeth
wow. i totally love this poem. its absolutley amazing. and i can totally relate to it because i just recently got my heart broken my an amazing guy who seemed to just disappear. your an amazing writer and i think you should write more!
Billie
I like this it kinda matches what I feel for someone I go to school with.
KIKYOU
THIS A BUATIFUL PEOM BUT IS FOR MY LOVE SHORTY
GLAMARY
this poem was really good. Sometimes you dont forget about that special someone.
Kim
im so sorry. almost the same thing happened to me execpt its because i cant see him anymore. i love him still and he loves me and i wish to see him again. i want to move on but im on to tight of a lesh. waiting for my owner to come home=( i miss him so much and i hear he misses me too. i cant go on much longer without hearing his voice. thank u soo much. u touch the darkest coners of my soul
Jessica
hey that was a good poem it allmost made me cry
Kawehi
I loved this poem. it was almost word for word how i felt with my ex after we broke up.
tonya
thats a wonderful poem i feel the same way bout my boyfriend
Amber
This poem is so touching i'm still with my baby boy but yeah all these things like i'm always happy when i go to bed cuz i talk to him before i go to bed and it's just sweet but i'm sorry for your breakup
Alyssa
This poem is so good it is just how I feel about this boy named Gage there is just a feeling I have for him that I will never forget I love him and I am so glad this person wrote this poem because it made me feel better about my bad breakup about 1 week ago!
stephanie
I really like you poem. Ifeel the same why about this other guy. I'm gonna deticate it to him.
Amandsa
Your poem was awesome, very touching. Keep writing poems.
Shaina
Marie, I can relate to this poem because its hard out here expressing your feelings toward your boyfriend, but instead you wrote it on paper. Thats what I do, wriet poetry and express my feelings on the paper before I say it to anybody. But anyway, you did good and keep it up; I really like that!
shawn
I liked this poem i can relate to it, u should keep doing more poems from now on.
hannah
thank you.
monique
i love it i love it i love it. dis is one of the best because that what im in now
vannessa
this was great and im really sorry 4 u
Grashus
Me and this boy where just like this i love this poem
Damaris
I love it! Its so true if you love someone that much then some times you got to let them go! Damaris
jasmine
I like that poem b-cuz its real something that we all go through and i can ralate 2 that poem but im out *ALWAYS D&J*
sandra
Swweeeeeeet! you have talent, embrace it, i also write and appreciate talent especially from the heart. i totally understand what ur saying, and while these things takes time to heal just continue believing in yourself. and we are all special! time is known as the best healer. keep in there! sandra
Tederia
i love this poem. this is how i felt when me and my ex broke up.
Ashley
omg ur poem touched me it almost made me cry i hope everything turns out
Joanna
hey gurl well ur poem was GREAT i know how u feel! it remins ms of my ex. he would always call me n tell me he luved me. but i broke up with him 4 months later kuz all he made me do was worry. yeah he was on drugs n i didnt like dat. one day he called me crying saying dat he never meant 2 hurt me n dat he luvz me but i moved on. i love da guy who im with rit now. i really dont know at would happen if we were stll 2gether it wouldnt have worked out. 4 ALL YALL TEENZ N LUV I JUST GOTA SAY FOLLOW UR HEART N DONT LISTEN 2 DEM HATERZ!
nan
i love this b cuz it reminds me of me ex boyfriend he had cheated on me but before this reminds me of him
sara
well i thought this was a really touching poem and actually i about started crying but if you decide to make anymore please email them to me ok cause i really liked this one thank you
Sandi
i really like this poem and i think it very good it makes me think of the way me and my boyfriend was
Samuel
Waoo this poems make me matured
Rae
Oh MY GOD! That poem mad me cry. I had that same feeling with my ex-boyfriend and we have been broke up for two years. I still feel the same way I felt about him seven years ago. I rarely talk to him and all I can think about is past memories and how I wish I could have it all back. This poem touched me truly. I was on internet almost all day looking at poems and this is the only one that made me cry and was true. U GO GIRL( I truly can relate and feel your pain)
Alyse
OMG that is exactly what i'm feeling about my ex. It's so hard not being with him though but I know I will always love him even if he don't feel the same way. You are a very good writer and I thakyou for sharing that. You have inspired me to write something now.
sambasivam
simply very fantastic . Iam moved by ur poem ,tears of joy shed from my eyes . No more words to say. EXCELLENT
leigh
this peom is really great it relates to me an my ex perfectly
marie
it reminds me of a previous relationship i had. its just so true and real
kendra
Wow great poem i know whatyour going through! my bf did that too
ashley
i love this poem because i was with this guy michael for 2 1/2 years and he hit me once and i left and i went back with him after that and he broke up with me after that long!i did not go back with a guy for1 to 1 1/2 now i found the love of my life!even though it is long distance relationship i know in my heart that he will not cheat on me! ashley nicole gamble loves dustin dennis lambert
kayla
i loved this poem a lot
raylynn
i vote fore this poem because it touched me and i really like this poem.
mary
i'm going through a problem with the boy i love and that poem is exactly how i felt. THANK YOU!
Catherine
this really discribes my friend and her boyfriend if they ever break up. i personally liked this. if this ever happened to me, i dont know what i would do.
Purshondranekeia
Ilove This Poem Good Job
stacey
wow that was great this poem reminds me of me and my ex boyfreind we were together 4 about a yr then we broke up n its been 7 months that weve been broken up n i still really love him and want him bak i tried everything but the distance kept us from having a secong change congrats u touched my heart
Brittany
OMG! I just went through tha same thing with my boyfriend and it hurts soo bad. He broke up wit me out of tha blue and wut realli got me was that i was at his house earlier that day and i realli couldn't believe it i cried for like a week straight. this peom is awesome and it realli touched me
Jessica
OH MY GOD GIRL! I totally feel you. I know how hard it is to let something go that you thought was really great. The guy on the other hand didn't. I went through this problem just about 2months ago. My ex and I dated for 3 1/2 years. It was a big bummer when we broke up. Im only 14 so I know there are other oppurtunities but I miss that one oppurtunity. I thought he loved me. I sure did love him. But in the end things can work out, Im dating his brother. Me and his brother are doing good but I can not bare to look at him! LOVE SUCKS!
Alyssa
Wow! That really touched me that same thing is going through me right now!
Tiffany
thats the same way i feel about my ex bf. i loved him and he broke my heart. i still think about him all the time. your poem relly touched me. thank you.
Nick
it's not a bad poem. its kinda good really. keep it up!
Lizzie
I had a boyfriend named Rudy and we've been on and off for about 2 months now. and a lot of people think that i can't possibly be in love with him because i'm only 13 but i think that it's really love 'cause i've never felt this way before! but keep up the good work your a great poet! I look up to you!
Shera
Whoaa! Such a wonderful poem. Very simple one but full of meanings. I wonder how she can thinked of this poem. Keep up gal!
amanda
i think the poem was great it gave me hpoe to know that even if a guy dumps me and takes everything he cant take my love for him
sherelle
i really like this poem because it reminds me of my boyfriend an i, but we are still together.
gitika
i think ur poem is simply AMAZIN. i have gone thru da same. we sail on da same boat. one more thin there r many ohter fish in da sea. U ROCK GIRL N NO GUY IS WORTH SO MUCH
megan
I LOVE,LOVE THIS Pome. its GREAT
amanda
this poem made me cry
alexandra
very nice poem
Crystal
your poem is very deep it got to my soul. u did a super fantastic job on writing it. i simply LOVED it. Write some more and i got a poem that will give u some copetition but i dont kno how to get it on this site. but back to you keep up the good work it was excallent
Gurp
hey, its weird to write this cuz i never have talked to u - but ur poem is really nice - i like it alot cuz i went thru the same thing and sometime i wish i did to make it better in the past but sometimes im glad its over too well i goodluck to u and keep writing
Erica
I really liked this poem because I can relate to it. It is a really great poem.
Lindsey
This poem is very good. I enjoyed reading it and i think it would be neat if you wrote some more. You are a very good writing.
Kayla
wow your poem made me cry. it reminded me of the excact thing that i'm going through. it's really a great poem
sarah
this is a really great peom it will stick to me forever.
Nicole
This poem is exactly how I am feeling right now after breaking up with a guy after 19 months. This is truly a deep and emotional poem. Thanks I thought I was alone on that road.
Cookie
That was amazing, I keep reading your poem and cant stop! I really relate to ur poem becuz 3 years ago, I was goin out with my now ex and I did all that was in your poem !bUt i had to ask him out 3 months after we broke up and he said no! But now I'm dating his brother! But my ex was the best ever!
Lena
aww! Wow thats such a great poem. even though i usually don't favor poems that dont relte to me like this one i LOVE it! its just something about it that made it so sweet and special. great job! keep up the good work!
Brandi
this poem has really touched me. i really relate to it b/c im goin through the exact same thing!
Samantha
I really liked ur poem. Its exactly how i feel about my xfiance. We were together a lil over 2 yrs n then brokeup. Its almost a yr n i still miss him like crazy. I tried everything to get him back but now i am dating his cousin. Keep up the great work
katlyn
that was gud!
molly
That was an awesome poem! i totally can relate and im using it in this scrapbook i made of me and him( we are still really close and almost together) It fits perfectly on the second page! By the way. i suggest making a scrapbook to anyone who relates to his poem! It helps . with pics and notes and movie tickets and love qoutes and poems like this! Great job on the poem!
Amber
wow, this poem doesn't just relate to me, but my best friend. Thanks for this poem.
A
you peom was amazing!
Viviana
I feel you GIRL!
vanessa
your peom explained exactly how i felt with my baby but im luckily still with him and i will always love him.
Trish
omg i love this poem. it reminds me of my ex and me . i miss him soo much 2 years of an awesome relationship that i wouldnt take back EVER just gone and its soo hard to think about it . i can relate to that poem soo well becuz i would wait for him to call everynite and i would alwayz be soo happy wen my caller id showed up with his last name! im still in love with the kid and i alwayz will be . but that was a great poem i cant stop readin it ! thanks so much. i loved it!
Rosie
that was so beautiful. it reminds me of everytime ive been in love and how i felt. it was great
Heather
Hey your poem was reall really good Once again the poem was really good keep on writing your poems maybe some day u will be reall good and go to callage for writeing poems and maybe also poetry
KAYLA
OMG I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS AMAZING. SOMETHING LIKE THIS JUST HAPPENED TO ME.
ashley
I feel the same way about my first love we were so happy together. Then my parents made us break up and were not allowed to see each other I still Love him and I always will. But we both have moved on. No matter what happens. He will always have a place in my heart. Your poem was great and it really touched me.
J
wow!. this poem is really good!. it reminds me of my x-bf. whom now my friend. I still love him but he doesnt know it!.
Daniell
This is an exelent poem i love it it explains alot to me ! My boy friend dumped me and i will always love him he was my frist love!
katie
i like this poem it reminds me of my best guy freind dustin and i liked him when i met him and i still do but i dont want to hurt our friendship by dating him
chris
i like this poem
blagh
I LOVED your poem. I can relate to that poem 100%. Just recently too! I think you are a VERY good writer. Keep Writing.
Jenna
I can relate soo much to this poem! My boyfriend broke up with me after 2 months because i went away for the summer and it was "hard. " But i still love him soo much.
ANGIE
this poem "everything" is such a magnificant poem. I can relate to it because when me and my boyfriend broke up I would be so happy receiving his phone calls every day and after we broke up they wouldn't come as often. I couldn't stop thinking of him and all the happy/good times we spent together and now it all just vanished if nothing was ever there but he or anything can't take the love away the one I had for him. Thanks for making me realize that no matter what no one can take my love for him away not even him.
M
really the most beautifull poem i have ever read. just the way i feel rightnow, said so simply,. magnificent
kim
i love ur poem very much i have the same feelings in my heart to about my ex.
Ashley
Wow. this reminds me so much ofby boyfriend and i, well besides the breaking up part. You are a very talented person. Keep loving and growing. I was looking for inspiration and hear i have found it. In your poem. Thank You.
Niki
It was super! I liked how she put her feelings into her work.
Mary
THat poem was a good poem
Ciera
hey i really like this poem alot and i can really relate to it, i miss my ex bf too but i moved on but my feelings are still there for that wonderful 1st love i had keep writing that was a great poem
Michelle
I think that this poem is so sweet. It reminds me of how my boyfriend and I first started out dating.
Jackie
I really can relate so much to this poem. but my boyfriend broke up with me the day before valentines day this year. so i can relate cause i still really love him so much and it will never end cause it carried on too long.
Stephanie
I love this poem because i loved a boy alot he asked me out and we were a couple for a long time then it was gone but till this day i am still very in love with him forever.I just wish for the day for us to be together again.
jen
thanx for the poem Marie, i can really relate to it. i know exactly how you feel, i was with my boyfriend for 2 years and he seems to have forgotten all the feelings we had for one another. i cant. i love him more than life itself, i dont think ill ever get over him. maybe someday, just not any day soon. thanx again, made me realise im not the only one in the world who's hurting :)
Mindy
I love that poem!
Trina
this poem is great!it was just like i am having now.anyway.keep on working marie..
Lucy
This reminds me of my and my boyfriend when he was here but he is now in the air force! Great Poem though it was very touching!
Natalie
This is the BEST poem I have read so far!! It is like the story of my whole love life!! I can really relate and I am glad to know that I am not the only person going through this kind of situation!
Melissa
This I thought was a really true poem about a love that left you! You wrote this really good. I think its sweet. =)
Mandy
I really liked that poem. The best line is the cloud 9 part
jimmy
that poem was really good that is how i look at the day with my girlfrend but we are going out
Kallie
Oh my gosh this is like one of the best poems i've ever read! It reminds me of my first love and i'll always have a special spot in my heart for him!
jer
it is so true that pictures say a thousand words. but poems do the same. love poems come from the heart, they are what the person is feeling for the other at that point in time. i feel the pain u have and i know how u feel. u write from the heart continue to keep it real
mike
this poem is awesome its the exact poem i've been searching for, for some time now.. thanks!
britni
this poem was the best it describes my relationship exactly if i could only find more.....
luz
this poem is really nice . i like it because i can relate .
RACHEL
HEY, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR POEM ITS THE BEST! I HOPE YOU CAN MAKE SOME MORE OF THESE KEWL POEMS FOR PEOPLE LIKE ME TO READ... I WANNA BE A POET ONE DAY I HOPE I ACHIVE MY GOAL! WELL, G2G LUV RACHEL BYE
Joanna
That was a pretty Poem and it means alot to me, in alot of differnt ways. i know how it feels to have loved and then lost it all except the pain he left you, when he left. Keep writing your poems, you have a talent!
CAROL
I THINK THIS POEM IS THE BEST!
morgan
girl this poem is so bomb i know exactly how you felt when you wrote this poem
ALIEN
so so so so so so so so goood
Brittney
I know fully what you mean by this poem. It is really powerfull, but with few words. Nice job!

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