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After she broke up with me I realized that she was and still is the girl of my life. Life, now, is a little bit of hell when you know that she will never come back.


I'm captured in the valley of feeling blue
I hope she will take my hand
and bring me back
to the heaven of mutual love

It is the only thing this angel can do

Open feelings
Growing love

Will that be enough?
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8 Visitor Comments

Awwwwww. Very touching short poem but with a very deep message being sent. it sounds as if this girl/women means the world to you. Falling short of not knowing how she felt about you at any point in time,it's hard to say. Only you know that. Time always has the answers and if she really loved you as you are showing,you might get your wish. But if you don't,keep the friendship. To fall in love with someone to the magnitude it sounds you have,that would be a priceless friend to have,if you are faced with having to accept that. Best wishes to you hon.
it was a nice poem that depicts of cruel reality in this world
i can totally relate to this poem.
this poem is short but if u pay attention to it we can fine a lot of meaning to it. very good work i hope u keep on writeing what u feel cause i still feel like that
I is a really good poem cuz its by a guy. I like it cuz its good when a guy feels this way about a girl!
this poem is from his heart and his regrets are apparent..maybe one day she will reach for him and see the reality of his love ..he must have hurt her deeply..I wish them the best
i like you poem so much because the poem . is about some men i lost
very nice....cause i know that feeling myself

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