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This poem is meant to show how great a hot and sizzling lovemaking session can be. It attempts to show a bit of the harsh and lustful side and the loving and sensuous side of the act at the same time.

It is purposely lacking certain subtleties to gain the effect of a heaving chest and the rhythm is written to that of energetic lovemaking.

The Coupling Of Passion And Erotic Lusts

A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.
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263 Visitor Comments

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HOT!
Dionne
This is absolutely mind blowing. I love it. Now all of my body parts are awake and alert! Fantastic!
Rebekha
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You captured everything perfectly. I cant tell you anything else but it was beautiful.
Tarique
Best ever
ravi
Awesome!, truely Passinating, rekindles the memories of passionating romance.
shedevil
That was absolutly wonderful, and inspiring, to feel love like that is such a wonderful thing, I know because I too have found such a love.
Tye
I love it. so passionate. Great Job!
charlene
THIS POEM WILL SURELY GET U IM THE MOVE FOR LOVE. I'M GOING TO SZEND THIS POEM TO MY BOYFRIEND. :)
alicia
you did a great job on this poem
Sarah
Amazingly, you have captured the true meaning of love making with words. It was like a play, every word leading to the next in perfect harmony, without being voulgar. It is perfect, you should be really proud of your ability to voice such a moment as that with such elegance.
Faith
Amazing, it's like you're right there. Loved it!
Donna
This poem is beautiful and reminded of a very special encounter that I've come to share with a man. Thank you for sharing this.
Carrie
i love this poem. i felt the passion and the hottness. it was wonderful. i even think i broke a sweat reading it.
Kimberly
I would like to say that poem is so emotionally involved yet so passionate and touching with the ways it has been written. Fantastic!
Debbie
I ws so touched by this that I had to send it to someone. It brought me to tears because it describes exactly the way we were with each other the first time. Beautiful!
bre
i loved it it was intoxicating and exciting i couldnt wait to read the next line
jeancarlos
its very full of passion
Don
This poem had my girlfriend melting in my arms.
Jess
I love this poem. Takes me back to some very good encounters. Keep up the great work!
Kimberly
Absolutely fabulous! The writing was enough to let the imagination flow free, but not too vivid to be porn! Great!
ada
great
Audrey
This poem truely captured the reality of sex and how intense it truely is. it's amazing and every line drew me into it more and more. simply incredible.
Jean
This poem honesly made me cry when I was finished reading it. My fiance and I are distanced apart right now and it made me long for not just the act but the feelings, the experience of our love at such a deep needed level. Thank you for helping me feel those longed for feelings that I have been missing and couldn't express. It was beautiful!
Helen
Passionate and realistic. If you have had romance this poem rekindles the fond memories.
Staci
WOW! VERY AWSOME.
christina
HOT! AWESOME! THAT'S GREAT!
Lay
The way i felt after reading this poem is can be best described as EROTIC. My mind and body were involved and responding to every word. Great writing!
Lolo
it was good
Terri
I loved this poem because it describes exactly how love making goes with someone who you care so passionately about.
Vanessa
This makes me simply speachless!
Kenneth
One of the best erotic poems I have read. Truly captures you into the moment.
lovestruck
This poem got me wanting my honey even more. Thanks for making me all hot and steamy b4 my shower
Beverly
I really enjoyed this poem,,It came from the heart of someone who has loved and knows what it is like to be loved in return.
crystal
WOW! I absolutely loved this poem, it reminds me of a very passionate night i had not too long ago with a very specail someone. It has great detail. i love it!
Jacqueline
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS NOT JUST AMAZING IT WAS UNREAL!
Sally
This poem was amazing.
Bonnie
The wording is 100% perfect for the first time making love together.
Courtney
That it the spot
zerifa
This poem was enlightening it made me feel like whoa! It made me feel like i wanted to make love to my boyfriend this instance!
Amanda
I love this poem it is very romantic. it makes me think of my man every time I read it.
dalover
i loved the poem it said everything I wanted to say in detail to my man
Angela
WOW! What an incredibly powerful poem. My heart was racing by the end. Incredible.
d
I can see and feel our time
Layne
Wow, its a very graphic poem, its exactly what i experienced, i hope to read more of your poems, your very talented
MANDY
this is a really good poem its very graphic and i like it a lot.
Alva
sheer brilliance. well done. great poem
Clare-Jesse
Wish i could write like this, its stunning
Wendy
I loved the poem. With my husband half way across the world at the moment it was a nice treat for him. It will give him sweet dreams of me. Thanks
Monica
this is my favorite poem so far!
Marquita
this is A very intimate and wonderfully descriptful poem about love and lust that i really enjoyed and would like to vote this into the favorites category. Much respect and props to the author, keep doing your thing.
Siobhan
A poem that has the ability and the descriptiveness to allows one to recapture a moment in their own lives! The poets imagery is indescribable.
christina
Left me Speechless. Absolutly wonderful.
jenna
THIS POEM IS TOP STUFF! ME N MY BOYFRIEND HAVE JUST GOT BACK TOGETHER AFTER A 2 MONTH SPLIT, AND I WANTED A POEM TO SEND HIM, THIS IS IDEAL. ESPECCIALLY AFTER WE MADE LOVE LIKE NEVER BEFORE LASTNIGHT! ITS A TOP POEM! THE BEST SO FAR!
Lacie
I love it! 10 all the way!
MARIAH
AT FIRST WHILE READING THE EXPLANATION OF YOUR POEM, I THOUGHT NO WAY I FEEL LIKE READING THIS. TOO GRAPHIC. BUT AFTER DOING SO ANYWAY I FOUND YOUR POEM IN VERY GOOD TASTE, IN SUCH AN ELEGANT WAY.
Diane
that Poem was Awesome
brandy
I think the poem took my breath as much as the people in the poem. Truly awesome. I read alot of poems and poem books , and so on , and this should be published. It leaves some to the imagination yet leaves nothing to the imagination. I felt my temperature rise as i read it , and wanted to find my lover instantly for the desires it built inside me. Thank you for such a piece of art.
Kimberly
i really loved your poem
N
I have a new love in my life and I will read this to him in bed before or first time together. It's very illustrative of what I want to happen when me make love for the first time. I give it 5 stars *****
kayla
wow.
aisha
i loved it a lot!
Janet Singh
I love it. It's beautifully said; keep up with your good expressive writing.
martina
very erotic beautiful poem felt as thougfh it was happening to me lol!
K
I just loved this poem.
Mia
i love the poem it turned me on in ways i thought my boyfriend could
rochelle
THIS POEM IS THE BEST ONE IVE READ IN ALONG TIME. THIS POEM REALLY TAKES YOU FAR ABOVE TO THE FELLING OF FOREVER AND WIND
MELINDA
WERE YOU WATCHING US. THIS IS A TRUE LIFE EXPERIENCE FOR ME. GREAT POEM
Gena
I enjoyed reading this poem very much. It reminded me of hot and passionate night I had with that special someone. So if anyone has had one of those nights and needs to put it in detail, you should read this poem. ENJOY!
Amelia
Wow! That made me hot reading that. Very nice.
jenna
you really pulled out all the stops with this one. the realest poem about love & lust. forget the sugar coating this is raw. this poem is truley incrediable, i give mad props for this one. beautiful. well done.
Courtney
I loved it, absolutely loved it! keep up the good work
crystal
you're so good. so much detail and work went into this and you can tell. I've read it three times now and just found it about five minutes ago. wow!
Kayla
I love this poem. It is so romantic and describes a perfect scene. If you love to write keep doing it because you have talent!
Ernie
Whew! Love it.
jessica
that poem was hot! the poem really touched me i would love to read another one from the same person who wrote this one.
Sasha-gay
This poem is so. i cant explain the feeling it gives me. its just so sexy it gets me in the mode:-)
Shaya
WOW! I was actually there.
Laporsha
i absolutly love and adore this poem. it's like i can see it happening right before my eyes. You did a wonderful job and keep up the good work. now im going to send this poem to my boyfreind
jellybean
ASTIG!(it means "you ROCK" in our country". this poem will surely struck its readers. very expressive and leaves a mark. good job!i think this would push some couples. haha
diamond
man i felt that poem like it was me and my spouse making sweet love but hey that was real deep
jennifer
Simply put, I love this poem. I wish that I could write poetry that creates such a passionate statement. Well done.
Butterfly
This poem was real go0d. i hope mah time wit mah man comes just like dis. keep writing poems,u have a gift!
Liz
I loved this poem! Other than saying that I am truly speechless and i usually never shut up!
Chris
Awesome, blew my mind away, im sure my Girlfriend will love it as well. Keep up the good work and Enlightening others with your talent.
Cookie
This poem really had a lot of feeling in it. I have felt this kind of passion before and understands what Temptress is expressing.
shy
Loved it this poem was wonderful. Keep up thegreat writing. :)
Reem
I needed to take a very deep breath after reading this beautiful poem ,u did a great job picking the right words to describe passion and love in a very romantic actual way. Keep up the good work (ur partner must be a very lucky one :))
Chandan
I give 100% vote to this poem as it brings up the feeling of my young days when I use to love this way.
Dee
My boyfriend and I LOVED IT! It was very EXPRESSIVE! We give four thumbs up!
Debra
Thank you. This poem hit the spot.
Heaven
I see fortune for you. Keep painting the words of your mind for all the world's arousal. (and I mean that with the most artistic sincerity. )
Chanel
This poem tells of a beautiful experience in a beautiful way. You painted a wonderful picture with your words.
Lilo
I loved, no, adored your poem. it is very romantic. I am in love(actually in "like" with this guy in my orchestra class, and I think I'll give it to him for a Valentines Day gift. Thanx for the "present"!:-)
Betty
I literally got lost in this poem with the visuals playing in my mind. WELL DONE!
jennifer
WOW!
Salaam
This poem moved me on the inside awakining the volcano.
Sandra
Man this poem is very good. On a scale from 1-10 i give it a 10. This poem deep and it is wonderful
Aida
That was a wonderful poem and I understand where your comming from. You are really talented and I think that your poem was wonderful!
Blexierose
We've all had an experience like this I think. And if you haven't. one day you will and life will take on a whole new understanding for you. This piece is so raw. its absolutely exquisite.
chrissy
PERFECT!
christina
wow!
Jess
BEAUTIFUL! I LOVED IT! Reminds me of my boyfriend and I.
John
you know. . . this is one of my favorites from you. . . surprised that I've never voted for it. . . beautiful . . . and erotic. . .
DELILAH
YOUR POEM IS SOMETHING THAT ANYONE CAN RELATE TO. OFTEN WRITERS WRITE ABOUT THEIR EXPERIENCE AND NOT ABOUT AND EXPERIENCE THAT BELONGS TO EVERYONE!
Alison
wow. completely amazing. shows how truly vunerable we are when we let go and submit to the passion of love.
Stormy
WOW!This poem was so detailed, with the perfect wording. I couldn't take my eyes off of it. So beautiful.
Lisa
When I read it all I could think about is my boyfriend, and how your words reminded me so much of us together. You have a wonderful gift!
shrineof
i love this poem, its filled with raw emotions. You can feel the sweat and can feel the passion in the air. It just great, there is no words to say how this poem touched me and every one else i showed it to; it's just great!
amanda
WOW. That was outragues. The most erotic poem i have ever read. you have got it going on, keep up the good poems WOW.
zenty
wow.
AMANDA
THIS POEMS DESCRIBES IT SO WONDERFULLY THAT AS YOU READ IT YOU FEEL LIKE YOU ARE EXPERAINCING IT WORD FOR WORD. PERFECT!
eilee
yow are blessed
Angel
THIS ROCKED MY WORLD! I FOUND MYSELF AND MY LOVER IN THIS POEM! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Kathy
So beautiful. I can relate to poem. Reading your poem was like watching a video in my mind.
michelle
last night i my boyfriend and i made love for the first time and i cant tell you how very much that described the feelings that errupted within me. i am one for writing long poems but your style of writing is a lot more intense than any of the ones that i have written. keep it up i look foreword to seeing as much of your work on here.
Paola
wonderful poem. describes the exact moments of when i make love to my boyfriend
Andriette
That is exactly what it is all about.
trish
i liked this poem it really got to my heart keep up the good work.
John
If feelings can be displayed in a poem then you have done well! I have alcoholic parents that left a lot of questions for me. I hope your ride is easier
esperanza
there is so much raw emotion in this poem it made my mouth water! i loved it!
janice
this poem made me daydream about when i first got with alfredo. he excited my every needs and would not miss one spot or inch of my body. this poem i give a 10! i think it tickled me just by reading this poem.
applelicious
DANG, that was a spectacular poem, after reading it I had to get a quick drink of water because I was extremly too hot. You have talent girl, do your thang!
Dai-dai
yummy! very interesting; now if you'll excuse me.
Vikki
i felt everything this auther was saying as she was saying it . great poem!
Sly
Temptress,You are the Queen of Erotica and a Goddess of love! I hope you are pursueing a career in writing. You rock girl!
Sheena
That poem is so seductive. I really like that.
Pamela
sexy and sweet
Tammi
This poem was written so very well it's amazing! It was very heartfelt and detailed. I love it!
clair
wow.
marie
i really liked how u put feeling into this i really really liked it thanks for sharing it!.
Aimee
Awesome! I felt like I was there.
Isaiah
This could not be more in tune with sex than it is. The poet is very deep.
C.J.
I have never read anything like that . it described my hubby and me to a T. wonderful work!
Shane
Great passion that no other poem can beat.
tony
awesome poem!
bubby
that was a beautiful poem it really made u feel as though u were there
Cher
This was so sexual it made me weak in the knees.
Ash
GIRL, thats what i call a good poem or good love making
April
best in the bunch
Robyn
Amazing. Out of all the poems I have read on this site, I could 'feel' this one the most.
ayana
that poem was really good it went with me really well
June
Wow! that was great exspecialy the details (like it was real). The whole poem was outstanding up the good work.
Coll
Breathtaking you have just decribed the encounter I have experienced, Thank you for putting it into words, this author is truley talented
Monia
It is beautiful!Those are the only words that comes to my mind!
Keri
this poem left me speechless, you did an OUTSTANDING job
Terri
Great job! AWESOME
Eric
The Coupling of Passion And Erotic Lusts has such a strong feeling by the meaning of the words used. Every line made me want to keep reading on.
JGurl
Wooooeeeee. That was very HOT. Ide die for a night just like that.
APRIL
This poem is very beautiful i cant describe it, it leaves me speechless
Angel
It was moving. What else is there to say?
r
Thanks for sharing. Well expressed. When others can place themselves within your work and identify. you establish yourself as an artist.
Joy
Great poem. It reminded me of me and my bf the first time we made passionate love. It was beautiful.
Char
This work takes you on an exploration of all the human senses. It describes the kind of gratification that leaves two lovers weeping. Beautiful piece!
Kris
That was amazing! I was so intrigued by that passion. My goodness! What love making! That was just great. I am almost speechless.
Lvgrl
WOW That was the most sensual poem I have ever read excellent work !
Alyss
This poem is da bomb. that explains the exact feeings and moments of a heated and passionate love making
Jessi
It was awesome. The escriptions put pictures in my head that i can't get rid. Amazing is a good would.
Dana
Had to get my wife to help me finish this one
j
I loved it and feel that this poem has the full feeling to it.
Honey
That poem is Good!
Faye
WOW! What more can i say? This poem is fantastic. Keep up the good work!
Dawn
This totally describes love and the passion that comes with it. I so feel this when I'm with my soul mate! Thanks for putting it into words!
shri
FANTASTIC! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS I HAVE READ. SUPERB WORK. KEEP IT UP!
Tina
Ohhhhhh myyyy that was HOT!
Alendryal
I am having difficulty catching my breath. You are the Mistress of Passion.
DARLEEN
OH MY GOD I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM. I READ IT TWICE JUST BECAUSE IT GRABBED ME SO MUCH. PLEASE LET THIS PERSON KNOW THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM AND I REALLY DO UNDERSTAND EVERY MOMENT. WOW.
Mary
Awesome poem! BRB need a cigarette..lol
SUANNE
VERY CREATIVE WRITING WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT
rider
GREAT!
Elaine
Excellent poem, i really loved it, thanks for sharing it!
shelly
this poem was perfect to describe to my future husband what i want it to be like the first time we do!
Constantina
A great piece of work,i loved it and i'm sure that whoever reads it feels the same way.Keep up the good work!
MEGAN
I LOVED THE POEM. IT DESCRIBES ALL OF MY FEELINGS FOR THE PERSON I CARE ABOUT.
Brandy
That was a great poem..as i read along the lines..more and more i could see me and my boyfriend..that truly sums up the greatness of love making.keep the good poems flowing
crystaltears
I haven't read a good poem like this one in a very long time and I use to write my own and nothing I ever did can compare to the passion and energy that was put into this poem! Thank you!
chris
This poem was awesome
Misty
This was an amazing piece of art. I enjoyed it deeply. Thank you for sharing it with all of us!
mel
wow! as i was reading i immediatley imagined my partner as one of the subjects .like nothing i have read before. FABULOUS!
Dain
Wow! took me there! I was inside the moment and could picture every act.
Barbara
This poem was soo good, "You hit the nail on the head" I don't believe that anyone could have done a better job.Thank you for writing this poem , I needed it to express my feeling's for very special person.
mezu
its explosive,I read over and over,I cant wait to be with ma gurl over the vac.
Lacey
Extremely sensual,outstanding!
Mandi
This poem is so erotic - I sent it to my love immediately. Please write some more - your writing is so beautiful.
Lindsey
WOW, That's all I really can say is WOW. You described a night I had had with my fiancee just perfectly WOW!
CJ
WHEN MY FRIEND BLKBEAR SENT ME THIS POEM I WAS SPELL BOUND. FOND MEMORIES OF OUR TIMES TOGETHER CAME RUSHING BACK IN VIVID MEMORIES. THE EROTIC NATURE AND FREEDOM EXPRESSED HERE IS A GIFT THAT THE BLKBEAR GAVE TO ME. OUTSTANDING!
Purple_Butterfly
I loved this poem..It sucked you in so much that you could not stop reading it. I credit the authors way of depicting one of lives most passionate moments and making it feel real..I pictured the whole thing in my mind as I read the words.
Michele
i can only say that i hope we all experience something close to this at one time in our lives! amazing!
Deshannon
This poem was written so that the reader could envision it. It was like reading a novel filled with lust. So much, that you don't want to put it down. This poem gets my most honored approval.
Heather
ok..it hard to tell wether your writing from experience or if your writing about your desires...dont get me wrong it was well written
Sandra
Oh I loved that poem. My husband is out to sea for three weeks I sent it to him and he loved it. Thanks for writing it. That was a great poem. Keep up the great work your doing!
Gill
Loved it, with my hubby away at the moment this poem evoked such lovely memories of our times shared together
Rachel
it was the bomb it was as if i wa in the sceen of the poem.very good!
Carmen
I really liked your poem. It was very sensual and written with so much love and feeling.
Pepper
AWESOME!! This poem is so deep and filled with emotion. I felt as if I was experiencing each word with my love interest.
Angel
It is very good. It lets you know every feeling and desire without even saying it.
Jodi
Beautiful, well done. I could feel all the emotion, loved it. Keep it coming
Winston
Oh My!! This poem lets you feel the passion and heat of two people in Love and/or Lust! Beautifully written, you want to read it again and again. Well done!
Velta
This Poem was great it was detailed so greatly.
Joi
Great Poem! REally erotic
Leo
Excellent, would be better if it could be printed.
Jasmyn425
Oh! This poem made me get so hot and steamy! I love it!1
Bobbie
The person who wrote this poem ,will live and love life to its fullest,they deserve alot of credit for their passion.
Melissa
I really enjoyed your peom, I hope this will help my crush understand some things. Thankyou so much for sharing
Gabrielle
I plan to read this poem to my fiance before going to sleep tonight. I'm sure it will incite some very energetic passion.
FARHAN
WOW..that was amazing.I could feel the anticipation, the urge, the excitement, the heat, the passion and desire..its really breath holding.
Shasta
I think this poem was the best that I ever read in my life. It describes how an organasm feels.
Patrice
WOW!
Julia
Great!
ANTWANETTE
I LOVE THIS POEM.WORDS CAN'T DESCIBE IT.IT HAD ME IN A DAZE.
SAINT
UMMM BREATHLESS. STIRS MEMORIES OF 1ST ENCOUNTERS
Mia
Your a very talented poet Temptress I loved the poem.
Kimberly
This takes love poetry to a different level. It truelly takes you away to that level. Very erotic, but classy.
Cheryl
My god, its as if you were there, at the moment of pure ecstacy! Your words describe the act of love to truthfully and beautifully it overwhelmed me. You are an amazing writer, I hope to see more from you.
Jessica
WOW! I could picture it!
Tara
I loved this poem,my fiance sent it to me one night and i thought of him and are nights together.. wow!
Brandon
I liked this poem so much that I am going to read it to my girlfriend before I propose to her. It definately has passion to it.
CHARLES
THAT WAS A VERY GOOD POEM.
Amy
Holy cow! That was quite an arousing poem. One that I deffinently forwarded on!
kathy
I loved the poem. It made me want to put out some fires of my own.
Jaclyn
This is an exceptional poem, i had thoughts of my boyfriend running through my head as i read. i would love to see more poems like this.
Pam
it melted me.
CJ
explicit, but well put togother. It brings you to a steady ascent and then lowers the boom so to speak. Very Erotic
Jeanette
I think this was a really sexy poem it was so tastefull. I loved it.
ashu
Nice work takes you to thoughts of nights with your beloved all in all a nice descent yet erotic piece of poetry
crystal
this is the most touching poem that ive read all of my life . its incredibley passionate
sarika
very imaginative, loved the way you combined your thoughts in a flowing rythmatic way.
Elizabeth
I had to read this one over and over and over again!
alejandra
that sounds exactly like what I wanted to do with my man last night but my dorky roomate broke my bliss. So passionate I can almost feel it. great work I love this poem.
erica
I had yet to find such a poem to overwhelm me. That was increadible.
mareena
loved it
Dee
I love this poem.
Hollie
this poem is sooo good it totally explains me and my boyfriend
Rich
I will send this poem to my lover. Thankyou for sharing.
Kayla
WOW
Dee
I love this poem!
sherry
awesome, hot, wet
Mijha
Master of words, great poem.
stephanie
that poem is great,keep writing from the heart
Christi
This was a wonderfully erotic poem. It expressed just how I feel when I'm with my lover. It was as if the poet reached in and read my soul.
Happy1
Well written.
Tabatha
Very, good poem I Loved it..
Karina
This is hot!
Tina
Absolutely breathtaking
Teena
This is a wonderful, powerful poem! Thank you!!!!
pat
Very nice poem. I've recently begun to write some of my own.
Sharon
Temptress: This poem puts you there in the midst of the sensual act of lust. You can feel the rythmn, the thrusting, the seduction of the two joining. The heat of passion that stems from the bond of physical chemistry.
milagros
it was beautiful !
Kathleen
Perhpas a little over done..less is more in poetry. You do have some wonderful descriptions and I could "feel" the passion of the love making....
Lee
Great keep up the good work, hope to see more on love, romance, lust, lovemaking you name it.
Annie
Wonderful....so much feeling
Italian_eyes
WOW......that was amazing...I could feel the anticipation, the urge, the excitement, the heat, the wettness, the passion and desire....WOW
gtr_slngr
i began reading and became totally enthralled in this poem.
tara
this was a excellent poem it send chills down my spine & reminded me of my lover.. i loved it
cindi
Oh my gosh, this poem was so erotic. One of the best pieces I have read in a long time. It kept me wide eyed and energetic until I finished it. Reading it gave me the same feeling of energy as I get when I am writing. I truly felt as though I was there. Great work!
kim
an erotic yet moving piece- well done!
Dale
Excellent well written and so very true to life ..with every word that was written in this poem i felt it as i have done exactley the same ..
oviston
hot hot!!!
Misty
I think the author did an awesome job defining the precise moment when two people become one. My hats off to Temptress and I hope she continues to write. This was a most enjoyable poem. Thank you for allowing me and the millions of others on the Web to read it.
sexy
Your poem was very passionate. I had to pick up my lips off the floor. This should be censored. I am going home to make this same passionate and erotic lustful love to my social companion. I must say, I am inspired!
tom
Hi,Temptress. I just wanted to say that I thought this was one great poem.this is my first time on this site.your poetry stands out among the rest.
stephanie
this peom is great.
Sarah
I love it. I just sent it to my boyfriend. Keep it up.
MJ
This poem stirs an unbridled passion between two unknowing lovers

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