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My Poem is about a girl I have been wanting to be with for years now. I never knew how to tell her my feelings so, I started writing her poems and stuff like that. We did go out . . . and break up. But I know that I do truly love her and I know there must be a reason for me liking her so much for so long. So this is just one of the poems meant for her.

The Life Long Love

When I saw her I knew,
She had to be mine,
Her eyes so blue,
She smelled sweet as wine.

And finally I had her in my heart,
For the first time I was truly glad,
From her I never wanted to part,
I knew being with her never made me sad.

But then, it happened . . .

The sky fell,
The seas overflowed,
Away went her beautiful smell,
And my heart soon slowed.

If me and her were meant to be I don't know . . .

For the feelings are still there,
And when I see her my heart will still drop,
If she left my life I could not bear,
I know my love for her will never stop.

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30 Visitor Comments

Erik
i love this poem, and it is excatly what i am going through right now, good luck with her man
destiny
This is a heart touching poem!
Shelby
THATS A VERY INTRASTING POEM? WOULDN'T THAT GIRLS NAME BE RACHEL??
Kayte
This was a great poem. It was real deep. Your really talented. Keep on loving her.
cynthia
it was pretty kool man. i hope you have the chance to be with her again. good luck
Caleb
this poem is very touching, its exactly what i'm going thru now, keep up the good work man
brandy
i really liked the poem it had true emotion and it was very vibrent!
Rebecca
This poem was awesome. I really wish my boyfriend would write something like this for me.
Angelina
Wow. if a guy really wrote this - wow. It's so sweet. And sounds like he's got talent ;)
Tanya
This was a very sweet poem coming from a guy u dont see many guys like that out there.
Victoria
Ilove the poem,I can think of me and my boyfriend.
Mariya
Dud! I love your poem, it's verry beautiful, but a little bit said. Sorry about what happened.
Vanessa
I really loved that poem I really did! I went through the same things before but now it's over and I still love a guy! This poem that Steve has written I want him to know that I love it!
arse
yo this is great took the words rite out of me mouth
maggie
that was really good i am going thour the same thinmg right now
Ashley
this was a really good poem it kinda looks like the one my boyfriend wrote me except for he actuallty told me how he felt in person. But great job!
chelc
I loved that poem so much and it reallt shows that guyz do have the same feelings as girls do abut love! im in the same situation as you are right now and itz gutting as! hope it all works out for ya!
Ashley
Wow. that was a beautiful poem and i know exactly how u feel. crushing aiint it.
thomas
i gotta hand it all to you! i guess you are just talented! im in the same sit.
alexandra
that was a really good poem she should be very happy
Sarah
that was beautiful!
Doug
you took the words right out of my mouth man, seriously i love this poem and as long as you don't care i want to recite it to a girl
Mark
it is decribe what happend to me
janet
I think that this poem is really nice and really sad but i really like this poem because it shows a side o a guy .
Hannah
REAL GOOD POEM
Pooh
I really loved this poem. i have been i a simialar situation so i could relate to it and i can understand how you feel
amanda
i liked this poem because you can feel what he is going through.
John
I thought this was a great poem.
Brandi
I really love this poem.
katie
THIS WAS A GREAT POEM AND I THINK THAT GIRL WAS LUCKY TO HAVE YOU!

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