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This is about my first real boyfriend, he and I had been together for about 4 months, and I was in love. I couldn't express my feelings by just saying I love you, So this poem is what I came up with.

Loving You

Putting my feelings into words -
Impossible.
For my feelings for you are
Incomprehensible.
If I could let you see the effect you have on me,
You would be blinded.
For if you did the darkness would fade,
Shadows were no longer.
For I am in love,
More in love then I have been for a long time.
I love you is all I can say,
But my heart says more,
There is much more to my love,
Dreams, Hopes, Fantasies,
That all can become realities.
For with you I am a new me,
A me that shouldn't leave.
In these few words I hope you see,
How much you mean to me.
In Life, Love and Spirit,
I want you to hear it,
I Love You!
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104 Visitor Comments

Jasmine
this poem is so cute i really like this i believe that your boyfriend will cry like i did
Chantelle
THiiS POEM iiS SO BEAUTiiFUL, iiT TOUCHED ME DEEPLY AND iiT iiS EXACTLY HOW ii FEEL ABOUT MAH BOO. GOOD JOB AND KEEP iiT UP, YOU HAVE A GiiFT, DON'T LET iiT FADE WHATEVER YOU DO. MUCH LOVE. CHANTiiE
BROOK
THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD. WHEREEVER AND HOWEVER YOU CAM UP WITH THIS IT EXPLAINS EVERYTHING ABOUT ME AND THIS BOII. THANX I GIVE YUO PROPS.
Chris
This is a very good poem, and well written. I absolutly loved it.
Taliah
such a sweet poem! ^_^ it's exaclty how i feel about my long-time boyfriend! i love him mare than words can say!
maggie
wow. When i read this poem my breath was caught. This is my life's story. Ever since i saw my boyfriend i now understand why those mushy gushy people are the way that they are. This poem, Loving you, reflects all of my feelings and emotions and for him, not to mention the wonderful changes in my personality and character for having met him. This poem is exquisitely written and it certainly brightened my day!
amanda
hey,i love this poem bcuz my x-boyfriend dumped me over a year ago and i cant get him out of my head. he and i were dating for almost 2 years,and i dont kno what i did wrong,but he dumped me. i havent even tryed to get him out of my head bcuz i still love him so much! he's in 3 of my school's classes and i juss dont kno what to do. i love him still and i dont kno how to tell him or let him kno some how.
Kimberlee
This Peom was great. I like to write peoms myself but i never let anyone read them but my boyfriend. Keep up the writing. I LOVE YOU JUSTIN
miranda
this was a great poem and i think that it described how i feel for my boyfriend so thats why i am voting for this poem
krystal
i really like this and am voting for it becasue its exactly the way I fill when your really in love with some one words can not be enough to discribe how truly you fill in your heart
carina
this poem really touched me it is so beautiful good job
Erika
Oooohhhh my gush this poem was the most touching thing that I ever read. This poem was amazing. I hope you continue to create more of these special poems. I understood this poem. Everyword I read I could tell how you feel about your lover. Well I just had to give you your props on your poem. GOOD WORK :)
Samir
hey its a beautiful and passionate poem and i thank you for it because i am having the exact feeling because i am madly in love with my girl friend and know you gave me more passion for love i thank u for this beautiful poem. Keep on plz.
Autumn
I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH, BECAUSE IT EXPLAINS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT MY BOYFRIEND, ITS LIKE YOUR HEART WANTS TO SAY MUCH MORE BUT THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR WHAT YOU ARE FEELING, AND NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU SAY "I LOVE YOU" YOU CANT SAY IT ENOUGH FOR HIM TO UNDERSTAND JUST HOW MUCH YOU CARE. ITS GREAT
Chris
I went through a bunch of poems looking for one that would descibe how i feel about the person i love. and you said it like i never could. Great job. I hope to see more of your work later on.
Brittany
I really liked this poem thats how i feel about a special someone
Rachel
wow this poem was great. I can really really relate to it. You are a really good writting
Kayla
Good Job
olivia
i thought that this poem was really good i mean when i read a poem thats this good it makes me want to keep writing. i really liked it
Diamond
THIS POEM WAS WONDERFUL I FELT THAT THIS POEM WAS GREAT
Angelina
This poem is just. Something more. It's different. All others use the same words, same phrases. I just like this one more. It shows talent.
Amanda
I really liked your poem. It was beautiful and you could tell you put your heart in it. bravo good job Tera
bridgid
this poem is fantastic. now the guy i luv finally understands why, even if he dosen't luv me back.
amber
Its really great!
Chantelle
This poem is so great because it almost impacts a person on exactly how much they love someone! I say almost because I don't think you can ever really tell unless you can let that person be you for a day and experience it themselves. But I have always, always tried to write new things to tell my boyfriend I love him and to really get him to understand it, and this is just something new that I've never seen before! Awesome Work!
vanessa
wow this made me relize how much i really love my boyfriend and it made me relize that he has been there for me thank you for making me relize this you have a true gift in writing so keep it up.
Lena
omg! this is like one of the best poems ive ever read! gurl you keep up the good work cuz it is great! i kno exactly how u feel!
Samuel Joevan
It is an amazing poem. I love it. Good Job.
Teneka
This was a very great poem!
amanda
i love this poem. Something i should've sent 2 my boyfriend a long time ago, but now we're no longer together, that's why i should've sent it a long time ago. This poem is beautiful
tanise
THIS POEM REALLY MADE ME REALIZE HOW MUCH I LOVE MY BOYFRIEND. THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST
Francesca
Your poem is very beautiful it reminds me of my boyfriend that i have known for 2 years and have been dating for 4 months. I think i like it the most because it relates to me a whole lot.
nathalie
dis poem is da illest. it helped me get straight wit ma boo . in english that means. this poem is the best . it helped me straighten out my feelingts with my boyfriend
Baby Girl
Its a really nice poem. That is exactly how I feel about my ex.
gabbie
I loved your poem. It really meant sumthing to me!
Mindy
Great Poem. love it!
monica
I think that your poem is great because its just how I feel.
Kelly
wow when i read this poem i was really touched. it connects with e so well. you are a really great poet and u know how to express your deep feelings in poetry
gabby
i loved that poem. it made me really feel like how i do (at this very moment) i feel about my boyfriend
Becca
This was an awesome poem. I sent it to my boyfriend of 9 months and he loved it. It described almost exactly how I feel about him. Keep writing! You have a lot of talent
KaYlA
this is a great poem! It reminds me of my boyfriend!
panda
this poem truely touched me. you have a very kind and faithful heart to write a poem like this.
jen
this poem is awesome. it explains how much you really love a person in written words because sometimes it is hard to explains it spoken words.
Gel
I love the way the poem describes how someone could love someone so much but the only thing they could do is say it. but they are feeling so much more. The poem is so real.
Alexis
the author of the person has been blessed with a very kind heart to write such a beautiful poem. With so much about love is not real this poem leaves hope for us who still believe and instills a sense of security.
Julie
I thought this poem was very good and interesting. I'm 17 and I just got out of a 5 years relationship and into a new one, and we've been together for 3 months now, and this poem made me realize that I love him more than I thought I did. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, it's great!
Kimmie
I love this poem! It's sort of how I feel! Thanx for the pome.keep up the good work!
alex
i really like this poem
Hopeless
I really enjoyed this poem and understand completely how you feel. When I tell my guy that I love him, it's so much more than that even though he doesn't know it. This poem has given me the "guts" as some would put it, to tell him how I really feel. Thanks!
Jennifer
You wrote a good poem that was sort-meant for me cause thats exactly how I feel about my boyfriend.You explained it really good and just keep up the good work.I have been with my man for already 3 years and I love him a whole lot.
Norziela
i luv this poem.keep up the good work!
joselito
I used it for my english class, I had to pick something that was a factual, well written and effective. I can also realate to a point of no extent, excellent job,
Morten
Hi Tera! Loving You makes more meaning to me than any other poem for a long while. There is not much better than tears dripping because it expresses your feelings so well. I love my girlfriend so much, but I gave her a good reason to doubt about it. When I mail her your poem I hope she will see that I really DO love, because it definitely made myself realise. Sorry for my poor english.. ... from Norway
JZ
This is a very nice poem, in which I can relate to and just like me I know many others to.
shayna
this poem describes my relationship with my boyfriend perfectly, i love it!
shovonna
i think that this is a grest poem it relly expresses tru love 4 a person and how u feel. it describes me 100% so i love the poem great
Mitch
Great Poem! I hope it works on the one I love so much! Nicole!
Sasha
i loved your peom it is so meaningful and it expresses fellings and emotions very well. thanx for writing it!
crystal
this poem is how i fell for my boyfriend justin. i love him so much. he means the world to me.
Candice
Oh my god i LOVE your poem! it is so explanitory! it explains all the feelings that i feel for my boyfriend! i love him with all my heart and soul! and i needed a way to tell him and this is the perfect way! thank you SOOOOOOO much! i really needed this poem! i have been looking for a poem like this fer ferever! i just can't thank you enough! Peace! stay kewl!
Audre
THis poem tells alot about my life i sounds alot like i wrote it because it shows alot about how i feel about this girl.
Amanda
I think it is an amazing poem. I am 16 and have fell in love for the first time and this poem says amost exactly what I feel.
Karen
Your poem was very touching and truley describes how i feel about someone right now!
Adina
I know what you mean when you say you can't express your feelings in words. I agree. We need something more special.
Jason
i totally agree with u good work
matta
your poem expresses the exact way I feel about my beautiful girl T.S.
Philippe
This poem really show the way lovers feel, it's a beautiful work.
Fabio
Absolute Class!! I loved it!
mohammad
yo this peom is just the way i feel about this girl this peom is so me
kelley
it was a really good poem and it made me realize how much i REALLY love my boyfriend. thanks, kelley
Getty
Really nice poem...
Jim
I liked this poem. It was good.
tj
very good
Steven
This poem is really touching and it remind me of my girl,who just broke up with me. i just don't know why. Well just hope that you and your boyfriend have the best out of life.
Cassie
I have been looking for a poem to write to my boyfriend and just didn't know what to say, but this poem said exactually what I wanted to tell him. Thankx!
Awjan
Great poem I loved it :) Keep it up
Chris
So true. so true
David
very lovly poem and a good way to pass ur passion!
Josh
I think this is a great poem, and it truly is meant. Words are taken from the heart, and I'm sure sank into the person's heart who read this. Good Job :)
ke
this poem is very loving it reminds me of how I love my boyfriend. keep it up!
zohra
this poem is remarkably cooool.
Ricardo
This poem is a very depp and compassionate poem. It is an awsome poem
tiffany
Good
yainara
this poem really touched me i felt it some way that i cant describe its amazing, it made me cry and its all true.
Scott
None whatsoever. Perfect if you ask me , but maybe that's because i'm in the same situatuin of course !
Jamie
This is a really good poem. :)
JESSICA
I THINK THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM AND I KNOW THAT A LOT OF PEOPLE CAN PROBABLY RELATE TO IT
kelly
This is a wonderful poem!!! It reminds me so much of myself. You did a great job on it Tera.
Craig
This one truly touched my heart. Icouldn't help but think of my girlfriend the whole time
holly
i loved this poem. it expressed a lot of what i feel with my boyfriend.
sky
that is so true for me
jezzable-rae
i thought this poem was really nice and sweet it really expresses how u can feel for someone and not be able to say it tha way u want to nice job!
Maxmillion
I tought the poem was very moving and nice i will send that to my girlfriends. really good, two thumbs up.
Babe
You have given me goose bumps, made my heart flutter. I could go on and on.....when I catch my breath.
Beanie_Baby
I loved this poem. it actually symbolized everything in my relationship.
Magin
This poems says everything that I feel about this certain person. It is touching and very beautiful well done to the writer!
Kristen
This poem expresses so beautifully what people feel when they are in love.
Joe
this poem helped me and my girl get back together
amanda
this poem is great way to tell someone that you love them
Cassie
this is a good poem.gonna give it to my boyfriend for valentine's day.
keyonna
very good,i can relate
Cassie
This is a really great poem. I used it to give to my "boyfriend". Tera Nickell-- I thank you for helping me let this special person know how much I care for him.
Ashley
This poem says exactally what I want to say to my love and best friend. It is just so amazing how perfectly this poems comes out.
baskran
this poems let my mind peace

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