About the Poem
This is about two people becoming one soul. And all the feelings that go along with it
|by Angel Eyes|
|I finally crawled into bed last night, late.
With visions of you still in my head.
Anticipation pounding in my heart.
All my senses filled with your existence.
As I escaped into the dream world I know so well,
I took you with me.
We walked down the beach together.
Our hands touching and our hearts bonding through them.
The wind kissing our faces gently.
The sand giving way under our feet.
The warmth in our hearts that only a poet would understand.
Finding an oasis in the never ending edge of the world,
We sit beneath the giant tree, on the patch of thick grass
that seems to have been put there just for us.
We talked for what seems to be hours.
Never running out of things to say,
feelings to share, thoughts to exchange.
I reach out to touch you and you stop my hand with yours.
Our fingers touch. Our hands envelop each other.
Almost as though they were making love to each other.
Our fingers dancing. Our eyes gazing into each others.
A soft and gentle smile exchanged.
Our bodies seemingly without direction move toward each other.
The desire almost unbearable.
The passion burning in our hearts so overwhelming.
We are unable to maintain control of our own destinies.
Our bodies become one.
We make love in such a way that direction from Venus herself must be at hand.
Only paced by the rhythm of our hearts.
Accelerated by the hunger for more.
The cycle seemingly never ending.
Hunger and the attempt to satisfy it.
Our hearts thundering like a storm on the sea of love.
The frenzied yet graceful, almost poetic energy abounds.
We erupt in a flow of passionate waves that humbles the nearby sea.
As we lay secure in each others arms in the shade of the giant tree.
Listening to the song that the wind and surf play just for us.
Feeling love not surpassed by Romeo and Juliet.
We drift into a world in our minds that we share in a way that is unexplainable.
A connection of souls.
I awaken to another day.
Turning to touch you.
You are not there.
It was a dream, and now just a memory.
The feelings still in my heart.
The vividness of the encounter still in my mind.
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26 Visitor Comments
this is the best poem ever!
oh my god that was so good i cryed i liked it so much i think u r so great do poems i hope u keep it up
I loved it, very expressive of how I feel about my love. We are far apart now and can relate to the visualization it brings.
Wow. I have had that same dream about my love so many times. It almost becomes frustrating to have them so often, but it shows you how much you miss the person you are apart from. Beautifully portrayed and elloquently written.
I think this was a very ROMANTIC poem! It really makes you think about how much you're in love with the person you're with!
Angel Eyes, if you ever check the comments, please write some more poetry and submit at this site. You are a very good, no great, poet and this one is a very special poem for me.
Feel like this poem was written for me. Thanks Angel Eyes
A poem that relates to feelings I have for someone special.
I have the same feelings about someone but could never put them into words. this poem said it all its excellent
Angel Eyes.sometimes coincidence is just too weird to be explained. I love your poem and I have often called my fantasy love 'Angel Eyes' the beach, too, is featured in my many tales of him. I never run out of things to say about the dark-eyed devil named Michael. Hope to read more of your work to see if there are any other COINCIDENCES. Keep writing!
This poem was excellent. It showed soo much feeling, and it gave me this wonderful picture in my mind. This would be a great inspiration to everyone
Damn!! Very good.
you have catch the good poem whery good workt i like it...... fun yeee thomas.
I love the poem! Sometimes dreams can seem so real-and when you wake up.it hurts to realize they weren't true.
My love lives in Paris. I am in Ohio. It has been nearly four weeks since I last saw my love. I am sending this poem to her now and won't have to say anything else. Thanx Angel Eyes!!
This poem was very touching, I just sent it off to my man.I'm sure he'll love it! Keep up the great work of poem writing =0)
I've been sitting here for hours looking for the perfect poem to send to a certain person and this is the one...thanks
AWESOME!!! It truly expresses how I feel some nights, especially since my other half is in another state, miles and miles away.
I almost wept when I read this; this piece fits my current situation all too well.
This is one of the best poems I have ever read.
That was beautiful, so very vivid! I loved it!
Great poem! It really captured the feelings that go along with making love, and it was so vivid. Complete picture came into my mind
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