About the Poem

This poem was the first poem that I wrote for my boyfriend. I was sitting in class one day, thinking about him of course, and I decided to write what I felt about him

You

by Ashley Mclean

The first thing I think of
When I think of you,
Is your wonderful smile.
The second would be your adorable laugh.
I could go on and on,
But the list would never end.

When I think of the short time
That we've been together
And of all of the happy memories we've already shared
It amazes me to no end
And I know that we were meant to be together.
I look at you and see overflowing love, hope, and joy
As well as charm, strength, happiness and dignity.
With all of these wonderful qualities
It's no wonder I love you so.

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170 Visitor Comments

celes

Thi spoem is great. Really reminds me of my boyfriend

Sabrina

This poem is so cute it touches me in a way i can't even say i have a new boyfriend and this poem says exactly the way he makes me feel!

Paige

i love this poem it reminds me of my boyfriend. he is the sweetest.

quetta

i like this peom cuz me and my ex boyfriend was together for a minute till this day i still think bout him plus sometimes he calls me you know how that go's but i go through all the time too

ashley

i luv this poem

tawnia

i reallly like this poem because it reminds me so much of me and my baby. now i know someone has experienced something i have. isnt it great?

Azaria

I loved the poem. Its really touchy adn it reminded me of my situation with the person I'm with. You got talent.

autumn

love it

Yolanda

This poem makes me think of the boy I'm with right now.

Kaniqua

that was very sweet and creative. touched alot. keep up the good work.

Shaina

oh my goodness thats just how i feel about me and my boyfriend i love your poem.

Tara

This poem is exacly how it is in my relationship right now. I love it

elizabeth

IT IS SO HEART WARMING AND AN EXPRESSION OF YOUNG LOVE,I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY DEEP AND VERY LOVING

kimberly

Hey girl, ur poem rocks. I really like it and it really touch me.

sharmilaa

thank u for ur poems.

Markeashia

That poem reminds me of my ex that i really love and wnat to be with.

kAYLA

this poem really xpresses how you feel bout someone or something

Almager

Hey that was a realy sweet poem i might just right one for my boyfriend keep it up girl

Chace

I think jthis is one of the best poems I ever read because it reminds me how I feel about my ol lady,and of some of the things I tell her on a daily basis.

lisa

me and my best friend have been friends for a year and a half. but we jsut statred dateing. and that poems reminds me so much of him

Grace

This is such a wicked poem so easy yet powerful. Its my best one yet.

Nou

It's hard to let go, when you think of the loving memories. I thought of him when I was reading through this poem. I'm happy that I found this poem. Made me thought of a lot of things between me and my boyfriend.

kettie

so far i've look at just about three of these poems and all describes my baby, i'm chosing this one cuz i can't tell my baby how i really feel about him and sending him a poem that can from the bottom of my heart, although i didn't write it but still it's truly what i needed. Thank u so very much, and keep writting nice poems like that. Whoever wrote them. ! U"R GOOD! Bye now, and again Thank u

randy

i love this poem it makes me think of my boyfriend and you must be a wonderfull poet.

trineika

this poem really touched me because it remains me of my boy friend and i. how every little thing about him makes me love him more and more each day and reading this poem gave me a reason for telling him i love him so much

Adrienne

OMG I HATE IT WEN PPL RITE IN AL CAPS AND MISPEL THIER WURDS Its a really great poem, I enjoyed it alot. :-)

Sarah

It's beautiful and wonderful, exactly what I feel.

Mary

I love this poem! it reminds me so much of me and my fiance. we've been together for 5 months and we already know we were meant for each other. This poem just really speaks to me.

patricia

good job on this poem it just what i wanted to read

della

cute!

Ashley

great poem!

Holly

What I liked about the poem was it made me realize that I Do Not Take Credit For Everything my boyfriend does for ME!

keveta

Well ashely i loved your poem it kinda reminds me of me and my boyfriend so keep up the good work

Latrice

I love your poem so much. It really touched my heart. I am also a writer and I was really trying to find a way to tell a friend that Im in love with him. When I read your poem, I wanted to cry because what you love about your boyfriend is exactly what I love about my friend. Now I have an idea of what to say. Thank You.

Brandy

This poem is amazing! It really touched me, I can relate to it about how I feel about my boyfriend. I have been with him for 10 months now and I think we are meant to be together. I hope we stay like this forever. Thanks. keep up the good work!

Stephanie

This poem is so awesome!

reborn

I'm touched. and on the brink of tears. I can relate to this poem exactly and. it's nice to know that someone else in this world actually knows how I feel. partially, that is.

shawna

I thouhgt it was very sweet,it seems me and u share the same feelings about our bf's so yeah,well i loved it touched me very much!

Judy

I LOVED YOU POEM. YOU CHOSE THE RIGHT SET OF WORDS AND THE RIGHT WAY TO SAY THEM.

danielle

that was a great poem i likes that one can u send me more of your poems

katherine

This is an amazing poem. This make me think of the guy i have been with for nine months it doesent seem that long to me. but it really is. your poem is great. keep writing. much luv

Kathryn

I love this poem! It reminds me of my boyfriend every time I read it. Thank you, Ashley, for writing such a beautiful poem that has touched me and most likely hundreds of others!

vanessa

this poem was wonderful and it to also reminds me of the relationship i have with my boyfriend, keep on writing cause your poem touched me

rachel

it was pretty good for my boy friend me to married him im 15 years old

Stephanie

I was looking for love poems because valentines day was coming up, and I couldn't quite find one just for my criteria. Then I came across this poem and I fell in love with it! It was just what I was looking for!

jessica

this poem touched me because it reminds me of my boyfriend who is everything I've ever looked for and he means the world to me. I love you, andy!

catie

i really liked this poem it captured all of the aspects of another person that you really love.

kassy

i loved it! your right there is may things you can love about then but i'm not sure looks r all add next time about personallity

Gabriella

i love my friend so much but he doesnt hink of me that way and htta touched me how that poem said that but i love him so much cuz he is always there when i need him! well that was a wonderful poem

ramesh

This poem is very unique in its own way. it describes the exact feeling i have for my woman. It would be my pleasure if you could send in some great poems like what you wrote. I wish i could be talented like you

christina

. this is one of the most beautiful poems i´ve ever read : lovely,sweet and that talks about love, a kind of love that only someone who´s in love can feel, and this is what i feel about my boyfriend right now, it describes us so well, that i believe that the same way we are meant to be. this poems was meant for both of us.

stefanie

OMG this poem is the nest it SO relates to me and my boyfreind we have only been together 6 weeks and i love him so much! GREAT POEM on a scale form 1 to 10 10 being the highest i give it a 20 i love it!

yazmine

i really liked the poem it explains me exactly

Andrea

This poem reminds me of my current relationship with my boyfriend. When I read it, it put at smile on my face and made me remember all the good times that we had together and still are. Thank you for letting me read your poem and keep up the good work! -Andrea

laquaya

I think your poetry will touch many people around the world who are really searching for poetry too help mend a broken heart and how to express there love for someone they deeply and trully love,I think your poetry has that effect on people. Keep up the good work!

shell

the poem iz mad coz my awsome boyfriend has those exact qualitys he is soooooooooo amazing and i love him so much!

Katrina

I think it is so sweet, I wish I have the talent to do somethink like that it is soo good keep up the good work. xxxx

Morgan

i love this poem so much and it touched me because it reminds me of me and my boyfriend now!

Sandra

wow i loved that poem it reminds me of me and my boyfriend.

Liana

YOU KEEP ON WRITING POEMS LIKE THIS. IT WILL GET YOU SOME WHERE IN LIFE. THIS POEM IS WONDERFUL I LOVE IT. IT TOUCHED MY HEART!

Monica

i LOVE THIS POEM IT MAKES ME THINK OF ME AND MY BOYFRIEND AND HOW MUCH I REALLY LOVE HIM! gOOD JOB!kEEP IT UP!

The day i first read one or your poems, i knew right then and there you had talent, this is an excellent poem and i can tell by it that you are a very caring and loving person, my best to you in your love life, you deserve it Ash.

Emmy

Yer good at poems Ashley

Veronica

I feel the same way about my boyfriend. we have only been together for 3 months but god knows as much as he does that I lvoe him so much and would never part from him. I would never be able to let him go not even if I wanted to. this poem is very inspiring to me and I think you did a very lovely job on the wording. Great job and keep up the good work. PS: You have my vote.

dede

this is very touching good job sweety

Amber

I like this poem because it says the truth about someones love. It says so much about me and my boyfriend and one day I hope that I can make this poem completely true between us.

kayla

i really enjoyed this poem i think you are very talented and very very good

Jeniece

I loved this poam. The first time i read this poam it made me think about my boyfriend, and i started to cry. Now it is on my binder and in my heart it will always remain!

Mariya

I love this poem Asheley. It's very quit. It touched my heart,because it's somethink that just happened to me,and the guy I ment a month ago,and I will send this poem to my boyfriend. Thanks

zhixian

its a lovely poem. it just realli describes what i feel for the particular some1 but i have no guts to tell her how i feel. so i lov this poem!

Jodi

This poem touched me so much. It made me think of my boyfriend and everything we have been through in the past 6-7 yrs. I give this on a 1-10 scale and 10 a the best I give is an 11!

Mitsumi

Wow, You really touched my heart. Wonderful!

Lena

This is a really ood poem! it is so touching! i love it! keep it up!

monika

I like that this poem uses simple words and it relates to me and my boyfriend.

Joey

that was one of the coolest poems i have ever read. wrighting poems is something i have never been able to do and i wish someone could teach me.

chris

this poem rocks i showed it to my girlfriend and she almost dropped dead

danielle

this was a grat poem it made me think of my baby7

Kelise

Gurl, your poems are so touching keep up the good work and maybe you and I will sitting next to each other as each have published a book

tmelia

ashley you are blessed with a great talent keep up the good work. the poem was beautiful and it relates to me and my boyfriend's relationship that we have. you really opened up my to show me that i need to love my boyfriend more. like i said keep up the good work

raelene

That's the best pome i have read in a long time

james

its a cool poem.

FELICIA

I LOVE TO READ POETRY BUT IM NOT VERY GOOD AT WRITING IT I TRY BUT IT DOESNT REALLY SOUND SO GOOD! I LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF MY BOYFRIEND AND HOW MUCH I LOVE HIM AND HOW HE HAS CHANGED MY LIFE IN MANY WAYS!

Sandi/Seven

Hey this is a great poem. We can really relate to it. We have been together for over a year but have only actually been together a few times. But we still love eachother and your poem reflects our feelings. Thank you for being a great poet.

Angela

This poem is so good I loved it sooooooooooo much it reminds me of this guy i like but he cant go out wit me till his life is straightend out

Jenn

this poem is so cute it started to almost make me cry,it brang tear to my eye! but if i was to rate this from 1-10, 10 being the hightest i would rate it a *10* for sure!

kristine

i think this poem is great i mean i dnt have a bf but i have a reallie good friend dat makes me feel this way nd i no he lyks me but he afraid to ask me.

Jesikka

I think this poems is very true cause when couples our age get together these are the emotions we feel! Good Goin Girl !

amanda

I love your poem! it fits me and my boyfriend very well, we just started gonig out 2 weeks ago and we rae so in love we have hd so many good memories in the past we hvae been friends for 2 years it sis just the best poem ever

Katt

I really liked your poem. although i dont normally go for such poems. Your poem really portrays the relationship that me and my bf have right now. Its great.

Lity

what a wonderful poem!

Jenni

I think that this poem truley shows what it is ilike to be in love. I don't have the skills to go and write poetry but I do know tanlent and that is just what you have! Keep it up! :-)

Shelley

Great poem. I loved this poem. It moved me and made me think of my bf and I.

sarah

i love your poem, it's touching, i like this guy and he is such a sweet heart but i'm too shy to tell him lolz. :)

Amanda

i loved it, it really reminds me of the love that me and my boyfriend share, how did come up wit that kind of poem, do u have boyfriend? if u do he really has smart and talented girl.

Yvette

i loved ur poem it was the best i read in all i even showed all my friends and sent it to my bf

Nicole

I just wanted to say that your poem was good or really good good job

Britany

I think this poem expressing feelings that more people should show these days. I love it

dorothy

i love this poem

Saddie

I love your poem. It souinds like me and my boyfriend. Thanks

Erika

i Loved your poem i thought it was so cute

Jamie

This poem made me think of my g/f & that makes me really happy, i am glad that i found it

jessica

this poem reminded me of me and my man DeAndre

Diane

that storywas great

Jenna

i'm a poet myself. and your poem was very touching with its words

daniela

IT`S A VERY GOOD POEM AND IF THAT WAS ME I PROBLABLY WOULD HAVE WROTE THE SAME THING IT IS EXELLENT AND I`LL GIVE YOU A 10 THE BEST SCORE

sarah

this poem is great. it fits me and my boyfriend perfectly.

Elizabeth

That poem was the best yet! that really explains me and my boyfriend. i known him for over a year but we just started going out 2. 28. 03 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

jackie

it reminds me of mee and my boyfriend.

Quincy

I think that this poem is very nice and I really like this poem alot because I know this friend named jennfier and she really love this guy I know alot and she talks about him almost every day and they have a good relationship.

jessica

this poems reminds me alot of my boyfriend i have been with him for 3weeks and everything about him is perfect i love him so much! great job!

shawn

i luv this poem it made me feel so good this poem i swear was written fo my boyfriend its so great your a good writer keep up the good work thanks.

Laura

That was an amazing poem! I sent it to my boyfriend cause it's exactly how I feel about him. These were his exact words when he read it: "WOW. man laura you're so kind to me. now i feel like i can ace that math test" So you can see how much it meant! Thanks so much . keep writing, you have a great talent. God Bless!

heather

Ur peom is really good it reminds me of me and boyfriend. soon to be my husand we been datingsince my sophmore year of hight school and be been together for a long time. Keep on writing. you are very good

katie

this poem reminds me of my freind that has fallen in love with me and i am scared to love him back cuz i dont want to hurt him in any way or hurt our freindship

NIza

Hey ur poem is so emotional its strong and deep, this poem will always be in my best love poems list: only love can write these words keep it up.

Lydia

this poem was great!i can definately relate to everything you wrote!i enjoyed it very much!

lil

this poem's sooooooooooo hot

Angel

I can releat 2 this poem couse here u said it all what I would love 2 to say to my boyfriend Why I love so much! Thank u so much!

Lena

It is really cute. I enjoyed it

mandy

This poem truely fits me and my boyfriend 100%! It's very nice! Awesome job Ashley!

trey

very good

Angel

I lvoe this poem so much. It describes exactly how I feel about my boyfriend, even though we haven't been together for very long. He is the world to me, and this poem is perfect to describe that.

steph

this is a great poem. It is so amazing how you wrote what you felt. That poem sounds exactly like me and my boyfriend!

Mandy

i like your poem its great i collect poems but i cant write my own.

Sami

Ashley, your poem is the best thing in the world! Everyday When I am in school and I think of my boyfriend I always think of everything that I love about him and the first thing that I see is he's smile and he's laugh. you're poem made me think of how much I love him and want to spend all my time with him! Thanks Ashley!

Fabi

Your poem is amazing, the way you express y very lovely, this poem really describes the way i feel form my boyfriend. hope you keep on writing like this. good job! and good and deep words!

GINA

ITS A SHORT POEM BUT YET IT TELLS SO MUCH, I THINK ITS BEAUTIFUL

Joe

Your poem touched me in a way that I've never felt before. I love my girlfriend like she's a part of me, but sometimes I find it difficult to compose such words of emotions and love as you do. God has given you a beautiful talent and also the wisdom to use that gift to touch others. Thanks for everything, God bless you(even more!)

Krys

Hey I love it! I can totally relate!

kristine

one day an angel fell from the sky and i ran to were he fell and i met a charming male he was sweet he was kind and i"m so glad that he's mine your poem is thee coolest it reminded me of my boyfriend matt it a 10 all the way!

Kaella

Your poem was so great! I loved it! i can relate so much to this poem! Keep on writing, you have much talent, thank you u helped me alot!

Cynthia

Wow! This is exactly how i feel about my boyfriend! it's so nice to know that someone else knows how it feels to be in love!

Shatae

I feel exactly like that and all I can say is that I hope it never ends.

MARTHA

THAT WAS A NICE POEM AND I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND HOW YOU FEEL. I JUST GOT WITH THIS GUY AND I FEEL EXACTLY THE SAME. READING YOUR WORK MADE ME SMILE A LOT BECAUSE YOU FEEL JUST AS I DO! GREAT WORK AND GOOD JOB!

Jill

This poem is so lovely. It is exactly the way i feel about my boyfriend. It's great, I'm gonna use this, hehe :-P

Lindsey

hello, I read your poem and I thought it was wonderful. I am only 19, but I am getting married in April, and this poem describes the way I feel about my fiance' perfectly. Your words are beautiful and I hope to hear more. Thank you

Sarah

I love your poem. It reminds me so much of me and my bf. Im so glad I found a poem that can express how much I love him. Thanks Ashley!

Diego

Outstanding job with your poem. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Liz

i really enjoyed reading this poem. its how i feel about my love

Jennifer

I love this poem that you wrote Ashley.I have been with this guy for already a year and I love him so much,even though I have broken up with him thousands of times cause of the things I hear from people.I love him soo much and I cant evn remember how I was inmy life without him.I want to be with him forever till the end of time.

raymond

its a nice poem keep practice up

chelsea

i lov it ann it goes along with me and my boyfriend

Valereine

it is a poem sooo true.it tells of about the time i spent with my guy

Kleo

LOL love the ending! very true honey ;)

nicole

I really do like this poem. I just feel in love with a boy name Michael and I am so happy with him, I truly hope we stay together forever.

Leif

I love your poem, it reminds me of my love. :)

QueenX

I love this poem,because it use to describe the love I had for my ex-boyfriend :)

meghan

hey! this is a sweet poem! so kute! =)

mitch

i like the poem,i could relate on it. I print it and send it to my Honey.

Amanda

I love your Poem it's awsome , the words in the poem are what I want to say to my boyfriend . I really , really liked it .

dee

that is an awesome poem!! I luv it!! Great work!! :)

patricia

I love it

Michelle

it was awesome!!

jesse

i thought your poem was great

Tim

I loved this poem so much! Its like it was ment for me in so much ways!

Krystle

This is good girl! Great job...

cordea

that was a good poem i liked it alot... how do u come up wit poes like that sweet... bye cordea

Tyler's

This peom reminded me of the way I feel about my boyfriend and it touched my heart. I LOVE YOU 4-EVER TYLER!!!!!!

Phillip

Very close to what kind of poem I'm looking for(it's great by the way, I can't write poems at all). I would enjoy reading anything else you've written.

scott

:-)

partisan

The best thing I could say about the peom this that it could touch the very depth of the heart for all people who are in love. Because it did me so I sholud know.

stephen

loved your poem i am going to send it to a girl i like and see what happens

gino

this poem is great and made me think alot about me and my girlfriend (just wanted to say that)

cassandra

i really like this poem. keep up the good wook!

rachael

wow this is a really great poem its sooo sweet its esacly how i feel about my boyfriend

alyssa

I love this poem.it describes my boyfriend so much and how much i really do love him! Thanks for writting it!

Taleah

I just love this poem and your other poem loving you loving me. So many poems are about heartache but what about those of us who are happy in love. I think Ashley has a wonderful way with words and I understand completely how she feels.

Frank

This is a very good poem. I was looking for the perfect poem for my girlfriend and I finally found this one and it was perfect. Thank you very much.

amber

verynice

Javier

I really like this poem and I feel that it would be very helpful for me.

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