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My poem talks about children playing with guns.

Bang, bang

Bang, Bang cries the boy,
as he plays with his cowboy gun.
Ahh!! I've been shot, cries his friend,
as he laughs and tries to run.

Bang, Bang, the gun goes off
that the little boy holds in his hand,
the gun is real, his friend is dead
Bang, Bang enough said.
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3 Visitor Comments

short poem but a great lesson learnt. a stitch in time does save nine
this poem is amazing! its so short yet so deep. that is probley the saddest poem in the sad poems on this website.
So BEAUTIFULLY said, short and too the point. BRAVO !!! One a scale of 1 to 10, 10 being the highest score, I give you a 20 ++ Thank you..

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