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This was written for man that has shown me how to receive and share, not just give. I can only try to describe how he makes me feel, I hope someone else can relate to this poem, everyone should be this close to heaven just once.

My Heaven

I look deep in your eyes.
I see there what I feel inside.
We share something between us,
Neither one of us can hide.

I feel your lips touch mine,
I loose all my control,
All it took was a look and a kiss,
To know you were part of my soul.

I see your hands on my skin,
I want and need you to do more,
The passionate look you give me,
Tells me heaven is in store.

I feel your need against my thigh,
I know you will fulfill every wish,.
We were made to fit together,
And all it took was a look and a kiss.

I look deep in your eyes,
And I see heaven there inside,
You make me feel so beautiful,
What I feel for you I cannot hide.
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136 Visitor Comments

APRIL
it is just how i feel about my girlfriend i couldn't have said it better,there are a lot of poams in here that i love they are just what i want to say. thank-you
jill
This poem says everthing about the afternoon I met the man I will marry. We met online and then he came across on the ferry. I could not believe what i was reading it was every emotion I felt when he first kissed me.
Rebekha
By the time I was done reading it I was crying. It has captured every feeling I had about my man when we first met, and still now.
CONNIE
I have a boyfriend and I feel just like this poem describes. I love it.
crystal
i give it 4 stars! i love this poem because it explains how i really feel about this person that has my heart.
BETTY JOE
THIS POEM REALLY EXPRESSES THE WAY I FEEL TOWARD MY BOYFRIEND I LOVED IT
kelly
i think the pome was grate it remnids mi of how i feel about my ex we hav split up but im hopein to be with him again soon i love him so much
Angela
I love this poem so bad cause it's excatly what I'm feeling gor my man. Your a great poem writer, Keep them coming.
brit
i really liked this poem it reminded me of my lover and how i feel when i look into his eyes. keep up the good work its an awsome poems one of the best ive ever read.
annette
your poems brought tears to my eyes because it feel like we make up the same thing and keep up mthe good work and don't forget to be you all the times
tamara
When I read this poem, it made me think of my man. This is exactly how we feel for eachother. I really enjoyed it. Keep em' coming.
Shannon
I Love this I just sent it inside a card to my deployed Marine the love of my life!
Jacqueline
It was beautiful and amazing. Very Nice job
Mohamed
very very very Good Nice Poem ( Kamma Roberts )
sonyell
I loved this poem its just the words Ifeel like saying to my baby. Thanx!
Shannon
I loved this poem. I would like this author to write more poems like this one. I thought It was really powerful and touching.
Cathy
Your words totally describe how I feel for my husband of 17 years. He is now deployed to Germany so through your beautiful words I am able to express my love and feelings in ways I could never describe myself, thanks.
Jeannette
This is the best poem I have read so far. I have been a poet for over ten years and this is one of the few poems some else has wrote that truly touched me. GREAT JOB.
Jessica
This poem was very thoughtfull and some people could not understand her words unless they have found someone who they dream about and can not wait to see. This poem tuched me dear to my heart, it reminds me of my true love.
Mainul
I am feeling good after this poem reading. As I believe Simple with the best. Thats way This poem is really simpley but unexpression language express by the poet. And here is privew of dream and heavan. That a couples future and feelings. Thank you and thanks the poet. Have a nice day wishing by. Arif
paula
This is a amazing poem. Your emotions jump right off of the page. real life events are the best thing a poet can right about. This poem was very heartfelt and exstremly well written. It's wonderful you could find someone who made you feel all of those emotions. Your are an exstremly wonderful writter. Hope you continue your work.
christy
My boyfriend proposed to me last night infront of 200 people in a restaurant. I am still overjoyed and find it hard to express what i feel. This poem fits perfectly!thankyou
Naaz
I really like ur poems from the core of my heart. These poems work like a love bridges between me n my luv. Sometimes i feel that these poems are written only for me coz my every feeling towards my luv is expressed in it. so thanx alot for giving me such a precious gift by that i'll be able to express my emotions n feelings to my luv.
brian
i showed my gf this poem and were going threw a really tuff times right now and it touched her. thank you for sharing that piece with me. it ment alot to me
alysia
this reminds me so much of the love i am in right now. so sweet yet simple. a look and a kiss is all it really takes!
Phytreseia
THis is a great poem to show a man that his woman care and that he is always on her mind
T
Its touched me. the deepest chord of my soul
Ashley
i love this poem so much the first time i read it, it made me cry a little you did good writting this
amanda
this poem has got my vote all the way because it true. how people feel about there spouce and true love. i know when i read it it reminded me of how i feel about my love. though there are no words that truley tell i really feel.
Lesley
Wow, what an amazing poem, it certainly was very moving. Thank you
Shawna
Amazing. Truly amazing. Some one who can say what i am sure a lot of people feel.
Heather
My sailor is defiently "my heaven"! Beautiful work!
APRIL
I REALLY ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED ME. AND I CAN ABSOULUTELY RELATE BECAUSE ALL IT TAKES IS FOR MY BOYFRIEND TO LOOK AT ME AND I GO CRAZY.
Frances
ABSOLUTELY INTOXICATING! I sent this to my boyfriend because it said everything that I wanted to say to him. Thankyou!
candy
oh man. i like this. keep it real.
Amy
I LOVE IT! It explains exactly how I feel for my husband! U r a TRUE poet!
CRYSTAL
this poem is the best one i have ever read it take the words right out of my mouth GREAT JOB!
kayley
i loved it !
taryn
it was so nice coz it is like me an this boy so thank you so much for that
keandra
i think that this poem is awsome you done really good on it
Dawn
This is a awesome poem. It captures exactly what I feel for my love. Thanks for the great writing.
Ashley
I loved it
Tee
Took the words right out of my mouth. Great Job!
yvonne
ilike it it was good i hope u make some n=more oems about love
erica
I thought this was awesome. Nice very nice.
Megan
This poem tells everything that i see in my boyfriend you are a good poem writer
Sara
This poem says all i wanted to say to my boyfriend. The way you put it was just so wonderful. You're a great poet.
lisa
Wow, that was Amazing. I never thought there was anyone out there who felt the way I did. I am glad to know that there are others who feel the amazing love that I feel.
Silvia
this poem touched my heart because everything i says is true to me the person that i am go out with is my heaven i can not live without him and if one day he leaves me it will fell like hell!so this has all the vote from me!
Andrea
Very good!
cassie
outstanding poem. it describes every thing so well and it is also words i have been looking for to tell my boyfriend. you did and awsome job on that poem keep up the good work.
H
A very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this piece.
jennifer
i loved the poem it realy discribes how the poet feels.
amanda
This poem was awsome, I have been married to my husband for 3 years, been together for 9 years. When i read this it brought me back to the first day i saw him, and the first day we made love. all i have to say is thank you and WOW.
Tracey
I really love this poem, it is like how i feel about a certain guy in my life. Awsome Work
Willette
How powerful, it most ceretainly brought tears to my eyes and overwhelmed my heart with those most wonderful words. I most ceretainly can relate have been there plenty of times in my life. Thank You for such powerful words so deeply exspressed.
Heaven Marie
I think that this poem is exactly how I feel about my fiance of 5 yrs! Thank you for writting with your heart. Weird that someone you don't even know can help you explain your love for someone! Thank you
AMANDA
THAT WAS A GOOD POEM. I GAVE MY BOYFRIEND THAT POEM AND HE HAS IT ON HIS WALL. HE REALLY LOVES IT. EVERY TIME HE LOOKS AT IT HE LOOKS AT ME AND HE COMES TO ME AND GIVES ME A BIG KISS.
Mona
Outstanding!
Elizabeth
I loved it. I am in a relationship right now and everything you wrote applies. He is my heaven. thank you for putting into words.
michelle
Beautiful! You just described what I have been trying to find the words for. Thank you for sharing!
LORI
I THINK THIS POEM SAYS IT ALL FOR PEOPLE WHO HAS TOOK IN TRUE LOVE.
Jewels
This poem describes exactly how my boyfriend/future husband makes me feel inside and out. This is a wonderful, perfect poem that you have written. I will keep a look out for your name in the future, if I need a love/romance poem again
Lisa
this poem really touched me, it put into words how I feel about the one that I love. I write poetry to, you are my new inspiration!
Danyell
this poem is very sweet i love it this is the 1st poem I've ever like on this web site
sarah
this poem is beautiful it captured my heart i sent it to my boyfriend and he seemed to fall for me more knowing id sent such a poem that bonded us together thanks for this wonderful artwork in words
ZeZe
LOVE IT! love it love it love it.
Lucas
I just read your poem My Heaven. Since i can't write poems I used this poem and sent it to my girlfriend who i really love b/c the words you used describe everything i feel for her. She will be very happy. She just got out of a hospital. So thx for the poem.
Lisa
I Love this poem. My boyfriend is in the army and Im teying to find the perfect poem to send him. This is the one. Thank you!
maria
I have one word to say "Beautiful"
Stacy
This is so beautiful! I sent it to my husband today. It's the best poem I've read!
Patti
Perfect!
dee
Awesome. Describe what I feel for the man of my life. And the day we met.
migue
I love this poem. Anyone who read this poem wolud tell you the same.
toni
this is so beautiful. i have found love with a friend of 15 yrs and this is how i feel . WOW!
bill
great poem!
Jenna
I LOVED it! Totally captures what I have been feeling with my lover! Thank you.
Sandy
I love this peom. It express how I feel about my man. Thank you for writing it and share with me.
Sarah
I loved the poem it was truly remarkable. My boyfriend loves poems but I am not a very good writer.
JENN
OH MY GOODNESS. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR POEM. SO MUCH OF IT DESCIRBES FEELINGS THAT I HAVE. I SHIVERED WITH EVERY LINE THAT I READ. IT IS WONDERFUL
Michelle
The best word that I can think of to describe this great poem is "WOW"! Loved it!
Stacey
This poem is beautiful. It reminds me of the very first time i saw my boyfriend, it really only take one look and one kiss. The poet really knows what she's talking about.
Darla
This is exactly how I feel about my husband. I couldn't of said it better. You are great!
BoNNo
Awesome (simply put)
Nesha
When I read this poem, I immediately knew that it was meant for me and the love of my life. Being myself a poet, I can feel the passion that the writer has and I can truly relate. Love is a beautiful thing and this poem expresses the beautiful thing that is love
SWEET
I REALLY LOVE YOUR POEM IT WAS BEAUTIFUL
Hal
One word : Beautiful!
Erin
this was the best poem i have read in a long time. i can't even put words in my mouth to describe how good it was.. it is actually how i feel about my boyfriend.
MICHAEL
I REALLY LOVED THIS POEM. IT SUMMED EVERY THING I FEEL, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT TO HER. THANKS.
wardenwa
i love this poem it reminds me of me and my boyfriend i love it so much
Barbara
This is so true I can't believe i read this! It is great. It relates to me so much. I just got backk from seeing this guy and I feel this way right now. I was with him for 2 years and it was over. Maybe it will happen again..
JANET
IT'S A REALLY GREAT POEM
Barbara
Lovely poem, just the words I wanted to say to my new friend
Princesa
I LOVED this poem it actually took a look and a kiss for me and my fiance to realize that we were the one for each other :)
kandisweet
It reminded me of my relationship. It's a great poem
mymy
it was hot
Melissa
Your poem gave me butterflies it really touched me
Thompson
as sson as i started reading this poem i teared up and by the end i was crying. It says everything that this one person means to me. thank you
sara
this is everything i feel when i'm with him, plus some. he makes me feel as though nothing could go wrong, he makes me feel like an angel
Sweet-Roz
This poem is sweet....
kira
girl, i know what you are talking about. when i look into my man's eyes and feel his kiss i feel like i'm the qeen of the world. he makes me feel like an angel. he is a keeper.
Jamie
Beautifully written..describes exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. Never thought any words could possible describe that, I was wrong lol. :o)
Cristy
I loved your poem you said everything I wanted to say but couldn't find the words. Your poem touch a place in my soul. Very good work keep it up.
Megan
I love this poem! When i read it i thought you my boyfriend. It is so sweet!
Kristie
Man I am really feeling this poem because I am in a situation that this poem relates to I give it a 10 you have imagination, that's a plus.
dee
Ireally like this poem keep them coming
ashley
i loved this poem. you did a great job. this is how i feel with my fiance.
Julie
Perfect, I loved it. This is exactly what I wanted to read!
Monica
I thought that this was a great poem and it describes how I feel about my loved one and I thought I would have never found something that would actually describe how I feel for him. Glad that I could read this.
Kristi
This is a wonderful piece of writing ..
Heather
I completely agree with what this poem says, I have definitely been there before :)
dan
this is a very good poem'i like it
Keith
Brilliant
Petra
I really can relate to this poem. It is exactly what I feel for my boyfriend. I'm going to read it to him tonie when I see him. YOU GO GIRLFRIEND!
Layla
I liked this peom so very much, excellent job:)
james
you did a beautiful job on that.
Tammy
this poem was beautiful and anyone who s ever loved can relate to this poem
kristin
i loved the poem, and the way your feelings were expressed in words
Lita
This poem is so sweet! I like it alot!
Katie
I absolutely LOVED the poem My Heaven. It totally describes how I feel for my love; only I could not put it into words. Thank you so much.
Sheila
I really love this poem.It relates on the relationship that me and my boyfriend sharing now. This poem is wonderful!
Stacy
your poem was wonderful. I understood yo completely. I'm a poet myself and your work is very extrodinary. Keep on writing.
Dustin
that's a great poem I like they way you say all of your feelings from your heart good poem
Heart_of_Jazz
The poem flowed smoothly... and it was Lovely...
Amber
This a poem that lovers can relate.
Marla
I can relate to it. I think I might send this to my boyfriend.
Lawry
While this poem was written for and by a woman, this man thought it expressed his thinking so well that he sent it to his love.
Anne-Marie
i coudn't find the words, so you did it for me! It's a beautiful poem, it really is, it discrives how you can feel about someone else, what you feel for someone else, just in the right words! thanx
Tara
This poem is beautiful, it says just what I feel, I'm making a collage of beautiful sayings for him for Valentine's day, and this is just what I was looking for!!
Carey
This was a beautiful poem. :)
AMV
I very much relate to this poem I have the joy of having someone who makes me feel this special in my life, just want to say that this is a beautiful poem and that its true everything you say on it ..True Love Does Exist you describe it very well.
Beth
This poem realy got to me it reminds me of me and my boyfriend and i love it very much.
Molly
Absolutely beautiful. I wish I'd written it
Johnny
This poem I really liked because sometimes just a look and a kiss is all you need.
Sarah
i really enjoyed reading your poem
linamanas
surely I was this close to heaven once.

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