About the Poem
This poem is one of my first. It's basically about how I was feeling when me and my boyfriend was going through bad times. It tells how our relationship just isn't the same after what all happened, happened.
I am 15 and in the 10th grade. I got interested in poetry from reading Maya Angelo. I will admit that most of my poems so far is kind of sorry but by reading some of you guys poetry I have learned some things and got some ideas.
(Austine'a may need to learn more poetic technique, but she could teach us all a thing or two about Truth and insight - Ron)
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|by Austine'a Burrell|
The feelings I feel inside
I can't explain
It's like I still love you
but it don't feel the same.
The memories we had
stays on my mind
How can I forget
I think about them all the time.
I wish we could go back
to how we was before
But it feels like the love we had before
just isn't there anymore.
So many thoughts run through my head
like what kind of future we have ahead
I hope all our problems go away
so we can live happier together forever, everyday
And if by chance our love do end
I hope to God that we can still be friends.