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I wrote this poem for my boyfriend, to show him how I first felt when I saw him walk into my house. He got locked up 2 months ago and I miss him very much. So Ryan when you get out and if you read this. This ones for you.

Ryan my heart has been forever changed by the grace of the love you give.

Love

I was struck before the hour
Of a love so sudden and sweet.
Your face shone like a shining star
And made my own heart beat.
My face turned as pale as ever,
My legs refused to walk away
Yet when you looked at me
What could I possibly say?
My life had suddenly seemed
To all just melt away.

Then my blood rushed to my face
And took my sight away.
It seemed like it was midnight
When it was only mid- day
I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start,
They spoke as a chord does from a string
And a sweeter melody it did play.

You seemed to hear my silent voice
And love's appeal to dream
I never saw such a sweet face
As the one that stood before me.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
kara
i loved ur poem, because it was really romantic and it is a perfect poem to sent to ur boyfriend or girlfriend! it is just really awesome! i wish i good write as well as you!
LIZZ
Omg! My bf and i have been together almost 2 1/2 years and he has been in prison for 16 months he gets out in 26 days this made me cry!
jessica
hey, my name is jessica to im uner my boy friends name. i really like the poem a lot its just what i was looking for. my boyfriend is locked up to his been there from july 19th and will be in jail untill september 11 2007 55 days his got 27 more days to go from this day. its not that long but for me i can say it is. i miss him so much hes only 18 we have a 7mon. old and a baby on the way i may self is 19 to young people but we been to gather 4 a long time. i just wanted to say the poem was really good i loved it. he rote me a poem from jail i dident no what to say so thats why im here looking 4 one think u so much
linda
this poem is so sweet. my life is like this. i like this guy but he don't really know. in fact he is going out with someone but i am in love with him. no matter what i still love him. because he is so cute sexy and just so wonderful. i don't know how to explain. but your poem is so beautiful
Sam
i really like this poems. i can relate to it. my boyfriends locked up for about almost a month now. and i miss him so much!
ashiana
jessica that was a wonderful poem. u really understand the meaning of love girl. guess what?my ex boyfriend's name is Ryan!
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