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This poem is about the preciousness of a former relationship that I lost. This poem is about not taking someone you love for granted, because you never know when time will change and they are gone.
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Whitney
Oh my god! That poems expresses the way I feel about this guy I like A LOT!
valerie
i love this poem alot. it makes me think what would i do if i lost my fiance that way.
Tamara
Because I thought this poem was a very great poem.
andrea
oh my god your poem is so nice it made me cry
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Sean |
| by jenawin |
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I wanted to kiss the bundles of stars in your face I wanted to smooth the rough edges of your skin weaved with mine so full of hidden pain and boyish innocence I wanted to melt into your warm white walls I didn't want to leave you the heavens watched us while we slept in those cold January nights angels full of envy above us I suppose they wanted you to become a fleeting blotch of red in my heart I suppose the whispers of fate decided to change us I didn't want to leave you I always tasted the sweetness of your skin as if for the last time with gentle fingers and sleepy eyes we fell in love I always tangled the stars in your hair I always kissed the scars on your hands as if I knew we were going to die the angels have you now the man I loved and I have sorrow and one million pictures of you lodged in my chest |
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breezy
very sad but beautiful~poignant
Siannean
Oh Jenawin. to have loved like that and then lost. May the emptiness he left behind be filled with the light of the love you shared.
Jessica
i loved this poem, i had a boyfriend name sean and he broke up with me because he said he was moveing with his ma. But i dont know if that was the real reason i hope he still loves me.
Brenda
I was really moved by the poem it really made me think I lost my boyfriend to suicide last year and his name was Sean this poem is the best one I have ever looked at and I love poems so keep doing what your doing thanx.
celtic
i was reali touchd by ur poem i lost 2 best friends n i nearli lost a 3rd nai he has read dat it made him think reali wat am i don this for ???? well fanks u savd me from loosin anofr best fiend !
mari
it was from the heart and reminded me of someone i loved and took for granted.
Mark
Breath-taking
Maria
hey, your poem was so sweet, and so beautiful. I have never lost a friend to death, but i did lose my best friend. I guess he simply stopped loving me. and that's why he stopped calling. But I can feel ur loss through ur words. I may not be able to relate exactly, I know some of what you feel.
Cara
I really loved this poem, it moved m deeply and i love the way it relly got the emotion across. Thanks for sharing it with us, i will always rememeber that poem because i have lost someone i love to god too, no one ever really understands unless it happens, but your poem captures the emotion perfectly, it was really great. thanks
rachael
this is so sad i cant imagine losing someone like that u are a very strong person. reading that poem made me think of losing my bf and i would just die!
Latia
i love this poem it was very sad but it felt so real to me i know how it feels to lose the one you love so much but in my case mine didn't die he was just a loser
mike
I want you to know this poem makes me feel i can relate. I never thought i would say this so early, but a friend i really care for is waiting to get results back, he may have cancer in the stomach, thankyou for writing this
lylads
wow. it isnt so much that it touched me imperticular, its just what it reminded me of:my best friend lost her friend named sean, she has a hard time trying to get over him and thats ok she doesnt have to. its not that he died, he just moved on. and as sad as it is to watch my best friend suffer i know that she hurts SO much inside do to the fact that she lost him. and if shes reading this just want to say lylas and im always here for you. thanx for writing this poem, you did an amasing job.
christina
that a was a really good poem
Laycee
I really liked the poem. it was touching, I have a lost love also named Sean. and wow, I wish I could have written something like that about him. thanks. it touched me
jenna
I really loved your poem im a porson who can cry easey and your peom was that wonderful i cryed! i stared crying when i lost my love but in haven he is a having a wonderful time i will just have to wait until i die to see him again Thank You For All The Loved I Needed To Remind Me Of Him!
J
I too have lost a true love to death. i felt relieved when i read this poem. someone else has goen through the same things. it helps to know it.
bree
i understand what it feels like to lose your love and your poem made me understand how much your love ment to you
m aria
your poem touch me deeply. Thanks for sharing it with us.
misty
i think it was very great
colin
Reading your poem touches me alot. evryone has problems but i guest urs is a major one. well, did u leave him or he leave you? but if he left u to heavens then just remember that god took him for a gtood purpose. i believe the above statement so much cuz i've lost my mum and well, the girl in my life now is also not understanding my situation. people who lost someone to god, no one could understand them.
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