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About the Poem

When taking a break from my computer at work, I thought about my fiancée and this little poem came rushing out of my pencil.

When Our Bodies Come To Meet

When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.

I can hardly wait to taste you
In the darkness of the night.

I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.

When our bodies come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
© 1999 Marie Paradise Please respect the rights of the author and Passions in Poetry. If you would like to use this poem on your own web page, please contact the Author. Thank you.

21 Visitor Comments

Don
I just love this one. The cadence is part of it. The use of space. Mostly it's the way it makes me feel.
Drew
that was very warm to read, I loved it. Please write more
dana
that poem was good.
hollie
hey, that was a really good poem. im 15 and me and my boyfriend have been dating a lil over a year, and ur peom really made me think of him.
daniel
i read this poem to my gf, and it seems that she feel in love again , thax its helpin me lol
Melissa
This poem is wonderful.
dana
taht hot the poems sem like macking love every nite good job
heather
All i can say is WOWZERS! Its short and i love it. I am a poet too but i caould never write like you! Hey that rhymes! Keep it Up!
Mtoni
The poem is really touching. It reminds me of my lover whao we used to work together. Keep on the brilliant work.
michelle
that mad me cry soo much.
claire
excellant keep up the good work and don't stop writing loving poems like this as it is so romantic and heart warming. it made me think about what i want to say to my boyfriend for a long time and thank you ever so much. reading your poem and listen to love song s made me think of the words to say to him
Ethel
YOUR POEM IS SO GOOD! I LIKE IT VERY MUCH
dave
please give up the day job. im just in a new relationship and that was fantastic.
sarah
your poem expresses the way i feel for my boyfriend, thank you
Elrick
I love this poem so much. It reminds me of the way I feel for my girlfriend
Amanda
i loved your poem it was really nice
Alexandra
I love this poem. It is just wonderful!
Tambet
I´m speechless! Just love that poem. Amazing.
sissa
When trying to find the words to express myself to my love.this poem said exactly what was i my heart. I am not good with words but his poem gave me a chance to express what I feel in heart. Thank -you ever so much.
sharon
i really liked your poem
fred
brilliant!

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