Send some poems to a friend - the love thought that counts!

Poems for the People   -  Poems by the People

About the Poem

This poem is about that someone that you think you've fallen in love with. You get together, then they just forget about you. After that, sometime later, they decide they want to come back into your life but its too late.

Paradise Pier

Standing on the edge of Paradise
Someone waited too long.
The door has shut, the moment passed,
stupidity will hit soon,
if it hasn’t already.

Do you remember what it looked like?
Do you imagine every day
what it would be like?
Can you imagine your life there?

Standing there in front of me
you waited too long.
My eyes have opened, your chance is gone.
We’ll all feel bad at the end,
if we don’t already

Do you remember what I looked like?
Do you imagine every day
what I’d be like?
Can you imagine your life here?

All the never ending nights
have all ended
with you on one side
and me on the other.
We stood too long
peering into Paradise.

Six FREE things you can do with this poem!

Friend Want to share this poem with a friend? You can email it directly to your friend, with a personal message from you.
Vote If this poem touched you, please take a moment to Vote for the poem and perhaps leave a comment telling us why.
eCard Artistically inclined? You can use this poem in a graphical greeting card, designed by you, and then send it to a special friend.
Print Need a hardcopy? You can send a copy of this poem directly to your printer, without all of the color and graphics.
Author Want to send the author of this poem a private email? If they have maintained a current address with us, we'll send your message for you.
More If you especially appreciated this author, we'll be happy to show you where you can find more of their poems
Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
Chippy
This poem touches my heart and it did so because I am the person that Shauna Keimig is talking about. She's from kansas and i'm from california. We dated, broked up due to miscommunication and drifted apart after our hang out spot was shut down. If you know her, have her email me please.
CRYSTAL
KNOW EXACLTY HOW U FEEL, BEEN THERE AND IT HURT BADLY. GREAT VERSION OF THE FEELING.
Christopher
Been there, done that they say. So do I. This is a magnificent study from an internal point of view. Great! Chris
Igor
You just can't write such a striking poem, if you don't feel exactly like what you are writing... Simply great...
All Visitor Comments on this poem have been posted by people who wanted to let the author know the poem touched their hearts. If you would like to leave a comment of your own, please click the Vote button in the Response Panel above.

Poems for the People   -  Poems by the People