This is a poem that I wrote for my boyfriend. Even though I'm only 15, he means so much to me, and I hope this is a way for you to show your boyfriend or girlfriend how much they mean to you too.
Stealing my heart was so easy for you
True love was the fantasy only you could make true
Love was transparent like a charcoal steam
You are the one cut out of my dream
You are the one who woke me from sleep
and stole my heart with those blue eyes so sweet
You opened the door with a love so dense
You care not for the cost or expense
You grasped me from darkness not a moment too soon
and displayed a love so pure and perfectly in tune
The light in your soul is impossible to avoid
Hate you banished, fear you destroyed
The day I met you, the loss of love was quenched
My soul, once so dry, was instantly drenched
Please, Neil, you must never forget
All that was destined the day that we met
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This is amazing. It's beautiful. I'm also 15 and I can relate to exactly how you feel. You have a real talent keep that.
pebbles
I loved your poem, I know exactly how you must feel, and I thought it was really great. I liked it very much.
Heather
This is exactly how I feel about my boyfriend Christopher who I love very much thank you for posting this. You are very good, keeep it up and good luck with your love.
latisha
i wrote a letter 2 my boyfriend earlier because he lives a long way away 4rm me and i've just printed off ur poem and im going 2 send that 2! the poem is fantastic. every girl can relate 2 it. it describes just how i feel about my bf jamie. plz write more!
katie
hey you really have sum talent girl. that poem really touched my hart i sent it to my boyfrend n he lovd it aswell, damn u shuld start writing a poem book it wuld be awesome. poems always describe the way u feel bout a person uve just gota pic tha write poem n i pikd this . A PERFECT TEN OUT OF TEN. )
emily
this poem was really good. it really made me think about mi boyfriend
Alyssa
i really like your poem if you have any more u should put them on the site it is deep it is good
Rose
Gah! Tht poem was So AWESOME! I cn't explain it in wrods but. WOW! YOu should write more :)
Stephanie
Erin, you've got some real talent. keep writing! Your poem really touched me, I loved it. Don't stop writing and don't be afraid to get your work out there and noticed!~ Good Luck!~
casey-leigh
your poem was awsome and i really relted to it for i felt that way once
Carlee
omg! This is so sweet! This is the way i feel about my boyfriend David! You have a great talent, keep writing, im gonna remain a fan. And who cares that your 15, im 14 nad feel the same way, teens can feel the love nad passion adults can feel, arent i right? Good job!
Amy
I love this poem its really sweet. it really descrides how i feel about my boyfriend brandon i love him so much
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