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I recently went through a dramatic experience. I found what I believed to be my soul mate. We shared so much together in such a short amount of time. I'm still not exactly sure what happened, but things changed between us, quickly.

If only I could tell the entire story here, it would mean the world to me that at least one other person has felt what I have felt and gone through. It's been a rough month, yeah that's all it's been, but to help me get through this I tried writing poetry. I love reading it, but am not much of a writer, so I sat down and let all of my feelings out on paper. This has helped me in finding myself. I tried for a poem but this was all I got. (These are only the first and last pages of notes. )

Whirlwind Of Emotions

by Ivy7

I feel like I've lost my mind
You've opened up my heart, and now, now
you try to conceal it all inside
I feel so confused
To be able to catch one piece of debris in this
whirlwind of emotions would answer so much to me
You've taught me a lot about myself, life, love
showing me yourself undisguised
You've made me so vulnerable
It felt so right, nothing should've gone wrong
I know you say it wasn't me
but it's hard to trust anything right now (you at all)
If only I could figure this game out
Congratulations . . . you've tamed a tiger.

I went back and read my notes
WOW!
No one can understand
I really have to help myself
maintain control
Remember
our hearts that feeling of unity
those deep stares
sensitive to the touch
those precious words
(AMAZING SEX! )
I'll never forget you

you are the most
genuine thing
I've had in my life

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Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

sally

Beautiful poem. I wish you could send me the rest of the story or poem because it resembles what is happening to me.

Jodi-ann

i cant express how this poem has made me feel. u are not alone

Krystle

Oh my god you snapped, this poem really describes all the feelings that i hold within. and the title was excelent way to go .

helenhime

I loved your poem i too have thought that i found my soulmate we had bated for 7 months and i really fall in love with him. But than he ended it on may 1st and i am still getting over him. We are trying to start a friendship but it is not going good and i am afraid that i might have end that too. well your poem really touched me and i hope that you keep on writing. You have such a great talent don't ever let it go to waste. Once again great poem.

Tyler

Very Nice Job. I can't tell you how much this reminds me of my life. We share the same pain. Very well said!

DANIKKA

Way to go!

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Whirlwind Of Emotions

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