I'm 17 and I live in Wales, and currently I'm sitting my exams. The poem is about a crush I had on a girl that turned into love, and how I dreamt of perfect time with her.
Daylight breaks through equal bliss,
All the reruns consume our history.
Falling from grace,
I hope you’ll come sit by me.
All I wish is your hand,
It’s the entrance to your soul.
Each dream I had about you,
Got lost or thrown away;
I can’t wait forever,
Can’t you kiss me now?
All the poems I wrote,
Died and burned away.
You took another man,
After stealing my heart;
It cracked in two,
One for hate the other for you.
Didn’t I wait long enough?
Leaving it for the perfect time.
I can’t look at you now,
Won’t you turn away?
It’s lonely where I am now,
But I can’t turn away.
I think about you all the time,
Won’t you come listen to me?
Maybe one day I’ll get your kiss,
So I’ll feel your lips,
I won’t let the moment pass me by,
Please stay as the star in my sky;
Each day is lost without you.
Maybe one day it’ll turn out my way!
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that made me realize how mean i have been but wat should i do? i really dont love him but i dont wat to hurt him? i so clueless when it comes to love! i love this poem it made me cry thanx
ariel
hey bro this was a really great poem and i know how u feel to want things the way u plan it in ur head well keep writing
Zoe
ah, I feel your poem, which is the entire point of poetry. Your choice of words made my soul jump and burn. Thank you.
Randy
I'm 17 going on 18 and i am dealing with the same problem. this one spoke to me
BLACKBYRD
BRO U CHANGED THA WAY I THINK WIT DAT POEM IF U GOT ANYMORE LIKE THOSE HIT ME UP
Tyler
I think i know what u mean. kinda suks sumtimes.
Shawna
Wow, you're poem is really great. I like it a lot. I don't know many people who can write like that. You're rad.
Hanna
i really liked your poem. it was heart felt. i think a lot of teenagers would be in the same boat as you. i never actually thought that men actually felt so deep and could actually get hurt. thats purely because maybe your not as naive and vulnerable as us girls ( that does not apply to every single girl) but yea i truely love this poem. i always say that no girl/boy is worth it if they make u cry or make u feel inadequette. anyways goodluck in the future. i am almost certain that you will be successful when it comnes to love. love lots meme x
Julie
I really liked your pome because I'm going though the sameting right now.
Mahamed
it really happien this to me and acctully is about me, but phillip what i can say it, it's really perfect and i vote for you thanks. it's really more then good or excellent.
Jesse
I'm in this exact same position and the girl doesn't even know I have this great amount of feelings for her. If i tried and artistic way to tell her she would probably laugh. She's a great deal older than me so there's an intimidation factor tied in with all of this. but this poem makes me realize im not the only one that's ever experienced this problem. thanks Phil.
meagan
what a beautiful piece. if she doesn't go for you than she is a terrible person. i hope tht you get her. i would love to meet someone as wonderful as you! thx 4 wreighting such a beautiful poem.
Victor
This is such a great poem and I can relate to it completely.
nicole
this made me cry
Jake
Dude,thnx for writing this,it madr me think of my girl for some reaoson?it made me reliza that love is very complicated,i wasnt that kidna guy bfor i read this . wat im trying to say is ur poem changed me thnx bro
christian
this poem is real cool. keep up the good writing.
scott
i feel you brother
molefi
i give the poem 9 0ut of 10
Justin
Thank you man. that poem was really good and it's not like any poem I've read here. Just, thanks for an awesome poem. I can really relate to it.
rich
Your poem was great. Like I always say lifes to short to wait around. U have to take the first step. I didn't wait & I've found my perfect girl.
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