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This poem is about how sometimes when you love someone, you realize that you can never possibly have them, but you never learn to live with the pain of not being loved in return.

I'm 16 years old and live in Australia.

Clutter

I'm sitting in my room
there's a mess on the floor
I'm waiting in my gloom
to come rushing in the door.

I'm laying in my room
there's clothes on the bed
I'm lonely in my gloom
that never leaves my head.

You're sitting in my room
you're cluttering my bed
bringing all your hate and doom
as you sit in my head.

You're laying in my room
I'm forced onto the floor
my face shows the gloom
as you walk out of my door.
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21 Visitor Comments

Honey
It was great! and i think a lot of us have been through that same kind of feeling.
kenyate
Don't know you but your was so good
Linds
Wow!this poem really touched me. GREAT JOB!
Jessica
I really like this poem, as I read it, it made me think of my first love and it really touched me!
Autumn
i really like that poem becuase it goes back to me and i really loved it a lot
Stormy
This poem was awesome and its simple words were packed full of emotion!Great job!
niki
good
kelly
that was a very unique way to express your feelings into words
colleen
this poem has real tension and feeling i know where your coming from with this
NORMA
I LOVE YOUR POEM IT TRULY TOUHED ME
Heather
This poem reminds me of how i felt when me and my bf of 2 years broke up. For no good reason. But i have learned to be stronger and i realized there is better out there.
mikayla
this poem makes you think a lot and i feally love this poem keep on writing
Me
This poem explains exactly how I feel about my ex! I know it wasn't written about an ex but that's what it makes me think of.
Jennifer
I like the feeling of this poem, It was really amazing and has touched me in a certain way, I think we all know how that feels, we just can't put it into words
Adina
I think the poem is trully sincere. I agree with you.
Felicia
I think this poem is really really good keep up the good wook
LAURA
HELLO! I'M IN THIS SITUATION RIGHT NOW THIS POEM SEEMS TO EXPLAIN IT PRETTY WELL. IT IS FULL OF PAIN!
Whitney
i like this pome it makes me think
Nikia
I don't know if this poem is about you or not, but I feel like you already know me. This describes the relationship between this 17 year old and I. I am too young for him and it kills me to know that if I were older I could have him. Keep writing. You are really good.
christina
this poem totally relates to what every teenage girl goes through at one point
Nick
This poem hits right at home, I have had this problem for about 6 years, and it is very hard to deal with. This pretty much sums it up in a few stansas. Thank you for the great literature.

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