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Blue Or Brown
by Deborah Grijalva
There are two I love;
and they're so different from each other.

One is quiet;
the other just won't shut up!

One has soft brown eyes that are big as can be;
the other has blue eyes that are deep as the sea.

One I've loved for more than a year;
the other has just come into my life.

One knows how I feel;
the other is clueless of the love I have for him.

One I've known for three years;
the other I've just met.

One I'll see for years to come;
the other I may only see for one more month.

One has never once held me in his arms;
the other I never want him to let go.

One I think about once in a while;
the other is always on my mind.

One all my friends know;
the other a few know of.

One it's the same feelings day after day;
the other I've never had these feelings before.

They're both into sports;
but they're different.

They're both as sweet as can be;
but in different ways.

When I'm with one I feel so different;
when I'm with the other I never want to part.

They're so different;
yet the same.

Who's the better one?
Well, you tell me.

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
tiff
ilove it u show go with the other
Kasia
I love this poem. I was in this situation before and i felt exactly the way u describe. I picked the one that made me feel something i never felt b4. the other guy might have been prince charming but the one that picked is the once in a lifetime love
Crystal
I loved this poem! It is the exact same way I feel. There's a blue eyed and a brown eyed guy in my life. It is just the perfect poem to me!
Baby girl
sooooooooooooooooooooooo tru about my life one goes to school with me while the other is home-schooled
amanda
This poem was so true about how things are going for me rigt now! When I read it, I was in shock, just because of how true it was! I couldn't belive it! I have it saved on my computer, so I can go back and look at it whenever I want to;)! It's a great poem!
Nikole
OMG YOU PUT ALL MY THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS INTO WORDS! I have the same problem with these 2 guyz you dont know how much you've helped to at least put my feelings into words! thank you soooo much
princess
im speechless! that same thing is happening to me as i sit here. that was awesum dude. keep it up
kayla
this poem is really great! I am going through just about the same thing right now. Just do what you think is best and if you dont know be friends with both!
krystin
i love your poem! i know exactly how you feel! i have known this guy for 3 years and we have always been really close(he really does have brown eyes) and there is this guy i have known for a coupla months ( he has blue eyes) i love them both and dont know what to do!
simone
hey girl! you're poems are so good! this one is my favorite! i have a guy who i love to death and he knows it and the other one doesn't know it as much. we kinda split i guess you can say. i called him a few days ago and i hope he returns my call!
chick_1787
your poem portrays exactly what im going through. ITS AMAZING! the blue-eyed boy i will always love but the brown-eyed boy im IN love with. God Bless*
Jennifer
Your poem is so awsome I really feel the same way. I just want to thank you for writing this poem and writing what you feel in this poem. Just know that your not the only one that feels this way.
Sarah
Well I thought this poem was awesome because it made me think about my ex-boyfriend Matt. We had been together for over a year and then out of nowhere came this guy Tyler, he was so hott. and talk about blue eyes. but then things started to fall apart with Matt and I and then Tyler left too. So I feel ya!
Jamie
oh wow i felt that EXACT same way for two guys. one with brown eyes and one with deep blue! i went with the new out-going one with blue eyes, but i'm still best buds with the brown eyed one.. it was tough
Angie
this poem tellz my whole life! all i gotta say is that this is one of the best poems ive ever red in my life! good job gurl!
Abby
Hey you have an awsome poem here. I have the same feelings I like two people and it is like the same feelings as in this poem.
Julie
I really liked your poem! I'm confused and don't know what to do also.
Leanna
This poem really hits home in describing exactly how I feel about these two guys...do you believe in a soulmate?... I think that I have two...
Ashley
I love this poem and it totally desribes how I feel!
Angela
Exelent poem. go with the one you never want to part with.
jane
It is hard to choose, but that's life..just don't be too greedy, and you'll know who is the one u want
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