I read your poem and I know how much you miss your Dad, I can't even think of loosing my Dad and I get tears in my eyes. My Dad is still around and i treasure him like gold. You don't know what you have till you loose it.

i really liked the poem my ex stepdad died in april and even tho we did not live with him at the time nor my mom was not married to him at the time. it had a trenmendous impact on me. when he died i relized that he was really special to me he always cared and he never let me down i miss him and sometimes i get really tore up about. i think that its really cool that you can express a deep feeling of loss in poems.

i loved your poem because i can identify myself with it you see im 14 and my dad just died too and suprisingly the same date yours did just that one year later he died from a stroke and i think the moment i read this poem i was like"wow this is something i could of written"

This poem touched my because, my father died when i was 12 years old and i miss him so much. This is a great poem, now i know someone else has lost there father and im not alone.

This was great, it was serius and yet still made you laugh it made my day. My dad is the closer person to me and if he died, I would definantly wan't to see this eveyday!

Wow this is a very deep poem and i'm truely sorry about your daddy even though i don't know u this is a truly great poem!

did ur dad die??? cuz if he did. reading ur profile is making me CRY my eyes out right now. OMG that was SO sad.

I thought this was a very great poem. I give this poem a 10 or whatever it takes to get it to the top.

im sry about your los but at least you had a dad that didnt yell and you 24/7 and was a drunk

I loved ur pome it touch me so much even though my dad is not dead his always in my heart each and every day. I just hope you keep on writing pomes that mean something to you and everyone else.

i lov the poem that you wrote and it realy got my heart because my grandpa died when i was only 15 years old and he was like a dad to me. keep up the good work witing poems.

That was an awesome poem. I can't exactly relate to it but pretty close, I didn't lose my dad but I lost a part of him when he became paralyzed when I was just 13 now I'm 15 and it's very hard on him and me. But he's still my daddy.

i loved your poem i lost one of my best friends so i kina know what your going through

the poem was so inspriring to many people it really touch me

Hi my name is Heather and iam 14 well i havent lost my dad but i can almost relate to the poem. my dad is in the army and every time he goes over to iraq ti fight for our country i get scared that he might die because for days at a time i dont hear from him. thanks erin for reminding me not to give up on my dad.