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On the eve of my innocence's demise, my mind was filled with thoughts of love, like picking baby names and china patterns. Not for a moment did I expect the love of my life was consumed by thoughts of doubt and regret, picking his words of goodbye. For some reason, even though I had no idea what was about to happen to me, this poem flowed from my mind. Here you go.

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Jessie
Wow!
Jessie
Great sentiment and symbolism.
Jessie
This poem touched me in a way I cannot describe in words for I am not as good with them as Sam.
Wendy
Beautiful.

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Looming

Looming in the air is the hint of your cologne.
Tempting, teasing and tickling the essence of me,
Breaking down the doors that you closed when
You walked out.
I feel it hang in the air like the uneasy comfort of your arms.
I taste it on my lips like the frail sincere spring wind.
I hear only the agonizing silence of my wounded heart healing.
I see so clearly that, in the rear view mirror.
I smell you.
Looming in the air is the hint of your cologne,
And what used to be.

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Jessie
Your poem is beautifully written and indredibly deep. It touched me in a way I cannot describe in words, for I am not as well with them as are you.
Pam
This poem is very good and i can feel the emotions that you must have felt when you wrote this poem.
karmen
It touched my soul with the simplicity and innocence.

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