About the Poem

I am a 15 year old who is not very good at poem writing, but one day I was depressed and started writing a poem. When I was finished, a friend who is good at poetry said she liked it. I didn't believe her at first, but then everyone liked it - so here it is.

You Are My Seasons

by Tana Holland

You were my sunshine in the summer,
And my flowers in the Spring,
The one to fill my heart with love,
When no one else could do a thing.

Now the sun's behind the clouds,
And the flowers have gone with a sigh,
You're like the leaves of fall,
That just flutter right on by.

You're like snow in the winter,
Which brightens me up while you're here,
then you are gone, and I wish
You were back to take away these tears.

But as I said in it all,
There are things worth waiting for,
And you are the most important one,
So please come back, once more.

And, please, instead of being snow that melts,
Or flowers which will die,
Please be the pictures of these things,
So I can hold on to you, during all this time.

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29 Visitor Comments

Spieges

That was a great poem. I also was never good at poetry, but now i have written 3 poems for my boyfriend and i have gotten a lot of compliments on them and i hope tp write more in the future. I have never put any of them online though! Keep it up! it was great!

Ted

i loved your poem it makes so much sense everytime my girlfriend leaves to go home or something it feels like i like everything that is why i like this poem

sabrina

WOW!this was a brilliant poem. it was truly meaningful. i do not see how u ever doubted it was great. keep writing!

Tina

0MG 0MG! this . this . --- i luv it! u did a great great job! i can`t even write a poem like this! keep up the good work! ;] bye

pebbles

TO SAY YOUR NOT VERY GOOD AT WRITING POETRY YOU DID A GREAT JOB, AND I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY GOOD.

Lendy

Im 15 too and I think that is the BEST poem I have EVER read in my LIFE. I felt like you were reading my MIND about somebody close to me. You have a GREAT future in Poetry

Danielle

I loved this poem ive been writing for 5yrs now and say that was amazing i write alot to when I`m down . It does help I hope you continue to share

Sam

Hey, you say that because you are 15 you ain't that good at writing poems! Honey, you are! I started when I was 15 too, but in time you get better, cos you leanr all these new words and meanings. Don't worry about it hun. You're doing fine =D

That is a great poem i liked it alot. im lookin forward to some more. and im sorrie that you were depressed.

mandie

this was a wonderful poem cuz i felt that way about a boy so it touched me

Brittany

TO GRADE ON A SCALE 1-10 I WOULD GIVE IT A 10. 10 BECAUSE THIS PROM IS THE BEST OF ALL TIMES ON OF THE 5 STAR MOVIES.

scott

BEAUTIFUL, what else can I say

Wendi

that was a great poem! really touching! i think your friends writing talents have rubbed off on you. =)

Mya

This poem was so great its the best I*ve read so far Keep it up ight bye

Angela

aww that poem is so sweet. i felt the same way when me and my boyfriend were on one of our breaks. he drives me crazy but i love him anyway ill shut up

hector

wow.that was deep!

tiffany

hey i readed ur peom it was good

Andy

This poem is bye-far the best poem i've ever seen. I love it, keep up the good work.

Kylen

great imagery!

lyssa

it was cute and original. i liked it.

chelsee

I think your poem is really good!! I write peorty too and I wish it could be that good. I think you should really keep writing because you have a real talent for it

paige

this is a great poem well written

rachel

this is sweet...i really liked it

Cecilia

I love this poem, it says exactly how i feel about this guy that i like and i think you are a great poet.

Smile

That was one of the sweetest and most precious poems that I think I have ever read, whoever wrote this has TALENT

Jenny

This is a really good poem. It reminds me of my ex-boyfriend.

anthony

will you date me, i will love a cherish you. i love your poem. 15

Kirstin

I love it!!!

Kathleen

Wow! This poem is truly beautiful! Keep up the great work Tana! This poem really touched me...

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