We all have things that we won't let ourselves do. Some won't let themselves cry, love, hope, fear, hate, or have faith.
This poem is partly about me, as all poems in essence are a part of the poet. Another part of the poem is to encourage others to reach out to people who are in pain, before it's too late. Life's short, why not make it sweet? I can guarantee you that somebody needs you.
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I liked the vague description. It is excellent for this style and gives the poem strength. It sounded almost like something I had written. Funny, isn't it, how a poet's mind works?
Patrice
This is a good poem! I enjoyed reading it and it makes me jealous. You said all the words that i wanted to say but just couldn't put them in the right words. Thank you!
meg
o god how true this is. it's amazing how closely this resembles me. i mean, i've been trying but it's hard, ya know? but i just wanted to say. wow.
cecilia
this is a cool poem that relates alot to my life.
Lil T
dis poem really discribes me!
Amber
I like it. there's a simplicity to it but it represents so many things that sometimes are hard say.
juninks
very nicely made and very sad. 10/10
Fairy_In_Shadows
Ohh. I love it!It's so deep and powerfull poem!
allyson
i like this poem because it made me feel good and it shows how i feel right now as i write this comment, thanks to the writer! love all. sanchez
Colleen
This poem seemed like someone wrote it about me, I really related.
Tameema
that was truly beautiful. i understood everything you wrote about. some people see crying as a weakness and fear it, avoid it. very touching
Cheryl
I love this poem good job keep it up!
TIFFANY
THS POEM IS REALLY GREAT. IT HAS A LOT OF MEANING TO IT . IT CAN HELP REALATIONSHIPS. IT SHOWS THAT THERE IS SOME PEOPLE THAT IS STRONG AND THAT COULD HELP THOSE THAT ARE NOT
Jacqui
Beautiful and haunting
Logan
I really liked that poem. It was so deep! Some people wouldn't understand it. But it only means what you make sound like it means.
mariana
i liked this poem alot, it reminded me, of when my best friend died.
Leigha
I loved this poem. maybe because thats the way that i feel. i dont want to show my weakness to any of them. i want to pretend that i'm strong
kassie
this was a really good poem one of the best so far. keep on writin so i can read more of ur poem
T
Touching poet which expresses the feelings many feel, yet go unnoticed by others
cindy
This poem was so simple but it said so much in its simplicity. The last verse was what got to me the most. I sometimes wonder if anyone REALLY sees me and if anyone would notice if i were to fade or even care for that matter. Thank you for this poem.
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