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This poem is about the preciousness of a former relationship that I lost. This poem is about not taking someone you love for granted, because you never know when time will change and they are gone.

For Sean

by jenawin

I wanted to
kiss the
bundles of stars
in your face

I wanted to
smooth the
rough edges of your
skin
weaved with mine
so full of
hidden pain
and
boyish innocence

I wanted to
melt into your
warm white walls

I didn't want to leave you

the heavens watched us
while we slept
in those cold
January nights

angels
full of
envy
above us

I suppose they
wanted you
to become
a fleeting blotch
of red
in my heart

I suppose
the whispers of
fate
decided to
change us

I didn't want to leave you

I always tasted the
sweetness
of your skin
as if for the last time

with gentle fingers
and sleepy eyes
we fell in love

I always tangled the
stars in your hair
I always kissed
the scars on your hands

as if I knew
we were going to
die

the angels have
you
now

the man I loved

and I have
sorrow
and
one million pictures of you

lodged in my chest

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Mark

Breath-taking

Maria

hey, your poem was so sweet, and so beautiful. I have never lost a friend to death, but i did lose my best friend. I guess he simply stopped loving me. and that's why he stopped calling. But I can feel ur loss through ur words. I may not be able to relate exactly, I know some of what you feel.

Cara

I really loved this poem, it moved m deeply and i love the way it relly got the emotion across. Thanks for sharing it with us, i will always rememeber that poem because i have lost someone i love to god too, no one ever really understands unless it happens, but your poem captures the emotion perfectly, it was really great. thanks

rachael

this is so sad i cant imagine losing someone like that u are a very strong person. reading that poem made me think of losing my bf and i would just die!

Latia

i love this poem it was very sad but it felt so real to me i know how it feels to lose the one you love so much but in my case mine didn't die he was just a loser

mike

I want you to know this poem makes me feel i can relate. I never thought i would say this so early, but a friend i really care for is waiting to get results back, he may have cancer in the stomach, thankyou for writing this

lylads

wow. it isnt so much that it touched me imperticular, its just what it reminded me of:my best friend lost her friend named sean, she has a hard time trying to get over him and thats ok she doesnt have to. its not that he died, he just moved on. and as sad as it is to watch my best friend suffer i know that she hurts SO much inside do to the fact that she lost him. and if shes reading this just want to say lylas and im always here for you. thanx for writing this poem, you did an amasing job.

christina

that a was a really good poem

Laycee

I really liked the poem. it was touching, I have a lost love also named Sean. and wow, I wish I could have written something like that about him. thanks. it touched me

jenna

I really loved your poem im a porson who can cry easey and your peom was that wonderful i cryed! i stared crying when i lost my love but in haven he is a having a wonderful time i will just have to wait until i die to see him again Thank You For All The Loved I Needed To Remind Me Of Him!

I too have lost a true love to death. i felt relieved when i read this poem. someone else has goen through the same things. it helps to know it.

bree

i understand what it feels like to lose your love and your poem made me understand how much your love ment to you

m aria

your poem touch me deeply. Thanks for sharing it with us.

misty

i think it was very great

misty

i think it was very great

colin

Reading your poem touches me alot. evryone has problems but i guest urs is a major one. well, did u leave him or he leave you? but if he left u to heavens then just remember that god took him for a gtood purpose. i believe the above statement so much cuz i've lost my mum and well, the girl in my life now is also not understanding my situation. people who lost someone to god, no one could understand them.

MARY

good job that was a sad poem

danie

i thought the poem was great it really made me think about my realationship

Donovan

i loved what it said in your poem i felt like if i was you and i had lost my love i dont know what i would do if i was to to lose my love.

Larissa

This Poem really touched my heart, because a few years ago my friend sean took his own life. I felt as if he was there with me as I read it aloud. I was very touched by this poem! Thank you

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