This poem is about a girl who has lost her best friend. She had tried everything to figure out why they have been fighting, but nothing works. She was always there when she needed to someone just to talk. But I guess when people get older they grow apart, sometimes because of boyfriends or family.
I wrote this poem, because I have this situation in my life right now with my best friend.
I try to be nice, but you just laugh.
I'm not fitting in anymore, what can I do?
You don't realize, but it's starting to hurt.
When everything's just right, it always turns to dirt.
Help me, what am I doing wrong?
I don't understand, I'm there when your not strong.
I try to be happy most of the time, but it's getting harder now,
knowing your friendship isn't mine.
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this poem really relates to me and my best friend. we barley talk and I miss her!
Brittany
Well I like this in some ways, I think you did a wonderful job on this poem, friendship is a part of you teenager lise time. You always need a friend no matter were you are . Why because you need a friend shoulder to cry on and laugh with and cry and do things with. IT TOUCH MY HREAT BRITTANY ANN BAILEY
rae
this 1 was great. i love it.
Ashante
This is happening to me right now i could really comment on this. I t really hurts so bad.
Jess
this poem is reali sweet. it reminds me of my friendship now with all my friends i feel really left out but none of them actually realise how much its hurting me. this poem is fantastic for puttin a friendship problem across carry on the poems good luck x x x x
kyiah
dis poem is how sum one feel but wont tell u
Jessica
Perfect, great poem. Made me rmb about my best friend when I'm eight. Now she has turned into a bossy stuck-up girl with stuck-up friends just because she had become a prefect when we're nine.
Joanne
This was a really good poem. it showed alot of feeling and its really true in alot of cases. i like it
Shannon
IT touched my heart so deeply.
Martha
I Love this poem because the same thing is happening to me with my best friend, and I think I'm going to give it to her. I LOVED IT!
kimberly
i like this poem because i have a friend and i think im loosing him and i dont want to because i love him
Patrice
This poem really touvhed me because I am going thru that situation with me BF right now. We have known each other for four years and this poem really touched me.
desiray
oh I love this poem and every word that you said is so true tahts the way it is with my friends to
Carla
OH CRUD I LOVE YOUR POE IT IS SO TRUE YOU DO LOSE CLOS FRIENDS ONCE YOU GET OLDER OF MOVE ON
lala
i think this poem is soo tru i thank this poem b/c i didn't know how to explain to a person that our friendship isn't the same anymore even though i tried to keep it alive
Tamara
this was Soooo good. i like this poem because i am going through the same thing right now.
Jattie
i liked this poem.
Akanksha
Yeah, this poem is one I could really relate to sometime back, when my friends had just screwed me over for no reason whatsoever. really great.
katy
this sounds like all the stuff that happens all around me and it has me asking what did i do wrong but then i see i did nothing wrong it was that person
Alicia
i really loved this poem. dis is really what im goin through rite now and things aren't jus workin out with me and my friends. thank
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